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Let it Ride- Chapter 14
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The Brit leaned back against the piano and crossed her long legs, saying with a heavy sigh, "Actually, that’s pretty close. I don’t know what it is but Bette and I seem not to back down from any challenges when we’re together. She makes me insanely competitive."
Alice said blandly, "Uh, Hel? You’re kind of insanely competitive anyway."
Helena drew her brows together and said defensively, "I most certainly am not."
Alice frowned skeptically and said, "Who wouldn’t stop playing Nintendo for thirty eight hours straight until she’d beaten Goldeneye?"
Helena blushed and conceded, "Fine. And please don’t share that story with anyone. It makes me sound like an imbecile."
Alice nodded to show her accomodation of Helena’s will and she said sheepishly, "It’s okay. I can be a tad competitive."
Helena’s brow arched and she questioned knowingly, "A tad?"
Alice scowled, saying, "Fine. I hate to lose, okay?"
Helena patted Alice’s thigh and said comfortingly, "There, there. I completely understand. Losing makes me bloody miserable as well."
Alice looked up at Helena and said, "So that’s why the break from Bette? She beat ya?"
Helena stiffened and said thickly, "She may have used her resourcefullness to narrowly trump me. This once."
Alice grinned and this time it was her doing the comforting.
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Dana walked into the loft just after six carrying some takeout and her book bag. Much to her displeasure, she had some studying to catch up on after the action packed weekend.
Alice was lying on the couch with a comically forlorn expression on her face as she plucked at the strings of her guitar.
Seeing Dana, she called out joyfully, "Oh thank God! I was about to jump out the window."
Dana smiled and set the food on the table, questioning in amusement, "From boredom or hunger?"
Alice, relieved to find that Dana’s jealousy over her rendezvous with Hollywood royalty was short-lived, said smoothly, "From missing you, actually."
Dana cracked a smile and said with a laugh, "Good one, baby. So I guess you don’t want this Italian food that I got specifically for you?"
Alice started to reach around her to drop her guitar onto the stand but Dana grabbed it for her, placing a kiss on the top of her head as she went past.
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Frip you are sure posting fast what your drinking Reed Bull or what??LOL Anyway, Is ee that B&H had thier first fight, to say the least they are competitive and n so manyways that’s great but at the same time it’s not, we shall see what happens next with htem. As for AL and Dane they are perfect for one another…great last two chpaters frip.
aww, your version of Harrison is adorable! I still heart this, although you won’t disclose who Studly Al made out with so long ago. This gets better with every chapter, so keep it up! But take a break every now and then, sheesh. I feel like it’s taking me years between posts and here you are, one or more a day.
They’re are SOOOO CUTE!!!!! I love how Dana wants to rethink the no sex policy. Who could resist the sex wtih A? Or with D? lol Bette and Helena had their first fight eh??? Mmmmm..wondering how things will work out with them..Sharon and Irwin are coming to visit their daughter for Parents’ weekend. I can’t wait to see what will happen when they arrive to the school to see Dana. Will Dana introduced Alice to her parents as a friend or will she keep Alice in the dark?? Well I know you won’t disappoint me with your wonderful creation with our favorite ladies…Thanks again 4 your support with my story..AND keep up the good writing!!! PPS.
When I saw the mentioning of Parents’ Weekend, I cringed…I despise it, almost as much as Sibs and Kids weekend…Helena and Bette are ridiculous, what did they fight over. Probably nothing serious enough to argue about….Alice and Dana are way cute…pps
Just got back from a weeks holiday and was delighted to find all of your updates, which I have just caught up on. Fantastic story and wonderful writing. Danish forever!!!
this story is sooooooo great! i think im adicted lol. thanks for posting regularly, theres always somehing great to read, PPS!
fripter, I read what you wrote to MT in “You”. Don’t you ever “feel ridiculously frivolous”, “Let It Ride” took place when the characters were much younger. You are doing a damn good job. First of all judging by all the comments, you should be proud of yourself. Secondly, LIR is your 1st Danish story and yet you have already captured our full attention. LIR is funny and entertaining. To top everything off, you show great respect in spending time responding to our comments. So there! As for the continuation of your story, if time is not an issue, you can go through year by year. Looking back at my college days, with holidays and vacations before, between and after the two semesters, 4 years went by really quickly. There can be many episodes about A on tour and D playing her tournaments, separating during holidays & vacations and getting back together. At the same time, you can have sub plots of S, B & H’s personal development. With your imagination, I am positive that you will have us laughing through out their college years. There could be many break ups and make ups too. By the time you are done with this, if I am correct, LIR will be the first significant Danish story concentrating on their college years. Back to the present. Thank you for an early post, I think it is better for all our health after all. As for this chapter, Sharon’s was on to D, Oooouch! Hopefully, D would not be crying like she was on the show. That really hurt. While D was worrying about her situation and future, having Harrison there was really supportive. B & G’ fight over the # of pages. That was funny. A said to D, “…about to jump out of the window. And D answered back, ” from boredom or hunger” that whole exchange, I had to pause in the middle of page 3 because I could not stop laughing. fripster, please continue with this awesome sitcom.
I say go for whatever way that’ll make this story longer. It’s been a part of my routine now. . . oh wait! don’t really have one but please… don’t stop this now. I promise I’d still be here till the cows come home. sheesh where’d I get that… yeah another GREAT chapter! lurve this