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Let it Ride- Chapter 7
"Alice. Oh, my God." Dana’s voice was a hushed confession against her girlfriend’s mouth and Alice felt her heart swell at the urgent note.
Shifting her leg higher, Alice inhaled sharply as she felt Dana shift right back against her. Understanding, Alice tried to create friction by grabbing Dana’s hips and rocking them against her own.
Dana’s eyes closed and a low growl escaped her throat. The sound caused a pleasant but insistent pulse in Alice to quicken.
Pulling her lips away from Dana’s, Alice dropped her mouth to Dana’s neck and the specific point she found deliciously enticing. Her lips lingered near Dana’s ear and Alice whispered back, "What do you want, babe? What can I do?"
Dana moaned, understanding inherently that Alice would do anything she asked. Still, despite the alcohol and the narcotic effect of the musician on her inhibitions, Dana was embarassed to say it aloud.
Tangling her hands in Alice’s hair, Dana tugged softly until unbelievably dark brown eyes met soft blue ones and then she gripped the hand Alice was using to steady herself and without taking her eyes off Alice’s, she guided it to the hem of her skirt.
Lust and understanding mingled in Alice’s shadowy eyes and she pushed Dana’s skirt up until she could see a hint of black lace. Alice grinned at the sight. Dana had been adorably ashamed of what she’d called her boring, grandma panties, and though Alice had assured her that lingerie wasn’t necessary, Dana had seemed to enjoy buying underwear she knew that Alice would find sexy.
So really, thought Alice gleefully, who was she to turn it down?
Dana groaned as Alice slide her finger just under the lining of the panties and let it brush against the tennis player. Alice was particularly gratified when she felt Dana’s hold tighten on her.
Her girlfriend was already slick with arousal and Alice felt an answering need rise within her at the feeling.
Taking her finger out and earning a dull, muffled moan of displeasure as Dana’s head was buried in Alice’s shoulder, Alice moved her fingers to take hold of the elastic waistband of Dana’s panties.
Pulling back then releasing it, it made a resounding pop and Dana slapped Alice’s shoulder not entirely gently.
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(24 votes, average: 3.75 out of 5)
Awww. I absolutely love this. Sorry, I’m pretty much exhausted right now but I wanted to leave you a note to let you know how much I adore this story. You rule.
I was looking for your post, and now you finally post a new chapter. Danish is very smoldering and very sexy! You are very amazing with your writing. You are a great writer. Dana and Alice are so cute together. I wonder if that song that Alice has in her head will be about Dana. That would be cute–a song dedicated to Dana from Alice. Anyways, thanks for writing and please post soon!!!!!!!!
well, I’m horrible at giving comments. But I can say this, you’re that good. I am addicted to Danish and since that’s not possible for next season, I’m addicted to fanfics now. I’m just gonna let the ratings speak for me.
fripster, I did not expect your post until tomorrow. You never seize to amaze me. Happy to hear that you had a great & beef-ful of a weekend in Texas. I suggest that for the rest of the week, you should go on a Dana diet with lots of grains & vegetable which Alice would hate. I swear I thought I was done commenting 1½ an hour ago. In the past 24 hours, I have already written 4 comments (Muted Tempest [4am], Akiracolorblind [9:30am], & TwistedTales [before dinner]) & brteyes [before after dinner] and I am exhausted. But I can never refuse a Danish night cap. All five stories were so incredibly good. I am now officially spoiled. (remembering the early August Danish fanfic drought, this is a delight!) I know the summer is officially over, but all five Danish stories were hotter than ever. Unbelievable!!!! Back to your comment, I can’t agree with you more about ED & LH in their spectacular performance portraying D & A. I am positive that someday, somewhere, someone will recognize their brilliant talent. By the way, don’t worry about the A & L story. Along the way, I have kept a log of all the stories in alphabetical order of the authors. I will look it up when I have a chance. As for this chapter: What is it with the bathroom for these two. Now every time I go to use the restroom in a restaurant or a bar, I cannot stop thinking of them. (I hereby officially admit that I am addicted to Danish.) “I am a prostitute”? “extra ten… separate location, f*ck each other blind” & Helena was hilarious. LMAO. Love that Alice being all romantic with a vase of flower and writing a song because of or for Dana. This story just keeps getting better. Another hat off to your post. Now I think I can finally have an earlier night instead of 5 am.
Heya frip, love Al and Dana they are so cute and Dana is still so shy about asking what she wants, but hopefully it will change soon but not that much. As for my dear Helena she needs some luvin she is an absolute wreck of having noone in her life,,and mum’s not most likely pay for a ransom for her,,,anyway loved the chapter frip :)
have been remiss in not commenting lately, but i have to say that this story is just perfect. keep up the good work!