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Letting Go – chapter 12
Chapter 12:
Tina removed her lips off Bette’s ear and slowly slid them down Bette’s tense neck kissing every inch making sure she wouldn’t miss a single pore. With each kiss Tina laid on Bette, Bette found herself unable to contain her own desires for Tina. What drove Bette even more insane was the fact that the once shy, timid, innocent, introverted Tina was long gone; the Tina in front of her was large and in charge, and Bette would oblige.
In Bette’s state of shock, all she could do was close her eyes and let out a soft whimper. With every kiss Tina placed on her, Bette lost any and all capacity to make decisions; her mind went into a state of shock and all she could see were stars spinning around her woozy head; her body unsure whether to lean back against the wall or move forward that last few millimeters; her legs weak as if she went through hours of exercise struggling to hold her balance. It was the tight hold of Tina’s arm around Bette’s waist that held up support for Bette.
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‘She’s coming closer, what am I supposed to…’ Bette’s mind was cleared of all thoughts; she could no longer analyze anything else. Tina now had her hands tightly wrapped around Bette’s waist pulling her in. When she heard “You’re mine,” escape from Tina’s mouth, all Bette could do was ask herself “Did she actually just say that?” Bette belonged to Tina, she was hers? Since when did this happen?
‘Oh my…she’s…’ That was all Bette’s thoughts could mutter out when Tina began placing kisses along Bette’s neck. Tina’s kisses, Tina’s lips, were both filled with heat, fire, and desire. With every new kiss Tina placed on Bette, she felt her own passion intensifying; her own body temperature was rising; her heart was pumping beyond what it could handle leading her to breathe heavily, and every breath causing her to pant losing more control. All Bette could do was give in to the seductress in front of her. Bette let out a quiet whimper while she obediently tilted her head back giving Tina better access to her body.
Tina’s left arm found itself maneuvering towards Bette’s head, and gently began to run her fingers in Bette’s wavy locks while Bette rested her head on Tina’s left hand. Tina finally pulled herself away from Bette and round two of intense gazes were on its way. Tina’s eyes were filled with a “You’re going to pay for making me jealous” look while she released a possessive “You belong to me and only me, ***** Cecilia,” grin.
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(56 votes, average: 3.98 out of 5)
Amazing and totally HOT!!! Again too short a chapter…but will take all I can get…This turn in events totally surprises me though, how will tina deal with this after she leaves the bathroom…poor Cecilia…NOT!!! Have to go now and reread this….over and over again!!!
WOW Smile I love it I love it I love it…..Great as always please post soon
Awesome! I love the way you got Tina to forget all about Cecilia
What are you talking about apologizing for your update before we read it. That was great, and what do you mean your shy. You know nice and tender can be just as erotic as up against a wall or on a table. Love how Tina’s suddenly being aggressive. Maybe next update just a bit longer, pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeee
whoa if that isnt a tease i dunno what is
Love this, Bette right now doesn’t know her own name, This was a great chapter…THANKS
Tee hee hee*holding hands over mouth* I love the passive aggressive woman.
…then bursts in Cecilia…Cecilia who???? I love it, please continue.
Keep posting….great story
Little Miss Tina knows her stuff!! I bet Cecilla is gorgeous but Tina must blow her away :P
Oh I love to see Tina in control and I believe Bette too. And now Bette ? What does she is going to do ?
A perfect chapter. Thank you
(And your french is good).
arr…another cliffhanger leavin me here… hee hee. wow, Tina is just too hot there. hurry! will be waiting …
very good chapter. your very good at writing those scenes and im very glad that i started reading!! post soon!!
You go girl, this chapter is awesome, don’t you dare stop. You know what you are doing even if you don’t think you do. Loving it
Whooo weee!! If you can write about their kissing with such passion..you might just kill me with the NC-17!!Hey but I don’t mind though!!
Hey I’m just got back Whoa! Thanks that was so Great it’s getting interesting I Love it Please continue post soon.
K
Just caught up again, I hate when life gets in the way lol. Wonderful as always. Go Tina!
AWESOME!!!!!! I like it!! as always!! I know I never leave comments but this time I had to!!! KEEP posting SOON!!
WOW! H-O-T-T-T-T! Go Tina! I love it when she takes control! Great chapter! I am SO loving this story!
WOW Smile…that was awesome girl….you go Tina…go girl…can´t wait for the next update to arrive. Hope you liked my update as well.
WAY TO GO TINA!!! OMG, I was never a cheerleader but attened many a basketball game, and all I could think of during this chapter was the cheer “Be Agressive. . B E Agressive. . .”Hahah, great story. Please post again soon!
Great Update!! I know I haven’t commented before.. But I have read all your chapters and love your story! I love when people change up professions and such.. I like the aggressive Tina, its nice that a few writers or doing that! Keep up the great work! Post Soon.
hey smiles, ya done good girl. ya had me fanning myself. i love it when tinas a bit agressive. poor bette is done for. hopefully cecilia figured whats up in the restroom. and eric, who? post soon.
Oh Lord, you’re driving me crazy!!! :P
I thought it was Cecilia going into the bathroom when I read that Bette was cut off for the fourth time for the day, but who knows it turn out to be more… actions… :D
Hahaha… yeah that house definitely need to be built soon, especially after this sizzling chappy :D hey, you’ve got a great foundation here, so I bet your house will be a blast with this concrete foundation :P hahaha
Oh don’t worry, I bet with all my nagging you’ll be speeding up your writing… :P
Ooo… you’re more than welcome, you’ve got a great story here, of course I’ll be here to read it ;)
Hahaha… yeah, I should be doing my work now… even though it’s like almost 12am :P anyway, FF still stay the first place in my list :)
Now, thats what I’m talkin’ ’bout! Go for yours Tina!!!!!!!!! WTG Smile…..
BTW….you made this kissing scene highly erotic; I thought I was reading NC-17….post again soon
Go Tina! Go Tina! Get your woman!!! Now that’s what I’m talking about!!! I love a take control, Tina. Bette is so much more endearing, when she’s flustered. Although, I would have liked her to be more forceful, when it came to Cecilia. But, that’s okay, ‘coz Tina wasn’t about to fade into the background! Y-E-E-S-S-S!!!
Poor Bette. Tina is claiming what’s hers so that Bette doesn’t even have to second guess her anymore. Like I said before the predator has become the prey! YAY!
whoa! great post!
Damn this is awesome and hot, Tina is taking control and no one will know what she gonna do next, this is excited and let see what’s next. Post soon please, thanks!
That was so HOT! Awesome! Marvelous! I don’t know what else to say. It’s too bad they are still in the restroom….they need to change this to a bedroom! LOL! Kiitos!
go tina!!!!!!!!!
OH FRIGG!!!! U R JUST PLAIN EVIL!!!!! LMAO!!!!! U post something as HOTT as this and just stop there!!!!!! U R SOOOOOOO NOT NICE!!!!!! LOVIN IT!!!!!! POST SOON!!!!!
I’ve just now caught up with your story and I really enjoy it. Keep this great stuff coming!