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Let it Ride- Chapter 10
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Tina watched as Dana’s cheeks reddened in embarassment and she quickened her pace, clearly hoping that the blonde hadn’t noticed her strange reaction.
Tina caught up easily and said, "Dana, it’s none of my business. I know we’ve only just met, but, is there something you want to talk about? Is there something going on with Alice?"
Dana wheeled around, her look of fury startling Tina. She had never seen the brunette looking anything other than placid.
"You’re right, Tina. It’s none of your business."
She turned on her heel and fled to the showers, feeling miserably guilty for treating Tina so callously and for once again dishonoring Alice by denying any association with her.
Tina watched her go with a look of profound regret. Though her suspicions about Dana were now virtually confirmed, she felt remorse at being so forward. It really wasn’t any of her business and why should Dana trust her anyway? She was a reporter and Dana clearly wanted to be left in the closet. It was no wonder she’d snapped at Tina.
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Helena pulled a backpack over her shoulder and put her sunglasses back over her eyes. The day was a cool one but the sun was still predictably bright. It was California after all. She wore a white button down shirt rolled up at the sleeves and tucked neatly into her tastefully fitted jeans. Her beloved brown boots appeared lovingly scuffed in the bright sunlight but she didn’t care a wink.
She was just coming to a stop beside a kiosk papered with flyers for Alice’s concert when she heard a familiar voice beside her.
Turning, she smiled in surprise at seeing Bette.
The older girl’s eyes had been following Helena’s figure with interest as they walked across campus. She hadn’t planned to stop and chat but seeing Helena at the kiosk offered a perfect chance.
Helena was the first to speak and she let her eyes linger appreciatively over Bette’s form as she said, "You’re looking well today, Bette."
Bette noticed Helena’s frank study of her figure and decided that if the other girl was going to be so bold she might as well return the favor.
Bette grinned at the compliment and said, "Thank you. You’re looking absolutely gorgeous."
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OMG her last words had to be the Six Million Dollar man,,LOL. Frip that was awesome and now I want to know what were in those pills and what does Al have? And Tina is now aware of Dana’s sexualtiy but will she publish it or be a rewl friend and keep it quiet? And last we see that both Bette and Helena are hot and mad about one another,,,love it… I think that Dana should call AL her “Rock N Roll Queen” you know that is the name of the song, its so cool…great chapter Frip.
Six Million Dollar Man? Oh, geez…lol…”I don’t know if I want to slap you or kiss you.” I loved that…so much passion and fury, it’s intoxicating…pps
whooo hooo! i liked this one a lot. helena and bette are great, like their old selves. fantastic, and alice is an unfolding drama i wanna read more of. pps!
You are truly amazing. What a great chapter. Is there something higher than an “A” game? ‘Cause you hit it. Poor Alice! Thank goodness she has close friends who I am sure will rush her to a hospital. I trust you that she will be OK (maybe with a little drama). I hope those pills weren’t too bad — and that she learns her lesson about taking random pills! I have a feeling that Dana is going to feel pretty bad about not being there. They really do complete each other. What a great step for Dana, though, to come out to Tina. I wouldn’t object to any Belena lovin’. I know they aren’t soul mates (like Danish), but, I would like Helena to get some. Oh — and I had those doctors in college! I’m starting to think we may be from the same school. I had a doctor that just had envelopes of pills on his desk that he would randomly hand out. The muscle relaxers were quite nice. Apparently the doctors that were no longer competent for the football team got sent to the clinic. BTW: I’m actually more of a “Mother Goose” than an “Iceman” (hence my login name — actually based on Top Gun — yes, I am that old). Please keep posting. I am addicted to this story.
Thank you for placing the blanket on A while she napped. I guess I was too late to suggest some mega dosage of Vitamin C and Echinesia for her cold before bed. What did you give A, poor A, I hope she did not damage her liver or kidney. I love the way you wrote A’s dialogue. They were sharp & funny. What is going on? Tina’s sick too. Was there a epidemic? It was great to see T being so good to D right away. The exchange between B & H was great and you ended with another unbelievable cliffhanger. How do you do it? See, everyone loves your story and you are posting at “ludicrous speed” (remember “Spaceball”?). Your story is so awesome that I want to respond immediate after each post. Unfortunately I had to go out as soon as I saw the post. All day long I couldn’t wait to come home and read. Thank you fripster!