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Let it Ride- Chapter 4
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Shane continued to watch Dana interestedly as she ran a towel over her neck and face. She knew that Alice and Dana had become very close over the last couple of weeks and though Dana hadn’t said exactly how close, Shane could guess. Still, it wasn’t her place to speculate on certain details of Alice’s personal life that Shane wasn’t that clear on to begin with.
"Did Al try to talk to you about it?"
Dana frowned and Shane shrugged evasively. "Look, Al’s one of my best friends and there’s still a lot I don’t know about her. She’s not exactly secretive, but I think there’s just some stuff that she keeps inside."
Dana understood Shane’s point. Alice was witty and engaging and loving and brave and caring but she wasn’t exactly forthcoming about her feelings. Dana knew Alice cared deeply for her, but Alice hadn’t said it aloud either.
Seeing Dana’s pensive look, Shane said quickly, "Look, I’m not her girlfriend, Dane. There’s stuff she’s not gonna tell me. And I think it’s your job to be there for her, because when she wants to tell you, she will."
Dana smiled and felt grateful for Shane’s words of reassurance. She found it funny that Shane and Helena and even Bette all seemed to think she was Alice’s girlfriend, though she and Alice had never referred to each other in that way.
Dana knew that on some level it was because Alice was trying to keep her distance. She knew Dana was still officially closeted and to Dana’s everlasting gratitude, Alice respected that.
Shane said brusquely, "Are we gonna eat or what? You promised me free grub if I sat through your little workout."
Dana grinned at Shane’s surliness and she said, "Lead the way, weirdo."
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Alice walked inside the club feeling dog tired but hopeful. She felt bad about the night before and was looking to find Dana and ask her out to a movie or something to make it up to her.
Scanning the older, staid lunch crowd with amusement, Alice finally spotted Dana sitting at a table by the window overlooking the golf course. Alice was pleasantly surprised to find Shane, looking extremely out of place, seated there as well.
Alice sauntered over to their table and said, "Hey losers. Mind if I bust up your date? I know Shaney here doesn’t mind a threesome."
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frip may I say that I really like this story. I am not really into the Danish couple, even though I liked them, but this is a well done chapter, love it!!!
Okay that last scene was hot and sweet at the same time. I love Shane as she had second thoughts with eating the lobster. Alice’s remark about Helena being The Incredible Hulk was funny. Alice and Dana are f’n hot and adorable in your story. And also, you’re a great writer and never stop writing. PPS.
This story just gets better and better!! Those two are so damn adorable and hot and sexy!! I love what you’re doing with my beloved Danish so just keep it up. And I’ll keep reading.
OMG, you are writing faster than I can read. But I am not complaining that your post twice a day. I am actually elated to be able to read more of your wonderful story. My concern is Danish fiction drought. In late July and early August, there were days when there wasn’t any Danish fics at all. So I thought if you could spread out the posts a bit, at least there will be at least one Danish post a day or 2. Believe me, I too can never have enough Danish. It is just a suggestion. You are the author and please feel free to post whenever. As for this chapter, I absolutely love it. Helena is underrated on the show. I appreciate her genuine friendship with Alice. The show could have elaborate further. Helena is generous, caring, refined and most of all honest. You are right on the dot with those two BBFs. As for Ms. Dana, I was shocked that she made her move on Alice in this chapter. I did not expect Dana to be so forward with Alice in the Cabana. All along I was wondering when they would start making out seriously. I love your humor and the story is simply fantastic. I hope you will go with a happier Danish version. Although a little angst here and there will be all right too. But definitely have a happy ending. We had enough nastiness on the show. Thank you again for writing. I will be waiting for your next post. p.s. It took me over 45 mins to write this comment. I just don’t know how you writers do the things you do. Hats off to all you writers.
there are like 45,000 things i want to say about this. this is so cute, we haven’t had a new danish story in awhile, so i am glad you finally rented the seasons and got the lword bug. but most importantly – i’m glad you decided to write. i love the progression of the story – it is very natural. also the interaction between all of the characters, especially alice and dana is so natural as well. and the story and the dialogue are so very witty and smart. my favorite line was in the 2nd post (i think) with the “you just spelled cosy with an s you dirty brit” or whatever. so funny. i have lots of british friends from work and that is so typical of our conversations. lastly – obviously you are a classic rock fan. love it. and i love all the led zeppelin references. all in all – great job, thanks for posting so many, that are so long, so quickly. dana and alice are super cute and so is this story. i think i will reread it now. post soon – cheers mate.
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO you did it again just left it and i really really want to keep reading! you had this posted before i came home from work and for that i love you!lol i think this story is great and i hope you continue it and post it as quick as you have been!
Danish stories are few and dr between. This is brilliant though. ADx
Danish stories are few and far between. This is brilliant though. ADx
Another great chapter – thanks. I love how you’re portraying both Alice and Dana in this story and I agree their interaction comes over as very natural. As far as which direction to go in, a little angst is fine but please don’t go too far down the angst path. We’ve got reruns going on in the UK at the moment of season 3, so we need lots of happy Danish to counteract the sadness!
nice… I like your story a lot! U get a five star rate! Dana doesn’t seem to shy in this one, and I’m loving it