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Let it be – chapter three
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Tina sighed “ Odd but utterly sure that what we did was the right thing for us. Other people might think that it was idiocy but last night it was the right thing for both of us. We wanted to cut through all the crap that we have been facing about getting pregnant – 99 times out of 100 if he had come onto us like that we would have slapped his face. Last night we took a risk. I don’t regret it — you have to get over it honey “
“Open your bag “ Bette said with a smile
Tina obeyed -the bag contained a navy blue velvet box. Tina swallowed anxiously – she opened the box and gasped – it contained a beautiful gold bracelet – it was studded with diamonds
“Oh my God “
“You deserve it – you have been amazing “
Tina flung her arms around Bette and they hugged each other. Bette started crying
“Oh Tina “
“Sshh – its okay sweetie “ Tina kissed Bette on the lips
“I love you – nothing bad is going to happen “
“The others have just arrived “
“Shit “ Bette dried her eyes
“Go to the rest room “
“Put the bracelet in your bag – I don’t want to have to explain ourselves to Alice “
Tina kissed Bette again before she got up
“it will be okay “ she reassured her again
“God I hope so “
Bette got up and had made her way to the washroom before she was spotted by Dana, Alice and Shane. For five minutes she dried her eyes and pulled herself together. Getting a PI to investigate Pete Smith made her feel slightly better – she needed to know what sort of biological father he could be – Bette was also working on a plan to get him away from LA – without him knowing what was happening to him.
When she made her way back to the table she eased in beside Tina
“Hey – what have we done to get a visit from the Porter during Gallery opening hours ?” Alice asked
“I wanted to see you “ Bette replied coolly taking hold of Tina’s hand
“That’s sweet of you Bette – but you shouldn’t say that in front of Tina “
Bette shook her head and looked at Tina. They chatted for a few minutes before Dana nudged Shane and they both looked at the chef that was coming towards them. He was a tall, handsome Greek with very big biceps. When he went away Shane looked at Tina
“Do you think he’s attractive ? “
Tina raised her eyebrow as she paused between eating
“Him – why ? “
“Alice thinks he’s her ideal man “
Dana snorted which she turned into a cough when Alice looked at her
“I just said that he was attractive “
“Do you think he’s attractive Tina ?”
Tina looked at the chef and at Bette before she glanced back at Shane
“No man is more attractive that Bette in my eyes “
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I see and appreciate that Bette is struggling… in a way, she’s kind of brought this on herself. But I was always glad that Tina got over whatever mental block she was having and realised that Marcus Allenwood was just as viable a donor as anyone else. When Bette originally mooted this boy as a potential (but unwitting) donor, it felt like Bette was making a really haphazard decision, just out of desperation and more than anything else, to please Tina. It felt like she was giving up a lot to go with the kid, just because, after Tina’s strop in Foxworthy’s office, this boy A) had a Y chromosome, and B) he was white. I was relieved it didn’t go through originally, and pleased that Tina got over whatever silly mental hurdle she had. But this take on it so far is really interesting, and quite well-done. I can’t see Bette getting over this easily at all, once she realises just what she’s done in the name of love, and what Tina’s allowed in the name of desperation. Post more of this when you can, ally, but I’ll be looking for your other tales as well. Cheers
You’ve got Bette down to a science….yes she is going to tear herself up for a long time about this and it could be the death of their relationship if she can’t get control of it. Not to mention there are a thousand things that the PI could find out and it would backfire…Oh ally, you have left yourself to many different options it’s making my head swim thinking about where you feel like taking us….Just pls be gentle.
good answer tina…
good answer from tina! i’m happy to see another update of this story hope you do it more often :0)
Great chapter… you continue to amaze me! Please continue soon!
Actually, I think that this will save their relationship, not be the death of it. It seems to be a wake-up call to Bette that she needs. Ally: thanks for this story. Lin
I have to disagree with Tina. No matter how you look at it, it was an astonishingly stupid thing to do. NOW they want to have a clue as to who Pete is. NOW they want to know if he’s healthy. So they didn’t get pregnant before, still not a good reason to pick up strangers as a means to start a family. And besides all that, Bette’s bugging out over having witnessed the stupidity that she arranged. Is Tina REALLY sure that if this got her knocked up it will all be worth it? There’s nothing wrong with wanting children, but is it worth sacrificing the relationhip that should be the basis of a familly? Or is the potential offspring more important?
