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Let it Ride- Chapter 5b
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It took all of Alice’s willpower not to try something while they were in the car. Respect for Helena, and the growing suspicion that Dana would probably not be a fan of fooling around with an audience eventually stayed her hand. So when Helena pulled into the parking garage, with Alice laughing mirthfully at Helena’s British pronunciation, the musician was really very proud of herself. She’d managed to complete the entire twenty minute car trip without laying one paw on Dana.
For her part, the tennis player had noticed Alice’s sudden decorum and wondered what was behind it. She had thought perhaps maybe Alice had gotten sleepy or finally become angry over the altercation at the party and so Dana had resigned herself to a night of frustrated sleep.
However, the moment they were out of the car and Helena had her back turned, Alice’s hand snuck around Dana’s waist, the fingers scraping along the edge of her jeans and just under the waistband. Dana produced another surprised squeak which earned another suspicious glance from the watchful Helena.
Alice had quickly pulled her hand back and it was busy combing through her hair innocently when Helena’s gaze swept in her direction. Alice just smiled beatifically at the both of them and said, "Shall we go up?"
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Helena was standing in the kitchen brooding over whether it was worth it to turn around and go back to the party when Alice grabbed Dana’s hand, bade Helena good night, and quickly exited.
Staring after the two drunkards in dismay, Helena went to the bank of cabinets and reached high up into one, feeling around until her hand clasped a particular bottle. Bringing it down, she smiled upon reading the label and poured herself a generous glass.
It had been a long day. Perhaps it was better this way.
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Alice closed her bedroom door and turned around to find Dana standing just a few inches in front of her. She was watching Alice with an expression that was entirely unfamiliar to the musician. It was hopeful, affectionate, lustful; yet there was something deeper in the gaze that caused Alice’s breath to catch.
Alice, for all the love, committment, loyalty and respect that she showed to her friends without hesitation, was sadly unpracticed at recognizing the look when it was directed at her. She knew that her friends liked her company, and that deep down Lenore cared a great deal for her, but she simply couldn’t accept that people often looked at her with such love that even strangers would notice.
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Hey fripster, this was a great sexy chapter of Danish. Loved how they played Helena, but really she didnt really deserve this, I like to see her have some fun too,great writing and I can understand trying not to use the same words over and over again!!!
Three words: HOT, HOT & HOT! Wow, I have read plenty Danish NC-17 before, this was impressive. I was amazed how naturally Dana interactd with Alice. Gee I guess there is no need for any schooling when it comes to love. I was glad to see Dana confessed to Alice and took one giant step out of the closet. And Dana deserved her happiness. Back to Helena. I sort of agree with you. It would be good to see Alice having someone like Helena, truly good buddy and resourceful at the same time. However, looking around me, I have seen really long lasting female friendship based on trust, respect, caring and extraordinary generosity without any sexual relationship. I think H & A in the context of the show had demonstrated these qualities. It would make it even more precious to remain this way. God forbid if something would happen to their girlfriends, they would still have each other to fall back to. And thank you for dropping the hint on another story to follow. You are amazingly good at this. I am looking forward to reading any stories you will post. Last but not least, I appreciate you taking the time to comment on our comments.
I feel like an ass for being so lax in my comments recently. I’ll try and justify it by saying that you post insanely fast, and I go to school full time as well as work two jobs. But, I’ve definitely been reading them all, and this is obviously no exception since I’m here. Duh, that was a really stupid thing to say, but I did it anyway. Kinda like my stories. This chapter…how can I ever do it justice with a few words? It was incredible. You made their encounter so sweet and loving that it almost made me cry. I love, love, love this story and if you end it anytime soon I’ll be depressed.
WOW!! That was amazing. I just love those two together. Is Dana gonna return the favor or are you gonna make us wait for it? It doesn’t matter either way because I’m hooked on this fic. And I’m loving how quickly you’re posting. I can’t keep up with the comments. But no complaints here just keep doin what you’re doin. Who needs IC’s L Word when we have your version? Keep it up and post soon.
THAT WAS HOT!!!!! WOW! Are you sure this is your first story?? You are great with it. Danish is hot together! I’m glad that you’re going to catch with my story and thank you for commenting. Anyways, back to your story..Dana and Alice are amazing together. I love the part with Alice finding Shane in the bathroom. I love how they did trick Helena to get them back to the apartment so they can y’know. lol Anyways, come back with a new chapter!!!! PPS.
Woohoo – score for Dana. Hot chapter Fripster, very nice indeed. I like the little observational details you write which together with the believable dialogue give this story really good depth. Oh and I gotta say Helena’s britishness comes through well in her dialogue – ‘throttle you’ is a classic. Looking forward to the next chapter and Dana having her way with Alice?! Thanks for the shout-out too.
Wow – great chapter – hot, but well written with just the right amount of comedby before the really good sex scene – I hope you next chapter gives us Dana recipricatng the act!!. As you can see, Danish is my favourite pairing and you write it great – more please and soon.
your a freak man the way you write this story is just amazing i wish i had your talent and here i was thinking i wouldn’t see another danish writer aggh!! just fabulous ur story makes my afternoon lol so cannot wait till next chap, very nice!! love scence too:)
“Post Game Show”! Priceless!!If you characterize yor writing sometimes as “lazy”, then I would absolutely LOVE to read your work when you ‘put a little effort’ into it :)!! I may not post comments often, but I definitely read Danish fan-fic on a regular basis and want you to know that I am amongst the legion of your fans. Your writing talent and story telling are on par with those other Danish Masters like Muted, Sammy’s Girl and Dreiser, to name a few.
i don’t usually read stories about alice and dana, but i have to say this has been a fun story, and i think you did a great job with this chapter, it was so sweet and loving, great job!!!!!!