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Let it Ride- Chapter 14
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Alice noisily inhaled the aroma of Italian food and thanked God that Dana wasn’t insisting she eat soup and broth for the next week.
"Well, I want you a hell of a lot more than that food but since I’ve been assured that there will be no sex, I’ll just have to soldier on. Bring on the spaghetti, baby."
Dana moved into the kitchen and got drinks and silverware before moving back to sit comfortably beside Alice and passing out the styrofoam to-go containers.
Alice was making a show of smelling the delicious looking pasta and Dana elbowed her with a grin, saying, "Just start already."
Dana tucked into her own spinach ravioli with gusto. Practice with Harrison had given her a healthy appetite and seeing Alice inhale her food like a starving woman made her genuinely happy.
They were understandably silent as they ate and when they finished, Alice moaned pitifully, "Oh God. I’ll never eat again, Dane!"
Her girlfriend laughed and pulled Alice back against her as she grabbed for the remote and started shifting channels aimlessly.
Alice seemed attracted by a rudimentarily animated cartoon that appeared to have been locked in a time capsule since the seventies but Dana eagerly continued to move through the channels.
They paused for a moment on a movie that looked familiar to Dana and she was prepared to leave it there as Alice had said thoughtfully, "Oh, this is a good one, Dane."
However, just as Dana was setting down the remote a beautiful young woman with long, wavy black hair came onto the screen and Dana heard Alice gasp nervously only to say, "Flip it. Flip it, Dane!"
Dana took a deep breath and said slowly, "It’s cool, Al. I like this movie too."
Alice turned around to peer into her girlfriend’s eyes shyly. Seeing that Dana had apparently told the truth, Alice gave her a grin and said, "Seriously, Dana. This girl’s got nothing on you."
Dana felt herself blushing and cringed slightly at her foolish behavior. Alice loved her. Whatever had happened was long before they had met.
Alice noticed the peaceful look on her girlfriend’s face and moved in stealthily, whispering, "You wanna know something?"
Dana whispered back conspiratorially, "What’s that?"
Leaning over Dana’s lap, with her lips next to Dana’s ear, Alice said truthfully, "You’re a way better kisser."
Dana gulped audibly. Even when recovering from the flu, Alice was insanely arousing to her. Alice continued to drive Dana crazy through mere proximity and Dana realized that she was going to have to rethink the whole no sex policy.
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Frip you are sure posting fast what your drinking Reed Bull or what??LOL Anyway, Is ee that B&H had thier first fight, to say the least they are competitive and n so manyways that’s great but at the same time it’s not, we shall see what happens next with htem. As for AL and Dane they are perfect for one another…great last two chpaters frip.
aww, your version of Harrison is adorable! I still heart this, although you won’t disclose who Studly Al made out with so long ago. This gets better with every chapter, so keep it up! But take a break every now and then, sheesh. I feel like it’s taking me years between posts and here you are, one or more a day.
They’re are SOOOO CUTE!!!!! I love how Dana wants to rethink the no sex policy. Who could resist the sex wtih A? Or with D? lol Bette and Helena had their first fight eh??? Mmmmm..wondering how things will work out with them..Sharon and Irwin are coming to visit their daughter for Parents’ weekend. I can’t wait to see what will happen when they arrive to the school to see Dana. Will Dana introduced Alice to her parents as a friend or will she keep Alice in the dark?? Well I know you won’t disappoint me with your wonderful creation with our favorite ladies…Thanks again 4 your support with my story..AND keep up the good writing!!! PPS.
When I saw the mentioning of Parents’ Weekend, I cringed…I despise it, almost as much as Sibs and Kids weekend…Helena and Bette are ridiculous, what did they fight over. Probably nothing serious enough to argue about….Alice and Dana are way cute…pps
Just got back from a weeks holiday and was delighted to find all of your updates, which I have just caught up on. Fantastic story and wonderful writing. Danish forever!!!
this story is sooooooo great! i think im adicted lol. thanks for posting regularly, theres always somehing great to read, PPS!
fripter, I read what you wrote to MT in “You”. Don’t you ever “feel ridiculously frivolous”, “Let It Ride” took place when the characters were much younger. You are doing a damn good job. First of all judging by all the comments, you should be proud of yourself. Secondly, LIR is your 1st Danish story and yet you have already captured our full attention. LIR is funny and entertaining. To top everything off, you show great respect in spending time responding to our comments. So there! As for the continuation of your story, if time is not an issue, you can go through year by year. Looking back at my college days, with holidays and vacations before, between and after the two semesters, 4 years went by really quickly. There can be many episodes about A on tour and D playing her tournaments, separating during holidays & vacations and getting back together. At the same time, you can have sub plots of S, B & H’s personal development. With your imagination, I am positive that you will have us laughing through out their college years. There could be many break ups and make ups too. By the time you are done with this, if I am correct, LIR will be the first significant Danish story concentrating on their college years. Back to the present. Thank you for an early post, I think it is better for all our health after all. As for this chapter, Sharon’s was on to D, Oooouch! Hopefully, D would not be crying like she was on the show. That really hurt. While D was worrying about her situation and future, having Harrison there was really supportive. B & G’ fight over the # of pages. That was funny. A said to D, “…about to jump out of the window. And D answered back, ” from boredom or hunger” that whole exchange, I had to pause in the middle of page 3 because I could not stop laughing. fripster, please continue with this awesome sitcom.
I say go for whatever way that’ll make this story longer. It’s been a part of my routine now. . . oh wait! don’t really have one but please… don’t stop this now. I promise I’d still be here till the cows come home. sheesh where’d I get that… yeah another GREAT chapter! lurve this