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Letting Go – chapter 12
When Tina suddenly stopped, Bette was slowly regaining control of her senses and her thoughts. Explain, yes, that’s what Bette came in to do, tell her nothing was going on between her and Cecilia, and there never would be. “Tina…” Bette’s breathing still hadn’t evened out, a series of pants kept her from finishing her sentence. “I…” as Bette continued, she her sentence was now cut off for the fourth time today.
Tina’s left hand still wrapped in Bette’s wavy locks, was now pulling Bette closer into Tina as she moved closer towards Bette herself. They were now lip to lip sharing a fanatical passionate kiss.
Though they both had kissed other people in the past, but none of the kisses could ever compare with the one these two shared right now. The world was spinning around them. Their heads were so light it felt like they had been floating on air. All sense of time seemed to have disappeared leaving just Bette and Tina to explore and find one another. The beating of their hearts connected them. They were face to face, but for the first time they discovered each other.
Stunned, Bette’s body arched up and her eyes were wide open in shock. With every second that Tina had begun kissing Bette, she found herself hypnotized. Her eyelashes weighed a ton pushing her eyelids down, her eyes closed going from shock to comfort. Her arched body now turned weak and numb, Bette had to lean against Tina’s for support. She would give in to Tina’s every wish. Bette didn’t feel close enough to Tina, she had to get closer, she needed to get closer, she wanted to get closer. Bette slowly found her own left hand reaching behind Tina’s head grabbing onto Tina’s blonde locks in an attempt to pull Tina closer onto her as her right hand like Tina’s, had also found its way to wrap around Tina’s waist.
Tina placed a series of kisses on Bette’s lips; they were tender but filled with force and dominance. Tina parted her own lips letting the edge of her tongue lick the center of Bette’s upper lip. She wanted, no, she demanded access into Bette’s mouth.
Every single taste bud savored the sweetness of Bette’s lips as they slowly licked her upper lip hoping for Bette to allow entrance.
“Tina…” Bette said in a quiet low whisper as she tried to catch her breath.
“Ti…” another moan escaped Bette’s mouth, but as soon as she opened them, her words were cut of yet again when this time, Tina swiftly maneuvered her tongue into Bette’s mouth colliding together with Bette’s own tongue.
To Bette’s surprise, Tina’s arm was no longer wrapped around Bette. She released hold of Bette, and her hands now found its way at the bottom edge of Bette’s top. The tips of Tina’s slender fingers were now gliding back and forth against Bette’s bare skin. Tina’s fingers were like icicles placed on Bette’s stomach sending waves cold chills down her body. Shudders released from Bette’s body caused her to let out a soft moan, and Tina took this as a sign to continue.
Tina raised Bette’s top a few inches exposing a small part of her bare skin. The cool breeze blew against Bette, but it was quickly covered and warmed when Tina’s hand now found itself on Bette’s stomach slowly starting to slide up the rest of Bette’s body. Their flushed faces sent a heat wave into the air causing tiny sweat beads to perspire all throughout their bodies. With every bead that escaped Bette’s body, Tina found it easier to run her fingers through.
Oh Lord, Bette didn’t know how much more of this she could take. Tina was driving her crazy.
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(56 votes, average: 3.98 out of 5)
Amazing and totally HOT!!! Again too short a chapter…but will take all I can get…This turn in events totally surprises me though, how will tina deal with this after she leaves the bathroom…poor Cecilia…NOT!!! Have to go now and reread this….over and over again!!!
WOW Smile I love it I love it I love it…..Great as always please post soon
Awesome! I love the way you got Tina to forget all about Cecilia
What are you talking about apologizing for your update before we read it. That was great, and what do you mean your shy. You know nice and tender can be just as erotic as up against a wall or on a table. Love how Tina’s suddenly being aggressive. Maybe next update just a bit longer, pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeee
whoa if that isnt a tease i dunno what is
Love this, Bette right now doesn’t know her own name, This was a great chapter…THANKS
Tee hee hee*holding hands over mouth* I love the passive aggressive woman.
