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Let it Ride- Chapter 10
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Dana nodded, wondering aloud, "Do you even like tennis?"
Tina said emphatically, "I do. Very much. And there was the added bonus of getting excused absences from all my classes today."
The tennis player grinned and said in agreement, "That is nice. Definitely one of the perks."
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Alice rolled out of bed and moved like a zombie to the kitchen. Her hair was unusually messy and her mouth felt like someone had stuffed cotton inside it. Opening the refrigerator door, she stood shivering in the doorway as she tried to find anything that looked appetizing.
Groaning, she pulled out a carton of orange juice and drank directly from the bottle.
She heard Helena call out from the lounge, "Alice, darling, are you allright?"
Alice merely grunted in response and barely noticed when Helena entered the kitchen. Alice turned around and Helena gasped, her hand shooting to her heart dramatically.
"Alice, darling, you look ghastly!"
Alice said blandly, "Thanks, Hel. I’m fine. I’ve had worse hangovers."
Helena shuddered, remembering one in particular. "Alice, we need to get you to the physician. I’ll call Mummy and have her make an appointment. We’ll be in and out."
Alice shook her head, taking another swig from the bottle and saying, "No, come on, Helena, I went to the health center this morning. They gave me some prescriptions."
Raising her eyebrow, Helena looked at Alice dubiously. "The health center? Alice, do you think that’s wise? You always say that one could go there with a broken foot and they’d diagnose pregnancy. A lot of quacks. Isn’t that what you say?"
Alice shrugged, unamused at having her words thrown back at her. "Whatever, Helena. A doctor’s a doctor. Now, if you’ll excuse me. I have a hot date with my bed."
Helena stepped out of the way, watching Alice with concern. She feared that Dana’s worries over Alice’s stubborn pride might come to fruition.
Sighing, she turned back to the kitchen and got down the ingredients to make chicken soup.
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The bus had rolled into Los Angeles an hour before and all the girls who had never been there were now being treated to the glorious realities of LA traffic. Tina’s head was resting against the windowpane and she said dazedly, "Is it always like this?"
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OMG her last words had to be the Six Million Dollar man,,LOL. Frip that was awesome and now I want to know what were in those pills and what does Al have? And Tina is now aware of Dana’s sexualtiy but will she publish it or be a rewl friend and keep it quiet? And last we see that both Bette and Helena are hot and mad about one another,,,love it… I think that Dana should call AL her “Rock N Roll Queen” you know that is the name of the song, its so cool…great chapter Frip.
Six Million Dollar Man? Oh, geez…lol…”I don’t know if I want to slap you or kiss you.” I loved that…so much passion and fury, it’s intoxicating…pps
whooo hooo! i liked this one a lot. helena and bette are great, like their old selves. fantastic, and alice is an unfolding drama i wanna read more of. pps!
You are truly amazing. What a great chapter. Is there something higher than an “A” game? ‘Cause you hit it. Poor Alice! Thank goodness she has close friends who I am sure will rush her to a hospital. I trust you that she will be OK (maybe with a little drama). I hope those pills weren’t too bad — and that she learns her lesson about taking random pills! I have a feeling that Dana is going to feel pretty bad about not being there. They really do complete each other. What a great step for Dana, though, to come out to Tina. I wouldn’t object to any Belena lovin’. I know they aren’t soul mates (like Danish), but, I would like Helena to get some. Oh — and I had those doctors in college! I’m starting to think we may be from the same school. I had a doctor that just had envelopes of pills on his desk that he would randomly hand out. The muscle relaxers were quite nice. Apparently the doctors that were no longer competent for the football team got sent to the clinic. BTW: I’m actually more of a “Mother Goose” than an “Iceman” (hence my login name — actually based on Top Gun — yes, I am that old). Please keep posting. I am addicted to this story.
Thank you for placing the blanket on A while she napped. I guess I was too late to suggest some mega dosage of Vitamin C and Echinesia for her cold before bed. What did you give A, poor A, I hope she did not damage her liver or kidney. I love the way you wrote A’s dialogue. They were sharp & funny. What is going on? Tina’s sick too. Was there a epidemic? It was great to see T being so good to D right away. The exchange between B & H was great and you ended with another unbelievable cliffhanger. How do you do it? See, everyone loves your story and you are posting at “ludicrous speed” (remember “Spaceball”?). Your story is so awesome that I want to respond immediate after each post. Unfortunately I had to go out as soon as I saw the post. All day long I couldn’t wait to come home and read. Thank you fripster!