Dear sweet baby jesus on the manger, let Tina not be pregnant by this man and let them find a way to marcus allenwood so that Tina can give birth to Angelica. J/K I love ur story. PPS
I agree with funnyone! In this day and age that was an incredibly stupid high risk to take. Tina is really thinking that the end justifies the means and sometimes it’s not. I don’t see how Bette would ever get over any of this. Gosh Ally this story can go in so many different directions. I can definetly seeing Tina sleeping with him again,behind Bette’s back if she does not get pregnant. Now that would be some DRAMA! OOOO,I love it!!!!
So glad to see Tina taking some action in getting tested…it’s a wonder Bette hasn’t made an appointment yet, as it did cross her mind that this guy may be sick. From Bette’s thoughts, I gather that they didn’t even bother to ask him before they did the deed – very foolish indeed. I pray that neither of them have contracted any diseases. It just always seemed so improbable that Bette, with her personality, would go through with this. And Tina too…as well as she knows Bette, it seems like she would have said no at the last minute just because she knows how this is going to mess with Bette’s head. Come on people!!! There are so many OTHER ways to get sperm…there’s even this 20th century place called…a SPERM BANK! It’s especially easy for people who can go out a buy high end gold & diamond bracelets on a whim, to get their hands on good sperm! Oh, but Ally, I love the way you write them. You’ve got all of them down…even when you wrote Marina interrupting B&T at the counter…”Sorry to interrupt you two” I could hear her voice in my head. Yep, you’ve got a gift Ally! I think the proper response for Tina at the end would have been “No ONE is more attractive than Bette in my eyes”, but I know why she said MAN at this point and time. Thank you Ally!
This is going to drive Bette nuts. I don’t know wheather I want Tina to be pregnant or not. I’m glad you’re writing this & I’m not! PPS!!
When I saw this on the show, I was just amazed that they would think to do this and here again. Just please let him be disease free and let Tina NOT BE PREGNANT BY HIM. Let htem find Marcus and let Tina get over her initial thoughts of her inability to parent a bi-racial child. That is so much crap. Children are a blessing and are to be loved, whatever the race She just has to be that strong alpha woman and tell the world be damned. Love your stories AllyE. PPS
Nice chapter. Since you need to re-test in at least another 6 months for diseases like HIV, the majority of this pregnancy (if Tina is pregnant now) will be clouded with an STD scare. This story could get really dark if you wanted to.
ally, I love that you re following up this s/l with another possiblity – I agree it was dumb dumb dumb but I would say they aren’t the first or last who would take this risk. Of course no one wants to see these two as that dumb but what you are doing with the consequences makes for interesting storytelling. However I too want Angelica and not a child from this sexual moment that would be best left in the past IMO but what will Ally do? that is the question. Write on and surprize us with your vision – can’t wait to see where you go.
i still find it awing that someone would have unprotected sex with a man (espiecially) in this day and age. it would freak me the hell out actually. so i can really understand struggling with those thoughts. thanks.
Hello Ally, Thank you for this delightful update. I do think this is how Bette would react if that night had gone as you suggested. The desire to have a child has become all consumming for Bette and Tina. And it seems at any cost. The harsh light of day can bring many doubts and show the recklessness of the previous night’s events. I love thast Tina knows this and is doing all that she can to demonstrate to Bette how much this meant to her and how she understands these morning after regrets. The truth is that it happened and now the possibility of a child is real and what they both want so Bette has to deal with it. Good to see that Bette is beginning to see how she has neglected Tina recently and is now trying to make amends. Basically, Bette and Tina have an opportunity to rekindle their romance and have a child. That has got to be worth one night of madness. Please continue this loving tale soon. Many, many thanks for taking a road not taken. Your Loyal Fan.
WOW!!!! Ally, I just hope no matter what happens B&T can live through it and stay together. This is slowly going to eat away at Bette for the rest of her life I think. You are telling this story in such a great way. Thank you Ally
Good chapter. Hope he not got any disease or anything that put Tina in risk and hope she not pregnant too. Good that Tina go check up and take test and everything, poor Bette this it driving her more crazy. Please let them be ok and no drama please, thanks! Please post soon, thanks!