…then bursts in Cecilia…Cecilia who???? I love it, please continue.
Keep posting….great story
Little Miss Tina knows her stuff!! I bet Cecilla is gorgeous but Tina must blow her away :P
Oh I love to see Tina in control and I believe Bette too. And now Bette ? What does she is going to do ?
A perfect chapter. Thank you
(And your french is good).
arr…another cliffhanger leavin me here… hee hee. wow, Tina is just too hot there. hurry! will be waiting …
very good chapter. your very good at writing those scenes and im very glad that i started reading!! post soon!!
You go girl, this chapter is awesome, don’t you dare stop. You know what you are doing even if you don’t think you do. Loving it
Whooo weee!! If you can write about their kissing with such passion..you might just kill me with the NC-17!!Hey but I don’t mind though!!
Hey I’m just got back Whoa! Thanks that was so Great it’s getting interesting I Love it Please continue post soon.
K
Just caught up again, I hate when life gets in the way lol. Wonderful as always. Go Tina!
AWESOME!!!!!! I like it!! as always!! I know I never leave comments but this time I had to!!! KEEP posting SOON!!
WOW! H-O-T-T-T-T! Go Tina! I love it when she takes control! Great chapter! I am SO loving this story!
WOW Smile…that was awesome girl….you go Tina…go girl…can´t wait for the next update to arrive. Hope you liked my update as well.
WAY TO GO TINA!!! OMG, I was never a cheerleader but attened many a basketball game, and all I could think of during this chapter was the cheer “Be Agressive. . B E Agressive. . .”Hahah, great story. Please post again soon!
Great Update!! I know I haven’t commented before.. But I have read all your chapters and love your story! I love when people change up professions and such.. I like the aggressive Tina, its nice that a few writers or doing that! Keep up the great work! Post Soon.
hey smiles, ya done good girl. ya had me fanning myself. i love it when tinas a bit agressive. poor bette is done for. hopefully cecilia figured whats up in the restroom. and eric, who? post soon.
Oh Lord, you’re driving me crazy!!! :P
I thought it was Cecilia going into the bathroom when I read that Bette was cut off for the fourth time for the day, but who knows it turn out to be more… actions… :D
Hahaha… yeah that house definitely need to be built soon, especially after this sizzling chappy :D hey, you’ve got a great foundation here, so I bet your house will be a blast with this concrete foundation :P hahaha
Oh don’t worry, I bet with all my nagging you’ll be speeding up your writing… :P
Ooo… you’re more than welcome, you’ve got a great story here, of course I’ll be here to read it ;)
Hahaha… yeah, I should be doing my work now… even though it’s like almost 12am :P anyway, FF still stay the first place in my list :)
Now, thats what I’m talkin’ ’bout! Go for yours Tina!!!!!!!!! WTG Smile…..
BTW….you made this kissing scene highly erotic; I thought I was reading NC-17….post again soon
Go Tina! Go Tina! Get your woman!!! Now that’s what I’m talking about!!! I love a take control, Tina. Bette is so much more endearing, when she’s flustered. Although, I would have liked her to be more forceful, when it came to Cecilia. But, that’s okay, ‘coz Tina wasn’t about to fade into the background! Y-E-E-S-S-S!!!
Poor Bette. Tina is claiming what’s hers so that Bette doesn’t even have to second guess her anymore. Like I said before the predator has become the prey! YAY!
whoa! great post!
Damn this is awesome and hot, Tina is taking control and no one will know what she gonna do next, this is excited and let see what’s next. Post soon please, thanks!
That was so HOT! Awesome! Marvelous! I don’t know what else to say. It’s too bad they are still in the restroom….they need to change this to a bedroom! LOL! Kiitos!
go tina!!!!!!!!!
OH FRIGG!!!! U R JUST PLAIN EVIL!!!!! LMAO!!!!! U post something as HOTT as this and just stop there!!!!!! U R SOOOOOOO NOT NICE!!!!!! LOVIN IT!!!!!! POST SOON!!!!!
I’ve just now caught up with your story and I really enjoy it. Keep this great stuff coming!