Fan Fiction
This story has been set to a rating of R. Age verification is required to proceed.
Let it Ride- Chapter 4
Login to add story to favorites
(32 votes, average: 3.34 out of 5)You need to be a registered member to rate this post.
Loading ...
Dana’s face lit up on seeing Alice and she rose with the desire to kiss her which ended in an awkwardly adapted hug.
Dana looked conflicted and Alice felt midly hurt herself but she pasted on an encouraging smile and said, "Hey Dane, how was practice?"
Shane looked down at her lobster with mild regret. Dana had said to order anything because her parents were members of the club but now that the little guy was on her plate, bathed in butter, Shane felt kind of remorseful.
Alice caught Shane eyeing the crustacean and she grinned, "Second thoughts, Shaney?"
Shane grunted and Alice rolled her eyes, saying, "You heard about that party tonight?"
Dana looked between Alice and Shane, waiting for an explanation. Shane’s eyebrows shout up mischievously and she said, "I heard. A sorority party."
Alice smirked and turned to Dana, saying, "Her favorite kind."
Alice thought she heard Shane humming the tune to "Girls, Girls, Girls," but she refrained from comment.
Dana said to Alice, "You gonna go?"
Alice looked back squarely at Dana and said, "You want to?"
Dana smiled and grabbed Alice’s hand under the table. "I want to if you want to."
Shane groaned around her lobster and Alice looked over with good-natured annoyance. "Eat your lobster and stop with the Greek chorus."
Dana said mischievously, "Have I ever shown you the cabana, Al?"
Alice pretended to think and asked, " Will there be a cabana boy?"
Dana grimaced and she said, "God, I hope not."
————————————————————————————————————————————-
Alice followed Dana out of the clubhouse and toward the pool. To her surprise there were small cabanas every few feet, offering the guests some privacy and protection from the sun.
Just outside of one of the structures, Dana grabbed her hand and pulled her inside it.
The fell backward onto one of the lounge chairs and Dana just had time to kick the canvas flap closed behind them.
Dana’s voice was husky beside Alice’s ear as she murmured, "I missed you this morning."
Alice smiled at Dana’s admission and confessed her own regret that they hadn’t spent the night together. "I’m sorry I didn’t make it back, Dane. I fell asleep on Lenore’s couch and when I woke up it was already morning."
Dana hushed Alice’s words with her mouth and she sighed as she felt Alice settle on top of her, one knee centered between Dana’s thighs. Dana moaned at the feel of Alice’s denim clad leg against her bare thighs. Her tennis skirt was hiked up rather obscenely and Alice’s free hand was skimming up under her top.
Alice was whispering playfully, "Do you have any idea how adorable you look in that little skirt?"
Dana gasped as Alice nipped at her ear and she said breathily, "Just adorable?"
Alice slid her hand up to cup one of Dana’s breasts for the first time and when Dana moaned almost operatically Alice stifled a laugh and said truthfully, "Fucking hot, then. You have no idea how much I wanted to kiss you when I saw you in there."
Alice was dismayed to feel Dana wriggling out from underneath her. The athlete kept Alice on top of her by sliding her arms around her waist but she’d angled her upper body against the back of the deck chair to look at Alice.
"You should be able to."
Alice watched Dana with a befuddled expression. "I should be able to what?"
Dana sighed forlornly, "Kiss me. Whenever you want. It’s not fair for you to have to hide who you are."
Alice pointed out that Dana was being unfair to herself by saying, "You shouldn’t have to hide either, Dane. I hate that you feel like you have to but- I can wait. I mean, I’m not going to pressure you."
Dana felt tears sting her eyes and she impetuously arched up to kiss Alice soundly. She knew they were a long way from settling the issue. Hell, she couldn’t even imagine coming out to her family. But, Alice was staying. She was going to be with her. And when Dana was ready, she knew Alice would help her.
Comments
Leave a Reply
You must be logged in to post a comment.
frip may I say that I really like this story. I am not really into the Danish couple, even though I liked them, but this is a well done chapter, love it!!!
Okay that last scene was hot and sweet at the same time. I love Shane as she had second thoughts with eating the lobster. Alice’s remark about Helena being The Incredible Hulk was funny. Alice and Dana are f’n hot and adorable in your story. And also, you’re a great writer and never stop writing. PPS.
This story just gets better and better!! Those two are so damn adorable and hot and sexy!! I love what you’re doing with my beloved Danish so just keep it up. And I’ll keep reading.
OMG, you are writing faster than I can read. But I am not complaining that your post twice a day. I am actually elated to be able to read more of your wonderful story. My concern is Danish fiction drought. In late July and early August, there were days when there wasn’t any Danish fics at all. So I thought if you could spread out the posts a bit, at least there will be at least one Danish post a day or 2. Believe me, I too can never have enough Danish. It is just a suggestion. You are the author and please feel free to post whenever. As for this chapter, I absolutely love it. Helena is underrated on the show. I appreciate her genuine friendship with Alice. The show could have elaborate further. Helena is generous, caring, refined and most of all honest. You are right on the dot with those two BBFs. As for Ms. Dana, I was shocked that she made her move on Alice in this chapter. I did not expect Dana to be so forward with Alice in the Cabana. All along I was wondering when they would start making out seriously. I love your humor and the story is simply fantastic. I hope you will go with a happier Danish version. Although a little angst here and there will be all right too. But definitely have a happy ending. We had enough nastiness on the show. Thank you again for writing. I will be waiting for your next post. p.s. It took me over 45 mins to write this comment. I just don’t know how you writers do the things you do. Hats off to all you writers.
there are like 45,000 things i want to say about this. this is so cute, we haven’t had a new danish story in awhile, so i am glad you finally rented the seasons and got the lword bug. but most importantly – i’m glad you decided to write. i love the progression of the story – it is very natural. also the interaction between all of the characters, especially alice and dana is so natural as well. and the story and the dialogue are so very witty and smart. my favorite line was in the 2nd post (i think) with the “you just spelled cosy with an s you dirty brit” or whatever. so funny. i have lots of british friends from work and that is so typical of our conversations. lastly – obviously you are a classic rock fan. love it. and i love all the led zeppelin references. all in all – great job, thanks for posting so many, that are so long, so quickly. dana and alice are super cute and so is this story. i think i will reread it now. post soon – cheers mate.
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO you did it again just left it and i really really want to keep reading! you had this posted before i came home from work and for that i love you!lol i think this story is great and i hope you continue it and post it as quick as you have been!
Danish stories are few and dr between. This is brilliant though. ADx
Danish stories are few and far between. This is brilliant though. ADx
Another great chapter – thanks. I love how you’re portraying both Alice and Dana in this story and I agree their interaction comes over as very natural. As far as which direction to go in, a little angst is fine but please don’t go too far down the angst path. We’ve got reruns going on in the UK at the moment of season 3, so we need lots of happy Danish to counteract the sadness!
nice… I like your story a lot! U get a five star rate! Dana doesn’t seem to shy in this one, and I’m loving it