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Let it Ride- Chapter 14
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His wife was silent and Irwin continued evenly, "Listen, sweetheart. Dana’s a big girl. She’s been making good grades and making us proud her whole life. I thought we agreed to let her have a certain amount of autonomy?"
It was Sharon’s turn to sigh as she recognized Irwin’s point. Dana had always been remarkably responsible. A very good girl.
"Maybe she has a new boyfriend, " said Sharon hopefully.
Irwin’s eyes were already back on his report and he said, "Maybe. Sweetheart, I’ve got a meeting in a few minutes. Why don’t I try you again later?"
Sharon said thoughtfully, "Okay, darling. Parents’ Weekend is in a few weeks. We can drive up and check on her ourselves then."
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Dana met Harrison at the practice track after her last class. They easily jogged a few laps to warm up then spent fifteen minutes doing sprints with Harrison playfully teasing Dana all the way.
They both quieted as the sun began to set and they fell into step with one another.
Casting a sidelong glance at Harrison, Dana didn’t fail to recognize how unhappy he seemed. Ironically, he probably thought the same thing about her.
Harrison had never admitted his sexuality to Dana and she had certainly never done anything of the sort in return but there was always that melancholy undercurrent of fear and insecurity to their relationship.
Both were tragically stuck in the closet; too afraid to mention it even to each other.
Dana knew she had made progress. There were a few people in the world now who knew that she was a lesbian. That thought brought another smile to her lips. She frowned though when she realized that technically she’d only ever told two people. The others had simply guessed at her relationship with Alice.
She knew none of them judged her and that also made her heart swell. Yet again, there were doubts. With the exception of Lenore, and
Alice’s bandmates, all of the others were lesbians. Of course they would accept her.
Thinking of Alice turned Dana serious again. She loved the musician so much; with all her heart. Sometimes she felt afraid of the love. She wondered what would happen if she lost it. What would happen if it ended? They were both so young. Maybe Alice would tire of her. Maybe Alice would simply tire of waiting for her.
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Frip you are sure posting fast what your drinking Reed Bull or what??LOL Anyway, Is ee that B&H had thier first fight, to say the least they are competitive and n so manyways that’s great but at the same time it’s not, we shall see what happens next with htem. As for AL and Dane they are perfect for one another…great last two chpaters frip.
aww, your version of Harrison is adorable! I still heart this, although you won’t disclose who Studly Al made out with so long ago. This gets better with every chapter, so keep it up! But take a break every now and then, sheesh. I feel like it’s taking me years between posts and here you are, one or more a day.
They’re are SOOOO CUTE!!!!! I love how Dana wants to rethink the no sex policy. Who could resist the sex wtih A? Or with D? lol Bette and Helena had their first fight eh??? Mmmmm..wondering how things will work out with them..Sharon and Irwin are coming to visit their daughter for Parents’ weekend. I can’t wait to see what will happen when they arrive to the school to see Dana. Will Dana introduced Alice to her parents as a friend or will she keep Alice in the dark?? Well I know you won’t disappoint me with your wonderful creation with our favorite ladies…Thanks again 4 your support with my story..AND keep up the good writing!!! PPS.
When I saw the mentioning of Parents’ Weekend, I cringed…I despise it, almost as much as Sibs and Kids weekend…Helena and Bette are ridiculous, what did they fight over. Probably nothing serious enough to argue about….Alice and Dana are way cute…pps
Just got back from a weeks holiday and was delighted to find all of your updates, which I have just caught up on. Fantastic story and wonderful writing. Danish forever!!!
this story is sooooooo great! i think im adicted lol. thanks for posting regularly, theres always somehing great to read, PPS!
fripter, I read what you wrote to MT in “You”. Don’t you ever “feel ridiculously frivolous”, “Let It Ride” took place when the characters were much younger. You are doing a damn good job. First of all judging by all the comments, you should be proud of yourself. Secondly, LIR is your 1st Danish story and yet you have already captured our full attention. LIR is funny and entertaining. To top everything off, you show great respect in spending time responding to our comments. So there! As for the continuation of your story, if time is not an issue, you can go through year by year. Looking back at my college days, with holidays and vacations before, between and after the two semesters, 4 years went by really quickly. There can be many episodes about A on tour and D playing her tournaments, separating during holidays & vacations and getting back together. At the same time, you can have sub plots of S, B & H’s personal development. With your imagination, I am positive that you will have us laughing through out their college years. There could be many break ups and make ups too. By the time you are done with this, if I am correct, LIR will be the first significant Danish story concentrating on their college years. Back to the present. Thank you for an early post, I think it is better for all our health after all. As for this chapter, Sharon’s was on to D, Oooouch! Hopefully, D would not be crying like she was on the show. That really hurt. While D was worrying about her situation and future, having Harrison there was really supportive. B & G’ fight over the # of pages. That was funny. A said to D, “…about to jump out of the window. And D answered back, ” from boredom or hunger” that whole exchange, I had to pause in the middle of page 3 because I could not stop laughing. fripster, please continue with this awesome sitcom.
I say go for whatever way that’ll make this story longer. It’s been a part of my routine now. . . oh wait! don’t really have one but please… don’t stop this now. I promise I’d still be here till the cows come home. sheesh where’d I get that… yeah another GREAT chapter! lurve this