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Let it Ride- Chapter 7
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"Fuck. Alice!"
Alice feigned confusion and said goofily, "I thought it was the other way around, baby."
Dana surprised Alice when she enclosed the musician’s wrist in her grasp and practically shoved her hand into her panties.
"Please, Alice."
Alice leaned down so that her own mouth was back at Dana’s neck and she muttered humorously, "Woman of few words, huh Dane?"
But Dana was already moaning at the feeling of Alice’s fingers slipping inside her criminally slowly. The musician began to thrust assuredly and Dana found her hips rocking to meet the questing fingers.
The tennis player’s eyes were screwed shut tightly at the motion and her arms were locked around Alice as they continued to move together.
Dana’s body was a confusing coil of energy around Alice. Simultaneously more at ease and less so than she was around anybody else, Dana thrived on the excitement of being near the musician. She knew that her gawky, clumsy limbs were at home in two places; the tennis court being one. Anywhere near Alice being the other.
Being near Alice caused a baffling landslide of emotions that Dana was sure she would never be able to categorize completely. There was desire; Dana was completely and painfully aware of the desire she felt for Alice. There was affection and regard and easiness and respect. Dana was beginning to suspect that there was something running much deeper as well. Something she’d yet to give name to.
Something she felt wasn’t fair to Alice. At least not until she could share her whole life with Alice. Every part.
Clinging to Alice, Dana moaned as Alice brought her closer to her climax.
Alice’s voice was husky as her thumb circled Dana’s clit slowly, "Let it go, Dana. Come on, babe."
Dana’s voice was escaping as a continuous, ragged moan as Alice hastened to finish her.
Alice crooked her fingers and with a particularly talented drag in conjunction with a purposeful swipe over Dana’s clit, the tennis player came with a desperate growl. Her face was buried in the musician’s shoulder and she was surprised to find hot, stinging tears burning her lids as Alice continued to move inside of her; one arm wrapped steadyingly around Dana’s waist.
A final movement of her fingers had Dana’s hips bucking forward toward Alice again and then Alice was pulling them out and smoothing Dana’s skirt carefully.
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Awww. I absolutely love this. Sorry, I’m pretty much exhausted right now but I wanted to leave you a note to let you know how much I adore this story. You rule.
I was looking for your post, and now you finally post a new chapter. Danish is very smoldering and very sexy! You are very amazing with your writing. You are a great writer. Dana and Alice are so cute together. I wonder if that song that Alice has in her head will be about Dana. That would be cute–a song dedicated to Dana from Alice. Anyways, thanks for writing and please post soon!!!!!!!!
well, I’m horrible at giving comments. But I can say this, you’re that good. I am addicted to Danish and since that’s not possible for next season, I’m addicted to fanfics now. I’m just gonna let the ratings speak for me.
fripster, I did not expect your post until tomorrow. You never seize to amaze me. Happy to hear that you had a great & beef-ful of a weekend in Texas. I suggest that for the rest of the week, you should go on a Dana diet with lots of grains & vegetable which Alice would hate. I swear I thought I was done commenting 1½ an hour ago. In the past 24 hours, I have already written 4 comments (Muted Tempest [4am], Akiracolorblind [9:30am], & TwistedTales [before dinner]) & brteyes [before after dinner] and I am exhausted. But I can never refuse a Danish night cap. All five stories were so incredibly good. I am now officially spoiled. (remembering the early August Danish fanfic drought, this is a delight!) I know the summer is officially over, but all five Danish stories were hotter than ever. Unbelievable!!!! Back to your comment, I can’t agree with you more about ED & LH in their spectacular performance portraying D & A. I am positive that someday, somewhere, someone will recognize their brilliant talent. By the way, don’t worry about the A & L story. Along the way, I have kept a log of all the stories in alphabetical order of the authors. I will look it up when I have a chance. As for this chapter: What is it with the bathroom for these two. Now every time I go to use the restroom in a restaurant or a bar, I cannot stop thinking of them. (I hereby officially admit that I am addicted to Danish.) “I am a prostitute”? “extra ten… separate location, f*ck each other blind” & Helena was hilarious. LMAO. Love that Alice being all romantic with a vase of flower and writing a song because of or for Dana. This story just keeps getting better. Another hat off to your post. Now I think I can finally have an earlier night instead of 5 am.
Heya frip, love Al and Dana they are so cute and Dana is still so shy about asking what she wants, but hopefully it will change soon but not that much. As for my dear Helena she needs some luvin she is an absolute wreck of having noone in her life,,and mum’s not most likely pay for a ransom for her,,,anyway loved the chapter frip :)
have been remiss in not commenting lately, but i have to say that this story is just perfect. keep up the good work!