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Let it Ride- Chapter 10
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Jude and Frank exchanged glances vefore Ryan came over and put his hand on Alice’s forehead. "Are you hot?" He looked helpless and Alice had to laugh. Ryan moved his hand a little bit and said, "I just can’t tell. Is my hand hot? Or your face?"
Alice grinned and said, "Easy, mom. I’ll be fine, I promise. I’ll just take it easy in practice tonight and then tomorrow it’ll be balls to the wall. I won’t let you guys down."
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Frank approached Alice after practice, saying with genuine respect, "You were good tonight, Al. Really good."
She wiped her sweatier than normal brow and tried not to shiver as she said, "Thanks, Frankie."
Looking nervous, he glanced around to see if anyone else was looking at them and said quietly, "Listen, Al. If you’re still not feeling well tomorrow, I know a guy that can get some pills that might help."
Seeing her cautious look, he smiled. Alice wasn’t really into the drug scene. Nobody in the A-Okays ever dabbled in anything more serious than pot or booze. He knew Alice had done some coke rarely but not for a long while.
Continuing, he said, "It’s not speed or anything. I think it’s like, some herbal shit or something."
Alice still looked wary but her mind was so exhausted from practice and she was so ready to sleep that she assented tentatively, saying, "Um, bring it just in case. Couldn’t hurt, right?"
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Dana felt wildly powerful. Her first match had ended in a hard-fought victory and she was beaming as she joined her teammates in the sidelines. She saw Tina wave to her excitedly before she bent her head to jot something down.
The tennis player accepted her opponent’s congratulations graciously before her teammates swamped her and they all chatted happily. Their team had won 4 of 5 matches already and the winners were all advancing to the next round.
Tina caught up with Dana on her way to the locker room and she congratulated Dana warmly before they spent a few minutes talking enthusiastically about the promising results.
Dana was so caught up in her own happiness that she didn’t have time to filter her thoughts before saying, "God, I wish Alice could be here."
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OMG her last words had to be the Six Million Dollar man,,LOL. Frip that was awesome and now I want to know what were in those pills and what does Al have? And Tina is now aware of Dana’s sexualtiy but will she publish it or be a rewl friend and keep it quiet? And last we see that both Bette and Helena are hot and mad about one another,,,love it… I think that Dana should call AL her “Rock N Roll Queen” you know that is the name of the song, its so cool…great chapter Frip.
Six Million Dollar Man? Oh, geez…lol…”I don’t know if I want to slap you or kiss you.” I loved that…so much passion and fury, it’s intoxicating…pps
whooo hooo! i liked this one a lot. helena and bette are great, like their old selves. fantastic, and alice is an unfolding drama i wanna read more of. pps!
You are truly amazing. What a great chapter. Is there something higher than an “A” game? ‘Cause you hit it. Poor Alice! Thank goodness she has close friends who I am sure will rush her to a hospital. I trust you that she will be OK (maybe with a little drama). I hope those pills weren’t too bad — and that she learns her lesson about taking random pills! I have a feeling that Dana is going to feel pretty bad about not being there. They really do complete each other. What a great step for Dana, though, to come out to Tina. I wouldn’t object to any Belena lovin’. I know they aren’t soul mates (like Danish), but, I would like Helena to get some. Oh — and I had those doctors in college! I’m starting to think we may be from the same school. I had a doctor that just had envelopes of pills on his desk that he would randomly hand out. The muscle relaxers were quite nice. Apparently the doctors that were no longer competent for the football team got sent to the clinic. BTW: I’m actually more of a “Mother Goose” than an “Iceman” (hence my login name — actually based on Top Gun — yes, I am that old). Please keep posting. I am addicted to this story.
Thank you for placing the blanket on A while she napped. I guess I was too late to suggest some mega dosage of Vitamin C and Echinesia for her cold before bed. What did you give A, poor A, I hope she did not damage her liver or kidney. I love the way you wrote A’s dialogue. They were sharp & funny. What is going on? Tina’s sick too. Was there a epidemic? It was great to see T being so good to D right away. The exchange between B & H was great and you ended with another unbelievable cliffhanger. How do you do it? See, everyone loves your story and you are posting at “ludicrous speed” (remember “Spaceball”?). Your story is so awesome that I want to respond immediate after each post. Unfortunately I had to go out as soon as I saw the post. All day long I couldn’t wait to come home and read. Thank you fripster!