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Let it Ride- Chapter 10
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Dana giggled despite the uncomfortable, tight feeling she had in her stomach at leaving Alice. The musician’s face was looking paler than it had hours before and though Dana had no doubt that Alice could take care of herself, or at least Helena would, she still worried that Alice would try to do the show even if she was bleeding from the eyes.
Shaking away the unwanted image, Dana started to lean over and hug Alice but Alice pulled back slightly, saying wretchedly, "I don’t want to get you sick before the tournament, Dane."
Dana sighed heavily. She saw the wisdom in Alice’s decision but it didn’t mean she had to like it. Fuck it, she thought. Leaning over, heedless of Alice’s warning, Dana wrapped the musician in her arms tightly. She let her eyes close and her head rest on Alice’s shoulder and before she knew it, it felt like an hour had passed in her girlfriend’s arms.
Somebody honked behind them and the girls broke away looking amused at their own cheesiness. Blushing fiercely, Dana said seriously as she climbed out, "I’ll miss you."
Alice nodded, a slight smile still on her lips as she returned, "Me too. Do great."
Dana smiled and said, "I’ll see you in two days. Don’t die on me, okay?"
They both laughed at the half-hearted attempt at humor and Alice shrugged, saying, "One never knows with the plague, Dane. See you Sunday."
Dana waved and then turned to pick up her stuff. Alice waited until she was inside the building before she pulled away; shooting the bird at the impatient jackass behind her.
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The Next Day-
Dana climbed on the bus, toting her backpack and the CD player Alice had leant her. Making her way toward the back, keeping her eye open for Harrison, she was surprised to see a vaguely familiar head of blonde hair.
Smiling, Tina caught sight of Dana and patted the empty seat beside her. Shooting an unsure look up the length of the bus, Dana found Harrison seated with a guy named Tim. Her source of guilt removed, Dana dropped happily into the seat by Tina.
"I didn’t know you were coming."
Tina shrugged and laughed, saying, "Neither did I. Jack called me last night and told me he thought it’d be nice to have someone cover the trip."
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OMG her last words had to be the Six Million Dollar man,,LOL. Frip that was awesome and now I want to know what were in those pills and what does Al have? And Tina is now aware of Dana’s sexualtiy but will she publish it or be a rewl friend and keep it quiet? And last we see that both Bette and Helena are hot and mad about one another,,,love it… I think that Dana should call AL her “Rock N Roll Queen” you know that is the name of the song, its so cool…great chapter Frip.
Six Million Dollar Man? Oh, geez…lol…”I don’t know if I want to slap you or kiss you.” I loved that…so much passion and fury, it’s intoxicating…pps
whooo hooo! i liked this one a lot. helena and bette are great, like their old selves. fantastic, and alice is an unfolding drama i wanna read more of. pps!
You are truly amazing. What a great chapter. Is there something higher than an “A” game? ‘Cause you hit it. Poor Alice! Thank goodness she has close friends who I am sure will rush her to a hospital. I trust you that she will be OK (maybe with a little drama). I hope those pills weren’t too bad — and that she learns her lesson about taking random pills! I have a feeling that Dana is going to feel pretty bad about not being there. They really do complete each other. What a great step for Dana, though, to come out to Tina. I wouldn’t object to any Belena lovin’. I know they aren’t soul mates (like Danish), but, I would like Helena to get some. Oh — and I had those doctors in college! I’m starting to think we may be from the same school. I had a doctor that just had envelopes of pills on his desk that he would randomly hand out. The muscle relaxers were quite nice. Apparently the doctors that were no longer competent for the football team got sent to the clinic. BTW: I’m actually more of a “Mother Goose” than an “Iceman” (hence my login name — actually based on Top Gun — yes, I am that old). Please keep posting. I am addicted to this story.
Thank you for placing the blanket on A while she napped. I guess I was too late to suggest some mega dosage of Vitamin C and Echinesia for her cold before bed. What did you give A, poor A, I hope she did not damage her liver or kidney. I love the way you wrote A’s dialogue. They were sharp & funny. What is going on? Tina’s sick too. Was there a epidemic? It was great to see T being so good to D right away. The exchange between B & H was great and you ended with another unbelievable cliffhanger. How do you do it? See, everyone loves your story and you are posting at “ludicrous speed” (remember “Spaceball”?). Your story is so awesome that I want to respond immediate after each post. Unfortunately I had to go out as soon as I saw the post. All day long I couldn’t wait to come home and read. Thank you fripster!