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Let it Ride- Chapter 4
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Alice gave her a small smile and said into the phone, "Okay. I’ll go and get her."
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Alice hung up the phone and spent the next few minutes looking for her bra and flip flops. Dana was concerned but hadn’t said anything yet. She didn’t quite know what to say. Frankly, the situation was mystifying.
Alice busied herself with finding her keys and while her back was to Dana she said briefly, "I gotta leave for a while, Dane. I’m sorry we woke you up."
Dana crawled out of the bed and walked up behind Alice carefully. "You want me to go, baby?"
Alice gave Dana a winsome smile over her shoulder and pulled a sweatshirt on over her t-shirt. "Nah, that’d be stupid. Go back to bed, I won’t be long."
Dana didn’t know how to approach this closed-off version of Alice. She said, "Al, is everything okay? Is somebody in your family hurt?"
Alice laughed a little and leaned forward to place a kiss on Dana’s cheek. "It’s just Lenore. She had a little too much to drink. I’ve gotta go get her and take her home."
Dana nodded in understanding though she really couldn’t understand a mother getting into such a state that her teenaged daughter had to come rescue her. She wasn’t judging, Dana just wasn’t raised in a household where that would ever have been a possibility.
"Okay. Well, you’re sure you don’t want some company?"
Alice said quickly, "No, thank you. It’s just gonna be embarassing for everyone involved and I don’t want you to see her that way, okay? Will you go back to sleep?"
Dana smiled lovingly at Alice. She didn’t know many people that would set off in the middle of the night to do God know’s what and still worry that their girlfriend was getting enough sleep.
"Sure. Hurry back, okay?"
Alice kissed her again and said through a laugh, "Why would I stay away?"
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Dana packed her tennis racket into her bag and walked over to where Shane was lounging in the bleachers. Dana watched her for a minute and then questioned, "So tell me about Lenore."
Shane lowered her shades to peer at Dana over the rim. "Why do you ask?"
Dana shrugged and said, "Alice’s brother called last night. Alice didn’t say much about it but it seemed like her mother was – I dunno, wasted or something. It seemed like an occurrence that’s not that uncommon."
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frip may I say that I really like this story. I am not really into the Danish couple, even though I liked them, but this is a well done chapter, love it!!!
Okay that last scene was hot and sweet at the same time. I love Shane as she had second thoughts with eating the lobster. Alice’s remark about Helena being The Incredible Hulk was funny. Alice and Dana are f’n hot and adorable in your story. And also, you’re a great writer and never stop writing. PPS.
This story just gets better and better!! Those two are so damn adorable and hot and sexy!! I love what you’re doing with my beloved Danish so just keep it up. And I’ll keep reading.
OMG, you are writing faster than I can read. But I am not complaining that your post twice a day. I am actually elated to be able to read more of your wonderful story. My concern is Danish fiction drought. In late July and early August, there were days when there wasn’t any Danish fics at all. So I thought if you could spread out the posts a bit, at least there will be at least one Danish post a day or 2. Believe me, I too can never have enough Danish. It is just a suggestion. You are the author and please feel free to post whenever. As for this chapter, I absolutely love it. Helena is underrated on the show. I appreciate her genuine friendship with Alice. The show could have elaborate further. Helena is generous, caring, refined and most of all honest. You are right on the dot with those two BBFs. As for Ms. Dana, I was shocked that she made her move on Alice in this chapter. I did not expect Dana to be so forward with Alice in the Cabana. All along I was wondering when they would start making out seriously. I love your humor and the story is simply fantastic. I hope you will go with a happier Danish version. Although a little angst here and there will be all right too. But definitely have a happy ending. We had enough nastiness on the show. Thank you again for writing. I will be waiting for your next post. p.s. It took me over 45 mins to write this comment. I just don’t know how you writers do the things you do. Hats off to all you writers.
there are like 45,000 things i want to say about this. this is so cute, we haven’t had a new danish story in awhile, so i am glad you finally rented the seasons and got the lword bug. but most importantly – i’m glad you decided to write. i love the progression of the story – it is very natural. also the interaction between all of the characters, especially alice and dana is so natural as well. and the story and the dialogue are so very witty and smart. my favorite line was in the 2nd post (i think) with the “you just spelled cosy with an s you dirty brit” or whatever. so funny. i have lots of british friends from work and that is so typical of our conversations. lastly – obviously you are a classic rock fan. love it. and i love all the led zeppelin references. all in all – great job, thanks for posting so many, that are so long, so quickly. dana and alice are super cute and so is this story. i think i will reread it now. post soon – cheers mate.
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO you did it again just left it and i really really want to keep reading! you had this posted before i came home from work and for that i love you!lol i think this story is great and i hope you continue it and post it as quick as you have been!
Danish stories are few and dr between. This is brilliant though. ADx
Danish stories are few and far between. This is brilliant though. ADx
Another great chapter – thanks. I love how you’re portraying both Alice and Dana in this story and I agree their interaction comes over as very natural. As far as which direction to go in, a little angst is fine but please don’t go too far down the angst path. We’ve got reruns going on in the UK at the moment of season 3, so we need lots of happy Danish to counteract the sadness!
nice… I like your story a lot! U get a five star rate! Dana doesn’t seem to shy in this one, and I’m loving it