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Let it Ride- Chapter 5b
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Both hands then worked in artful conjunction to slide the jeans over Dana’s hips. Dana groaned when Alice abandoned her breasts comletely to kneel in front of her.
The jeans were halted mid-thigh as Alice gently slipped Dana out of her shoes one at a time. Then Alice slid the jeans off with such care that Dana could hardly contain the chaotic beating of her heart or the loving way that she swept Alice’s hair from her forehead.
Free of the jeans, Alice placed a hand on Dana’s ankle, catching the tennis player’s eye as she slowly let her hand drift back and forth over Dana’s muscular calf before continuing up at a shockingly slow rate. When she reached the inside of Dana’s knee, Alice leaned forward and placed a kiss there.
Dana watched in awe as Alice literally made love to her. There could be nothing more exquisite than this, thought Dana blissfully. She had the inexplicable urge to weep as she watched the gentle, loving way Alice tended her.
Squeezing Alice’s shoulders, she said desperately quietly, "Alice, come here."
Obeying, Alice stood back up, smirking a little as her knees popped in protest. Dana pulled Alice against her so totally that Alice could feel the outline of Dana’s raised nipples against her chest.
Dana leaned in to kiss Alice, willing to do anything the musician asked if it could even partially repay her for the way she was making Dana feel.
"I want to take your shirt off," she said shyly. Alice nodded and dropped her hands to the hem of her shirt, pulling it up over her head and revealing the smooth, pale skin of her torso.
Dana had seen brief flashes of Alice’s bare skin when she changed or when her shirt rode up as she slept, but nothing could prepare her for seeing the delicate, creamy expanse of skin that stretched luminous over Alice’s body. Her full breasts were hidden in a lacy blue bra and Dana spotted an alluring glimpse of fawn colored freckles that disappeared into the cups. Perhaps the remnant of a long ago sunburn on Alice’s ivory skin.
Dana felt inescapably inarticulate in the face of Alice’s natural beauty. What could she say that could do it any justice. She settled on a low, awed "wow."
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Hey fripster, this was a great sexy chapter of Danish. Loved how they played Helena, but really she didnt really deserve this, I like to see her have some fun too,great writing and I can understand trying not to use the same words over and over again!!!
Three words: HOT, HOT & HOT! Wow, I have read plenty Danish NC-17 before, this was impressive. I was amazed how naturally Dana interactd with Alice. Gee I guess there is no need for any schooling when it comes to love. I was glad to see Dana confessed to Alice and took one giant step out of the closet. And Dana deserved her happiness. Back to Helena. I sort of agree with you. It would be good to see Alice having someone like Helena, truly good buddy and resourceful at the same time. However, looking around me, I have seen really long lasting female friendship based on trust, respect, caring and extraordinary generosity without any sexual relationship. I think H & A in the context of the show had demonstrated these qualities. It would make it even more precious to remain this way. God forbid if something would happen to their girlfriends, they would still have each other to fall back to. And thank you for dropping the hint on another story to follow. You are amazingly good at this. I am looking forward to reading any stories you will post. Last but not least, I appreciate you taking the time to comment on our comments.
I feel like an ass for being so lax in my comments recently. I’ll try and justify it by saying that you post insanely fast, and I go to school full time as well as work two jobs. But, I’ve definitely been reading them all, and this is obviously no exception since I’m here. Duh, that was a really stupid thing to say, but I did it anyway. Kinda like my stories. This chapter…how can I ever do it justice with a few words? It was incredible. You made their encounter so sweet and loving that it almost made me cry. I love, love, love this story and if you end it anytime soon I’ll be depressed.
WOW!! That was amazing. I just love those two together. Is Dana gonna return the favor or are you gonna make us wait for it? It doesn’t matter either way because I’m hooked on this fic. And I’m loving how quickly you’re posting. I can’t keep up with the comments. But no complaints here just keep doin what you’re doin. Who needs IC’s L Word when we have your version? Keep it up and post soon.
THAT WAS HOT!!!!! WOW! Are you sure this is your first story?? You are great with it. Danish is hot together! I’m glad that you’re going to catch with my story and thank you for commenting. Anyways, back to your story..Dana and Alice are amazing together. I love the part with Alice finding Shane in the bathroom. I love how they did trick Helena to get them back to the apartment so they can y’know. lol Anyways, come back with a new chapter!!!! PPS.
Woohoo – score for Dana. Hot chapter Fripster, very nice indeed. I like the little observational details you write which together with the believable dialogue give this story really good depth. Oh and I gotta say Helena’s britishness comes through well in her dialogue – ‘throttle you’ is a classic. Looking forward to the next chapter and Dana having her way with Alice?! Thanks for the shout-out too.
Wow – great chapter – hot, but well written with just the right amount of comedby before the really good sex scene – I hope you next chapter gives us Dana recipricatng the act!!. As you can see, Danish is my favourite pairing and you write it great – more please and soon.
your a freak man the way you write this story is just amazing i wish i had your talent and here i was thinking i wouldn’t see another danish writer aggh!! just fabulous ur story makes my afternoon lol so cannot wait till next chap, very nice!! love scence too:)
“Post Game Show”! Priceless!!If you characterize yor writing sometimes as “lazy”, then I would absolutely LOVE to read your work when you ‘put a little effort’ into it :)!! I may not post comments often, but I definitely read Danish fan-fic on a regular basis and want you to know that I am amongst the legion of your fans. Your writing talent and story telling are on par with those other Danish Masters like Muted, Sammy’s Girl and Dreiser, to name a few.
i don’t usually read stories about alice and dana, but i have to say this has been a fun story, and i think you did a great job with this chapter, it was so sweet and loving, great job!!!!!!