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“Totally understandable,” Tina said. “Hands to myself, simple kiss, easy on the passion.”
“Sounds like a fast food order,” Bette laughed. “That’s not what I mean, just…”
“Bette I know, for Christ’s sake just kiss me!” Tina leaned in with her hands on her hips, and a fire in her eyes.
“Fuck I used to love it when you were like this,” Bette said, her voice falling to a low pitch. “Totally aroused me when you told me what to do.”
“Keep your hands to yourself, and kiss me like you know you want to,” Tina said quietly. “Like you know I want you to.”
Tina had barely finished the sentence before Bette’s lips were on hers. There was no pretence of innocence to it – just desire that had been given permission to express itself. Tina ran her hands down her own thighs, painfully aware of the promise she had made to keep her hands to herself.
She felt Bette back away from her slightly and leaned in to maintain the contact. Bette pulled further back until they separated. Still only inches apart, Bette spoke.
“You’re going to wear something to bed, right?”
“Do you want me to?” Tina asked.
The conversation took place as their lips touched lightly, noses brushing, tongues sneaking out for an intimate taste.
“You really should,” Bette replied. “And I’ll need to borrow something.”
“Whatever you want,” Tina agreed. She was ready to agree to almost anything at this point.
Their kiss continued. Tina felt Bette’s hands on the sides of her face.
“I thought no hands?” Tina asked breathlessly before continuing the kiss.
“You wanted to make love and now I can’t even touch you? Guess again…” Bette let one hand run down Tina’s arm as the other hand rested on Tina’s cheek. She gently bit at Tina’s bottom lip while rapidly flicking her tongue over the moist pink flesh.
It was Tina’s turn to pull away.
“You know what that does to me,” Tina said, frustrated.
“Why don’t you tell me?” Bette spoke in the low tones of increasing desire.
“I promised I wouldn’t do anything tonight if you agreed to stay,” Tina said warily.
Bette took a deep breath.
“Of course,” she said. “It’s hard for me not to get carried away with you. I know you well enough to know what you like.”
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Oh my God!
I am so happy that you are back!
I love your stories, i read them more than once over the years.
But i don’t have time to reread this story, have to work very early in the morning , but i hope to read it when i am back tomorrow. I am looking forward to it!
You are a incredible writer and i do hope that you will find the time to write more! For now, thank you again for returning!
I was so happy to see your name again, I love your stories, off to read now,, but please continue to post more stories.,, please post soon.
Thanks for the shoutout! You’re an incredible writer with a natural style that pulls the reader in and makes one sorry when the chapter/story ends. Your writing demands rereading many times. It’s just that enjoyable. :-)
Brilliant, thanks so much for this. 62 Pages of pleasure.
Enjoy your stories which are good to read more than once.
Look forward to keeping on swimming :-)
I love this story, as I always enjoy reading your work!
Loved it, thanks so much. You are such a good writer!
Glad you are back,I love your stories.
I certainly remember this story and I love it more now. Thanks for updating the language so the profane language is present. It’s not that I am a complete potty mouth but let’s be realistic. Several of the stories that have transferred over have blanks or asterisks instead of the actual language. In my opinion, when this happens, the stories lose some of their authenticity and the characters lose their edge. I realize that it takes effort to fill in the blanks especially in longer stories. So thanks for doing that.
I find stories harder to read with the asterisks inserted…it’s like a jolt of reality interfering with my escapism. I had to get to the task of editing them out. I do plan to work on more stories; some easier than others because of where the files are. This story was first posted almost 10 (!) years ago, so the digital file was more challenging to retrieve. I’m not much for cursing, but the occasional well placed F-bomb can really get someone’s attention.
@JKS I can’t believe this story is almost 10 years old! It reads now as fresh as it did then. I really love your stories because they are so well written with realism, humor, sarcasm and authenticity. It also helps that for us ORs (Original Readers), it follows canon for the characters and storylines. :-)
WOW, what a fabulous surprise seeing you back here, JKS! So glad you found your way back here and have even edited! Let me know if you have any questions or need any help!
Wonderful story. Thanks for sharing again!
Thanks for your effort of editing and for giving us this wonderful story again.
It’s still as beautiful as I remember it from reading your story for the first time a few years ago.
Finally I managed to finish reading!
I was slowly reading this story.
And I confess that it was a great trip.
Pretty and wonderful.!
And to think that have passed since the 10 years, but
It remains very current.
The entire universe.
Don’t remember seeing this before and it was wonderful, took me back a ways. So great to have you back giving us something to read from you. Wish other former writers would come back to us, all of you are valued and missed greatly. So many of the stories are not completed, would be so nice if they were. Again welcome back, looking forward to more. Thanks.
Loved this! I love your writing. I’m so glad I’ve come across your stories, be it years later but better late than never lol