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Let it Ride- Chapter 5b
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Helena walked over to them, smiling at her good fortune to run into two of her great friends. She didn’t seemed to surprised to see them there but she did say with a frown, "You’re leaving? But, Alice, I’ve just arrived!"
Alice threw an arm around Helena’s waist, flashed a surreptitious wink at Dana, and said drunkenly, "You’ve just arrived? I thought we talked earlier? In the bathroom. Don’t you remember?"
Dana cottoned on to Alice’s game plan and slurred her own greeting expertly, "Hellcat! Come on, get in the car! Me and Alice are gonna drive down to the beach!"
Helena examined them thoroughly, taking in their slurred words and shamefully uncoordinated movements.
Mildly put out that she wasn’t going to be able to make her date with Carrie, she sighed and then said sternly, "You two should be ashamed of yourselves. I’m quite appalled at this lack of judgement in you, Alice. I’ve come to expect much more from you and this shows stunning immaturity."
Alice tried to combine drunkenness and contrition into one look but the result was merely a twisted smile.
Turning to a now cowering Dana, Helena continued with feeling, "And you, Dana! I’m surprised at this behavior. Taking to the roads in your condition! I ought to throttle you both."
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When they were safely nestled in the backseat and Helena’s attentions were focused on the road, Alice became of aware of Dana’s unflinching, unapologetic gaze.
She turned slightly, keeping her voice to a low whisper as she asked, "What?"
Dana just grinned, squeezed Alice’s hand and said adoringly, "You’re brilliant."
Alice’s smiled deepened and she said seductively, "Wait’ll we get home, then you’ll find out just how brilliant I really am."
Dana squeaked in response, causing Helena to look back suspiciously in the rear view mirror. "If one of you becomes ill in this vehicle I will turn right round and let you bloody well walk home."
Alice stifled a near hysterical laugh and Dana whispered in an anxious tone, "She’s going to kill us when she finds out we faked this to get a ride home just so we could- you know-"
Dana trailed off, unsure of what to call their impending liason. The combination of her guilty expression, wild gesticulation and unmistakable eagerness was simply to much for Alice. She started giggling uncontrollably and as Dana blushed furiously, Helena’s sharp eyes watched them carefully from the front seat.
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Hey fripster, this was a great sexy chapter of Danish. Loved how they played Helena, but really she didnt really deserve this, I like to see her have some fun too,great writing and I can understand trying not to use the same words over and over again!!!
Three words: HOT, HOT & HOT! Wow, I have read plenty Danish NC-17 before, this was impressive. I was amazed how naturally Dana interactd with Alice. Gee I guess there is no need for any schooling when it comes to love. I was glad to see Dana confessed to Alice and took one giant step out of the closet. And Dana deserved her happiness. Back to Helena. I sort of agree with you. It would be good to see Alice having someone like Helena, truly good buddy and resourceful at the same time. However, looking around me, I have seen really long lasting female friendship based on trust, respect, caring and extraordinary generosity without any sexual relationship. I think H & A in the context of the show had demonstrated these qualities. It would make it even more precious to remain this way. God forbid if something would happen to their girlfriends, they would still have each other to fall back to. And thank you for dropping the hint on another story to follow. You are amazingly good at this. I am looking forward to reading any stories you will post. Last but not least, I appreciate you taking the time to comment on our comments.
I feel like an ass for being so lax in my comments recently. I’ll try and justify it by saying that you post insanely fast, and I go to school full time as well as work two jobs. But, I’ve definitely been reading them all, and this is obviously no exception since I’m here. Duh, that was a really stupid thing to say, but I did it anyway. Kinda like my stories. This chapter…how can I ever do it justice with a few words? It was incredible. You made their encounter so sweet and loving that it almost made me cry. I love, love, love this story and if you end it anytime soon I’ll be depressed.
WOW!! That was amazing. I just love those two together. Is Dana gonna return the favor or are you gonna make us wait for it? It doesn’t matter either way because I’m hooked on this fic. And I’m loving how quickly you’re posting. I can’t keep up with the comments. But no complaints here just keep doin what you’re doin. Who needs IC’s L Word when we have your version? Keep it up and post soon.
THAT WAS HOT!!!!! WOW! Are you sure this is your first story?? You are great with it. Danish is hot together! I’m glad that you’re going to catch with my story and thank you for commenting. Anyways, back to your story..Dana and Alice are amazing together. I love the part with Alice finding Shane in the bathroom. I love how they did trick Helena to get them back to the apartment so they can y’know. lol Anyways, come back with a new chapter!!!! PPS.
Woohoo – score for Dana. Hot chapter Fripster, very nice indeed. I like the little observational details you write which together with the believable dialogue give this story really good depth. Oh and I gotta say Helena’s britishness comes through well in her dialogue – ‘throttle you’ is a classic. Looking forward to the next chapter and Dana having her way with Alice?! Thanks for the shout-out too.
Wow – great chapter – hot, but well written with just the right amount of comedby before the really good sex scene – I hope you next chapter gives us Dana recipricatng the act!!. As you can see, Danish is my favourite pairing and you write it great – more please and soon.
your a freak man the way you write this story is just amazing i wish i had your talent and here i was thinking i wouldn’t see another danish writer aggh!! just fabulous ur story makes my afternoon lol so cannot wait till next chap, very nice!! love scence too:)
“Post Game Show”! Priceless!!If you characterize yor writing sometimes as “lazy”, then I would absolutely LOVE to read your work when you ‘put a little effort’ into it :)!! I may not post comments often, but I definitely read Danish fan-fic on a regular basis and want you to know that I am amongst the legion of your fans. Your writing talent and story telling are on par with those other Danish Masters like Muted, Sammy’s Girl and Dreiser, to name a few.
i don’t usually read stories about alice and dana, but i have to say this has been a fun story, and i think you did a great job with this chapter, it was so sweet and loving, great job!!!!!!