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Let it Ride- Chapter 7
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Alice was equally shocked to feel the warm, dampness against her neck.
Soothingly, she said quietly, "Baby, are you okay?"
Dana heard her own muffled laughter and she placed a gentle, loving kiss against the moist spot at the musician’s neck.
"I’m amazing. You’re so amazing, honey. That was incredible."
She pulled back to find Alice grinning at her confidently. "I am. Well, all in a day’s work."
Dana feigned confusion and said, "Wait, I thought you were a musician."
Alice attempted her own befuddled look and said, "What? No, no. I’m a prostitute. I didn’t tell you that?"
Dana frowned, "No, you didn’t. I don’t know if I can afford you. And I had big plans for the rest of the night."
Alice quirked her eyebrows and said generously, "Big plans? Maybe we can work something out."
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It had taken thirty minutes before everyone was ready to leave. A deeply disturbed Alice had had to forcibly move Shane and Helena apart as Dana had looked on laughing hysterically.
The cab finally arrived and Alice had put Shane into one with Lenore, giving the cabby directions first to the dorm then to Lenore’s hotel. She’d added an extra ten to make sure that they both got to their separate locations.
She didn’t trust either one as far as she could throw them.
Finally, the three remaining girls had climbed into a second taxi to take the short ride back to the loft.
Helena was comfortably ensconced between Alice and Dana, her head resting alternately on either of their shoulders as she lamented her recent lack of love life.
"I’m being bloody serious about this, Alice, " she was saying earnestly. "It’s like a drought. When I’m not pounding away like a lunatic at that damned piano or burying my nose in a book to please Mummy, I’m at the flat listening to you two fuck each other blind."
Dana’s face reddened so intensely that she resembled a sunburned tourist as Alice’s eyebrows raised so high they nearly disappeared into her hairline.
Blundering on, Helena said, "And it’s not as though I try!" Leaning forward to address the driver, she said animatedly, "They can be surprisingly noisy, believe you me."
Alice caught the salacious look the driver was casting between them and she scowled until he turned back to the road.
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Awww. I absolutely love this. Sorry, I’m pretty much exhausted right now but I wanted to leave you a note to let you know how much I adore this story. You rule.
I was looking for your post, and now you finally post a new chapter. Danish is very smoldering and very sexy! You are very amazing with your writing. You are a great writer. Dana and Alice are so cute together. I wonder if that song that Alice has in her head will be about Dana. That would be cute–a song dedicated to Dana from Alice. Anyways, thanks for writing and please post soon!!!!!!!!
well, I’m horrible at giving comments. But I can say this, you’re that good. I am addicted to Danish and since that’s not possible for next season, I’m addicted to fanfics now. I’m just gonna let the ratings speak for me.
fripster, I did not expect your post until tomorrow. You never seize to amaze me. Happy to hear that you had a great & beef-ful of a weekend in Texas. I suggest that for the rest of the week, you should go on a Dana diet with lots of grains & vegetable which Alice would hate. I swear I thought I was done commenting 1½ an hour ago. In the past 24 hours, I have already written 4 comments (Muted Tempest [4am], Akiracolorblind [9:30am], & TwistedTales [before dinner]) & brteyes [before after dinner] and I am exhausted. But I can never refuse a Danish night cap. All five stories were so incredibly good. I am now officially spoiled. (remembering the early August Danish fanfic drought, this is a delight!) I know the summer is officially over, but all five Danish stories were hotter than ever. Unbelievable!!!! Back to your comment, I can’t agree with you more about ED & LH in their spectacular performance portraying D & A. I am positive that someday, somewhere, someone will recognize their brilliant talent. By the way, don’t worry about the A & L story. Along the way, I have kept a log of all the stories in alphabetical order of the authors. I will look it up when I have a chance. As for this chapter: What is it with the bathroom for these two. Now every time I go to use the restroom in a restaurant or a bar, I cannot stop thinking of them. (I hereby officially admit that I am addicted to Danish.) “I am a prostitute”? “extra ten… separate location, f*ck each other blind” & Helena was hilarious. LMAO. Love that Alice being all romantic with a vase of flower and writing a song because of or for Dana. This story just keeps getting better. Another hat off to your post. Now I think I can finally have an earlier night instead of 5 am.
Heya frip, love Al and Dana they are so cute and Dana is still so shy about asking what she wants, but hopefully it will change soon but not that much. As for my dear Helena she needs some luvin she is an absolute wreck of having noone in her life,,and mum’s not most likely pay for a ransom for her,,,anyway loved the chapter frip :)
have been remiss in not commenting lately, but i have to say that this story is just perfect. keep up the good work!