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Let it Ride- Chapter 10
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Moving her hands back to the piano, Alice started to play and Dana recognized the subject change but she refused to acknowledge it until she’d said her piece.
Gripping Alice’s shoulders gently but insistently, Dana turned her on the bench so that they were facing each other. Determinedly, Dana said forcefully, "I”m serious, Alice. If you start to
feel worse don’t push it. I know you don’t want to cancel and I would fucking hate that for you if it happened. Just don’t do anything stupid. It’s not a crime to get sick."
Alice could see the open concern and affection in Dana’s eyes and though it momentarily stunned her she said quietly, ‘Okay. Yeah, I won’t."
Dana seemed satisfied and leaned over to kiss Alice on top of her head before she went back to collecting her gear. It was quite impressive how much stuff she had accumulated at
Alice’s. Pulling a drawer open, Dana looked down at the familiar and impressive collection of Alice’s musically related t-shirts. Every band from the Stones to Heart was displayed and
Dana sometimes thought that if the building were on fire Alice might risk certain death to save her shirts.
Picking up a couple, she held them close to her face for a moment.
"Hey weirdo, why are you smelling my shirts? I promise they’re clean."
Blushing impossibly hard, Dana whirled around to face her girlfriend and said sheepishly, "No reason. I just love that fabric softener."
Alice looked knowingly superior but simply said, "Me too."
Turning back to the piano, Alice started playing Rocket Man and Dana turned back to her purloined shirts. Truthfully, they did smell of fabric softener but there was also a subtler
aroma. The smell of Alice lingered on them and corny as she knew it was, Dana was still relieved that she could take them with her to wear to sleep.
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Alice sat in the driver’s seat while Dana grabbed her bag and some hanging clothes. They were parked in front of Dana’s dorm and Alice was looking almost ill at the prospect of separating. Berating herself internally for being so sappy and clingy and textbook lesbian, Alice snapped out of it when Dana entered the car again. Everything was outside on the sidewalk and Alice said bravely, "So, this is it. Kick ass and take names, babe. Don’t let those half-rate, goody-two shoes student athlete bitches get you down."
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OMG her last words had to be the Six Million Dollar man,,LOL. Frip that was awesome and now I want to know what were in those pills and what does Al have? And Tina is now aware of Dana’s sexualtiy but will she publish it or be a rewl friend and keep it quiet? And last we see that both Bette and Helena are hot and mad about one another,,,love it… I think that Dana should call AL her “Rock N Roll Queen” you know that is the name of the song, its so cool…great chapter Frip.
Six Million Dollar Man? Oh, geez…lol…”I don’t know if I want to slap you or kiss you.” I loved that…so much passion and fury, it’s intoxicating…pps
whooo hooo! i liked this one a lot. helena and bette are great, like their old selves. fantastic, and alice is an unfolding drama i wanna read more of. pps!
You are truly amazing. What a great chapter. Is there something higher than an “A” game? ‘Cause you hit it. Poor Alice! Thank goodness she has close friends who I am sure will rush her to a hospital. I trust you that she will be OK (maybe with a little drama). I hope those pills weren’t too bad — and that she learns her lesson about taking random pills! I have a feeling that Dana is going to feel pretty bad about not being there. They really do complete each other. What a great step for Dana, though, to come out to Tina. I wouldn’t object to any Belena lovin’. I know they aren’t soul mates (like Danish), but, I would like Helena to get some. Oh — and I had those doctors in college! I’m starting to think we may be from the same school. I had a doctor that just had envelopes of pills on his desk that he would randomly hand out. The muscle relaxers were quite nice. Apparently the doctors that were no longer competent for the football team got sent to the clinic. BTW: I’m actually more of a “Mother Goose” than an “Iceman” (hence my login name — actually based on Top Gun — yes, I am that old). Please keep posting. I am addicted to this story.
Thank you for placing the blanket on A while she napped. I guess I was too late to suggest some mega dosage of Vitamin C and Echinesia for her cold before bed. What did you give A, poor A, I hope she did not damage her liver or kidney. I love the way you wrote A’s dialogue. They were sharp & funny. What is going on? Tina’s sick too. Was there a epidemic? It was great to see T being so good to D right away. The exchange between B & H was great and you ended with another unbelievable cliffhanger. How do you do it? See, everyone loves your story and you are posting at “ludicrous speed” (remember “Spaceball”?). Your story is so awesome that I want to respond immediate after each post. Unfortunately I had to go out as soon as I saw the post. All day long I couldn’t wait to come home and read. Thank you fripster!