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“No. Quite the opposite.”
“You’re feeling…warm?” Tina asked. She moved to trace her index finger over the lines in Bette’s palm, now turned up on her lap.
Bette pulled her hand away.
“A little too warm,” she smiled. “And Angelica…”
“It’s okay Bette,” Tina said. “Can’t blame a girl for trying. In addition to loving you, I lust for you. I haven’t forgotten what it’s like to be with you.”
“It was always…amazing with you,” Bette said.
Tina sat back and leaned onto the back of the couch.
Something occurred to Bette as she saw Tina lean back.
“Is that why you want me now? Because you can’t have me?” Bette asked.
“Bette, I want you because you are fucking amazing in bed,” Tina said bluntly. “And I want to be with you in a relationship, because of the potential of a happy fulfilling life together. How’s that for cards on the table?”
“Well, I did ask,” Bette smiled.
“And I love feeling you react to what I can do for you,” Tina teased.
“Tina…” Bette admonished.
“I know, you’re not ready,” Tina sighed. “And I do understand. I’m sorry.”
“Was I this relentless when you and I were first together?”
“You were way more patient than I am,” Tina laughed. “I hope you’re not going to make me wait that long!”
“A little build up isn’t bad is it?” It was Bette’s turn to tease.
“Are you saying it’s inevitable?”
“If it’s going to happen, then why not now?” Bette theorized. She dismissed the notion. “So no, not necessarily.”
“Would you consider sharing a bed with me tonight?”
Bette raised an eyebrow in silent question.
“Just to sleep. Promise. I won’t try anything.”
“I’d love to share a bed with you,” Bette said. “But what about Angelica?”
“She went to bed so late, she’ll be out until eight in the morning,” Tina assured her. “You’ll be at home crouched in front of your computer by then I’m sure.”
“Okay,” Bette agreed. “But to be honest, I was kind of hoping for a goodnight kiss tonight, and I don’t think we should do that in bed.
“Right here then,” Tina suggested.
“And not too…you know,” Bette’s voice trailed off.
“Fervent.”
“Right,” Bette agreed. “It would be different if I was to kiss you good night and go home, but…”
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Oh my God!
I am so happy that you are back!
I love your stories, i read them more than once over the years.
But i don’t have time to reread this story, have to work very early in the morning , but i hope to read it when i am back tomorrow. I am looking forward to it!
You are a incredible writer and i do hope that you will find the time to write more! For now, thank you again for returning!
I was so happy to see your name again, I love your stories, off to read now,, but please continue to post more stories.,, please post soon.
Thanks for the shoutout! You’re an incredible writer with a natural style that pulls the reader in and makes one sorry when the chapter/story ends. Your writing demands rereading many times. It’s just that enjoyable. :-)
Brilliant, thanks so much for this. 62 Pages of pleasure.
Enjoy your stories which are good to read more than once.
Look forward to keeping on swimming :-)
I love this story, as I always enjoy reading your work!
Loved it, thanks so much. You are such a good writer!
Glad you are back,I love your stories.
I certainly remember this story and I love it more now. Thanks for updating the language so the profane language is present. It’s not that I am a complete potty mouth but let’s be realistic. Several of the stories that have transferred over have blanks or asterisks instead of the actual language. In my opinion, when this happens, the stories lose some of their authenticity and the characters lose their edge. I realize that it takes effort to fill in the blanks especially in longer stories. So thanks for doing that.
I find stories harder to read with the asterisks inserted…it’s like a jolt of reality interfering with my escapism. I had to get to the task of editing them out. I do plan to work on more stories; some easier than others because of where the files are. This story was first posted almost 10 (!) years ago, so the digital file was more challenging to retrieve. I’m not much for cursing, but the occasional well placed F-bomb can really get someone’s attention.
@JKS I can’t believe this story is almost 10 years old! It reads now as fresh as it did then. I really love your stories because they are so well written with realism, humor, sarcasm and authenticity. It also helps that for us ORs (Original Readers), it follows canon for the characters and storylines. :-)
WOW, what a fabulous surprise seeing you back here, JKS! So glad you found your way back here and have even edited! Let me know if you have any questions or need any help!
Wonderful story. Thanks for sharing again!
Thanks for your effort of editing and for giving us this wonderful story again.
It’s still as beautiful as I remember it from reading your story for the first time a few years ago.
Finally I managed to finish reading!
I was slowly reading this story.
And I confess that it was a great trip.
Pretty and wonderful.!
And to think that have passed since the 10 years, but
It remains very current.
The entire universe.
Don’t remember seeing this before and it was wonderful, took me back a ways. So great to have you back giving us something to read from you. Wish other former writers would come back to us, all of you are valued and missed greatly. So many of the stories are not completed, would be so nice if they were. Again welcome back, looking forward to more. Thanks.
Loved this! I love your writing. I’m so glad I’ve come across your stories, be it years later but better late than never lol