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Letting Go – chapter 11
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Chapter eleven:
Those eyes became fixated on Tina’s every move, every action. It acknowledged Tina’s coyness while she was walking and talking next to Bette, and it recognized Tina’s desire to be closer to Bette. Tina was indeed beautiful. Those eyes then searched fiercely hoping to meet Tina’s, but Tina’s were glued to the dark asphalt pave-way in fear of eye contact with Bette Porter.
Tina sensed a deep stare coming from afar, it forced the hair on her arms to jump straight up sending cold chills throughout her body. Tina quickly felt uneasy, as her own eyes slowly moved from the asphalt to those beaming eyes, and finally, their eyes met. Tina didn’t know this person, but she could feel that woman’s emotions through her eyes. It went from surprise to admiration, admiration to jealously, jealously to anger, and from anger to defeat. Every one of those emotions sent a new wave of chills down her spine to her legs which caused her to cease. As Tina found herself engrossed into those mysterious orbs, Bette had noticed that Tina was no longer focused on Bette.
Bette felt the tension growing in the air, and as Bette paused in her own tracks looking up, she discovered that woman who had been looking at Tina and studying her every move.
“Cecilia…” Bette’s voice whispered.
‘Cecilia?’ Tina’s head turned quickly and her eyes were now focused on Bette’s.
Once Tina and Cecilia had broken off eye contact, Cecilia too, quickly shifted her undivided attention to Bette, and once she and Bette met eyes, she began walking towards the two women.
“Hi Bette, long time no see.” Cecilia said as she gave a seductive smile.
Bette had a questioning look on her face while she asked “How did you…”
Before Bette could finish her sentence, Cecilia jumped in with the answer, “Kelly told me you have lunch about this time, and I was just about to walk into the school when I saw you, and…” Cecilia turned her attention to Tina once again.
Bette turned her body to face the two women’s sides as she said “Oh, I’m sorry, Cecilia, this is Tina, Tina, this is…”
Once again, Bette was cut off by Cecilia while she jumped in and answered, “Cecilia, Bette’s girlfriend.”
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This rocks! I love the introduction of Cecilia to kick TIna’s attraction for Bette into full gear. Your cliffhangers kill me but this one has got my imagination going…. Excellent writing! Write more soon please!
wow! who lets an ex tag along on a hot new date???! anyways, i guess this was required to get them ‘shoulder to shoulder, hip to hip…….’!lol!
DAMN SMILES, I thought that was FABULOUS….KEEP IT UP….THANKS
yeah T, claim your woman!! Love it, smile. this story just get better and better. Are u sure cecilia wasn’t recruited by alice to help the 2 silly ladies get close? hey no worries abt the cliff hangers. I kind of like them at times. It gives me something to look forward to in the story. keep it up, you are doing great!
Wow! Was Tina drinking liquid courage with her lunch? BOLD moves for a “straight girl”…but I guess you know what you want when you see it and there is no need to be subtle. LOL, can’t wait for the next chapter!
hot dayum i did like this chappy much better whoda thunk tina had it in her so be so up so soon. nice, really nice. do it again please.
Le comportement de Cecilia oblige Tina à sortir de sa timidité et à montrer à Bette ses sentiments. Bette semble faible et laisse faire Cecilia ce qu’elle veut. J’attends le prochain chapitre avec impatience. Merci pour cette histoire.
Oh Yeeaaaaahhh!!!! That’s right, Tina! Claim your woman!!! Now, go tell that b*tch to step off!!! Great chapter!
AND!!!
I’m so glad Tina found her fighting spirit. Sorry to say, but Cecilia does not have a chance with Bette. Can’t wait for B&T to get it going. Kiitos!
Damn I think you really want to kill me about your cliffhanger, please I can’t take it anymore, its to much lol. Ok but please post soon the next one, this is getting more interesting and excited and can’t wait to see more. And you are not nice to you fans but we love you, post soon please. Thanks!
nice…leave us hanging again. Good job. :) Love this story. This B&T are so cute.
*cough* My specialization is history *cough* my azz….LOL!!
Smile, you continue to do wonderfully; now Tina just needs to do what she is in that bathroom doing right now….claiming what’s hers!
I get the feeling we may see a good bit of Cecilia; but IMO, she’s about as important a presence as Eric…..NOT!
post again soon
Hanging here||| That was too cool. Bam out of no where comes Cecilia, and our Ms. Tina who can’t even figure out how all of a sudden she likes women, let alone Bette, is like hey bitch thats mine. LOVE IT. Post again,post again.
Yeah! You go T!
WOW…what the f*ck…how can you leave us like this….just an amazing update…now this Cecilia is sure trouble for Bette, but what the hell…let the show continue please.
And regarding chapters..don´t feel obligatet to post many. I have only postet 25 so keep it down ok. Hopefully I´ll post today and I want more of your story here so please post soon
ugh! another cliffhanger. Must you torture me this way? Cecilia was written nicely into the story.
Smile, I’m all smiles with this ending. I love how she says,”You’re mine.” You go girl. I like the little drama that’ll make both Tina and Bette stop fumbling and muttering and finally start addressing the feelings between them. But please keep Cecilia… I don’t want any real feelings of love between the two but having her constantly there fighting for Bette’s attention is gonna be great! I want to see Tina step up to the plate and fight for what she wants…tired of Bette always having to be the predator…time for her to be the prey!
Aw c’mon on!!You ended the chapter there?? That’s just cruel (sob).
great chapter…but pls don’t leave us hanging like that, especially if you don’t intend on giving us another chapter right away….Not Nice!! patiently waiting
OMG… what a GREAT twist!!!! Hahaha.. gotta thank Cecilia for Tina’s aggresiveness :) but hey, you tease… I want more, like now!! hahaha
You’re gonna have to give me more spoiler :P in order for me to build a foundation for ‘the house’ *wink*
i had to go back to read all of your other chapters. OMG i love this story u had me hanging off the edge of my seat. cant wait to see wat happens. please POST SOON!!!!
wooo weeee let the fun begin..what’s up with the cecilla crazy chick, she must be pretty :p
Here’s a thought… Perhaps Eric and Cecilia can hook up – lol. Nothing better than the start of a new love affair. Thanks for a great story & yeah I’ll give you the “scent” story some time…
hahahah… there’s no way you gonna stop me from reading :P
good work!!!!!!!!