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Let it Ride- Chapter 5b
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Alice saw Dana’s confusion and she grinned, "Translation: I’m with you. Whatever we are, I’m with you. Simple, right?"
Dana cracked her first real smile since being in the car and she said, "Simple. Thank you, Alice."
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Alice was glad that Dana had brought the issue into the open. Truthfully, Dana’s behavior at the party had both thrilled her and frustrated her. She was kind of turned on by Dana’s territorial power play but simultaneously disappointed that she wasn’t comfortable enough to be true to herself.
Still, Alice supposed they could’ve waited until the morning to talk about it. As it was, Dana was watching her with the same expression she’d had a few minutes before and while Alice felt that it was probably a good expression, she kind of wanted to continue where they’d left off.
Gambling on the hope that Dana was still in the mood, she reached forward, hooking her finger into Dana’s belt loop. Tugging lightly, Alice felt Dana moving toward her. There was a collision of hips and denim and then their lower bodies were pressed snugly together. Alice smiled at Dana, pressing her hair back and sliding her other hand around Dana’s waist.
Tilting her head, Alice angled in until she felt the corner of Dana’s mouth. She dropped a gentle kiss there, smiling as she felt Dana’s hands smoothing over her arms.
Dana moved almost imperceptibly to shift her mouth fully onto Alice’s, sighing in pleasure at the feel of their lips meeting.
Alice’s left hand slid underneath Dana’s tank top as her tongue pressed gently forward to the slightly parted crease of Dana’s mouth. Dana invited her in eagerly, shivering as Alice’s warm hand lightly scratched her back and the musician’s long fingers slipped underneath the clasp of her bra.
Dana arched into Alice, a move that positioned their hips closer together. The rasp of denim rubbing up against more denim filled the eerily silent bedroom as the two continued to kiss slowly.
Alice brought both hands slowly down to the hem of Dana’s shirt and she dragged it up past Dana’s belly button so slowly that it seemed a year to Dana.
They separated so that Alice could look into Dana’s heavy-lidded eyes and ask permission to continue.
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Hey fripster, this was a great sexy chapter of Danish. Loved how they played Helena, but really she didnt really deserve this, I like to see her have some fun too,great writing and I can understand trying not to use the same words over and over again!!!
Three words: HOT, HOT & HOT! Wow, I have read plenty Danish NC-17 before, this was impressive. I was amazed how naturally Dana interactd with Alice. Gee I guess there is no need for any schooling when it comes to love. I was glad to see Dana confessed to Alice and took one giant step out of the closet. And Dana deserved her happiness. Back to Helena. I sort of agree with you. It would be good to see Alice having someone like Helena, truly good buddy and resourceful at the same time. However, looking around me, I have seen really long lasting female friendship based on trust, respect, caring and extraordinary generosity without any sexual relationship. I think H & A in the context of the show had demonstrated these qualities. It would make it even more precious to remain this way. God forbid if something would happen to their girlfriends, they would still have each other to fall back to. And thank you for dropping the hint on another story to follow. You are amazingly good at this. I am looking forward to reading any stories you will post. Last but not least, I appreciate you taking the time to comment on our comments.
I feel like an ass for being so lax in my comments recently. I’ll try and justify it by saying that you post insanely fast, and I go to school full time as well as work two jobs. But, I’ve definitely been reading them all, and this is obviously no exception since I’m here. Duh, that was a really stupid thing to say, but I did it anyway. Kinda like my stories. This chapter…how can I ever do it justice with a few words? It was incredible. You made their encounter so sweet and loving that it almost made me cry. I love, love, love this story and if you end it anytime soon I’ll be depressed.
WOW!! That was amazing. I just love those two together. Is Dana gonna return the favor or are you gonna make us wait for it? It doesn’t matter either way because I’m hooked on this fic. And I’m loving how quickly you’re posting. I can’t keep up with the comments. But no complaints here just keep doin what you’re doin. Who needs IC’s L Word when we have your version? Keep it up and post soon.
THAT WAS HOT!!!!! WOW! Are you sure this is your first story?? You are great with it. Danish is hot together! I’m glad that you’re going to catch with my story and thank you for commenting. Anyways, back to your story..Dana and Alice are amazing together. I love the part with Alice finding Shane in the bathroom. I love how they did trick Helena to get them back to the apartment so they can y’know. lol Anyways, come back with a new chapter!!!! PPS.
Woohoo – score for Dana. Hot chapter Fripster, very nice indeed. I like the little observational details you write which together with the believable dialogue give this story really good depth. Oh and I gotta say Helena’s britishness comes through well in her dialogue – ‘throttle you’ is a classic. Looking forward to the next chapter and Dana having her way with Alice?! Thanks for the shout-out too.
Wow – great chapter – hot, but well written with just the right amount of comedby before the really good sex scene – I hope you next chapter gives us Dana recipricatng the act!!. As you can see, Danish is my favourite pairing and you write it great – more please and soon.
your a freak man the way you write this story is just amazing i wish i had your talent and here i was thinking i wouldn’t see another danish writer aggh!! just fabulous ur story makes my afternoon lol so cannot wait till next chap, very nice!! love scence too:)
“Post Game Show”! Priceless!!If you characterize yor writing sometimes as “lazy”, then I would absolutely LOVE to read your work when you ‘put a little effort’ into it :)!! I may not post comments often, but I definitely read Danish fan-fic on a regular basis and want you to know that I am amongst the legion of your fans. Your writing talent and story telling are on par with those other Danish Masters like Muted, Sammy’s Girl and Dreiser, to name a few.
i don’t usually read stories about alice and dana, but i have to say this has been a fun story, and i think you did a great job with this chapter, it was so sweet and loving, great job!!!!!!