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“Bette I should…” Tina’s voice trailed off.
“You should lean back and enjoy,” Bette said, taking the hem of Tina’s top between her teeth and moving it up as her naked body moved ever higher over her. “This won’t take long.”
“Fuck…”
“Exactly,” Bette whispered, before curling her tongue around Tina’s already erect nipple.
She worked her slacks back off with one hand, while using the other to hold her own body up from resting with too much pressure onto Tina. Bette couldn’t keep the self-satisfied grin from creeping onto her face when she felt Tina helping with the removal of the garment.
“You have to be quieter than you were last night,” Bette said as she paused in her attention. “Or she will wake up.”
Tina nodded silently, biting her lip as if in promise. As she felt Bette move between her legs, she bent them so the soles of her feet rested on the bed. Tina reached to hold Bette’s face in her hands as the kissing began.
“Oh God,” Tina whimpered.
“You love that, I know you do,” Bette whispered into her mouth. “You used to beg me to do it.”
“Don’t stop.”
Their movements were primal and intense as they re-connected once again.
Tina arched back and silently mouthed words that would not come. It’s the only thing that would not come as waves of pleasure washed over her. She dug her nails into Bette’s back with each surge.
The power that Bette felt as Tina quivered under her was unmatchable. She soon felt powerless though, as Tina pushed her off and onto her back, devouring her as if she was a last meal. Bette felt her wrists being held down to the surface of the bed as Tina gently bit down her neck and over one breast.
“Your turn,” Tina growled into Bette’s ear.
Bette felt her body react to Tina’s words, but could do nothing because of the position she was in. She reached up for a kiss, but was denied at the last possible moment.
“Oh no, not without some teasing,” Tina said. She ran her tongue from beneath Bette’s ear to the notch between her clavicles. She moved further south and veered off to deliver gentle, persistent love bites over each breast in turn, encouraging her nipples into firm ripe peaks. She returned to place a kiss on Bette’s full lips before letting go of one wrist to reach between her legs.
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Oh my God!
I am so happy that you are back!
I love your stories, i read them more than once over the years.
But i don’t have time to reread this story, have to work very early in the morning , but i hope to read it when i am back tomorrow. I am looking forward to it!
You are a incredible writer and i do hope that you will find the time to write more! For now, thank you again for returning!
I was so happy to see your name again, I love your stories, off to read now,, but please continue to post more stories.,, please post soon.
Thanks for the shoutout! You’re an incredible writer with a natural style that pulls the reader in and makes one sorry when the chapter/story ends. Your writing demands rereading many times. It’s just that enjoyable. :-)
Brilliant, thanks so much for this. 62 Pages of pleasure.
Enjoy your stories which are good to read more than once.
Look forward to keeping on swimming :-)
I love this story, as I always enjoy reading your work!
Loved it, thanks so much. You are such a good writer!
Glad you are back,I love your stories.
I certainly remember this story and I love it more now. Thanks for updating the language so the profane language is present. It’s not that I am a complete potty mouth but let’s be realistic. Several of the stories that have transferred over have blanks or asterisks instead of the actual language. In my opinion, when this happens, the stories lose some of their authenticity and the characters lose their edge. I realize that it takes effort to fill in the blanks especially in longer stories. So thanks for doing that.
I find stories harder to read with the asterisks inserted…it’s like a jolt of reality interfering with my escapism. I had to get to the task of editing them out. I do plan to work on more stories; some easier than others because of where the files are. This story was first posted almost 10 (!) years ago, so the digital file was more challenging to retrieve. I’m not much for cursing, but the occasional well placed F-bomb can really get someone’s attention.
@JKS I can’t believe this story is almost 10 years old! It reads now as fresh as it did then. I really love your stories because they are so well written with realism, humor, sarcasm and authenticity. It also helps that for us ORs (Original Readers), it follows canon for the characters and storylines. :-)
WOW, what a fabulous surprise seeing you back here, JKS! So glad you found your way back here and have even edited! Let me know if you have any questions or need any help!
Wonderful story. Thanks for sharing again!
Thanks for your effort of editing and for giving us this wonderful story again.
It’s still as beautiful as I remember it from reading your story for the first time a few years ago.
Finally I managed to finish reading!
I was slowly reading this story.
And I confess that it was a great trip.
Pretty and wonderful.!
And to think that have passed since the 10 years, but
It remains very current.
The entire universe.
Don’t remember seeing this before and it was wonderful, took me back a ways. So great to have you back giving us something to read from you. Wish other former writers would come back to us, all of you are valued and missed greatly. So many of the stories are not completed, would be so nice if they were. Again welcome back, looking forward to more. Thanks.
Loved this! I love your writing. I’m so glad I’ve come across your stories, be it years later but better late than never lol