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Letting Go – chapter 15
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Tina’s parents gave her a sly grin as if they had some evil plot about to unravel.
“Dessert should be coming soon, so please excuse me for a moment while I go to the restroom.” Eric quickly excused himself as he gave Mr. and Ms. Kennard a quick wink and headed towards the restroom.
Mr. and Ms. Kennard sat in their seats smiling and looking at Tina. ‘Wow, she really has NO idea.’ The happy couple thought.
“What? Do I have something on my face?” Tina asked as she began wiping around her lips gently with her fingers.
Ms. Kennard was now teary eyed looking over at her husband and said “Look, our little girl’s all grown up now,” she was so proud of Tina, how great she turned out to be, and how happy she seemed.
“Yes, she’s all grown up now,” Mr. Kennard replied, “Tina, we’re so proud of you. We couldn’t be happier the way everything has turned out.”
“Thanks, I think…” Tina gave a quizzical look.
The server had arrived with their desserts. She first laid Ms. Kennard’s, then Mr. Kennard’s, Eric’s, and finally, Tina’s on the table. Tina had ordered a chocolate mousse cake for dessert, but it didn’t quite fit the description.
Her slice of chocolate mousse was strategically placed in the center of a round plate with a two caret princess cut diamond ring on top of the cake. The top half of the plate had the words “Will you” written in raspberry dipping sauce, and the bottom half completed the question with the words “marry me?” written in raspberry dipping sauce.
For a moment there, Tina thought their dessert was sent to the wrong table. That didn’t seem quite right, her parents were already married, why would her father propose to her mother again? She leaned her head down giving her plate a closer look squinting her eyes to make sure she read what she had just read correctly. Yes, she read it correctly alright.
Tina looked back up at her parents in confusion asking “Umm…dad, are you proposing to mom again? Mom, I think this one is your slice.”
The next thing Tina noticed was Eric approaching her with a book in his hands. The book was slightly larger than an average sized children’s storybook, and the cover had that old fashioned brown fade color to it where fairytales would be written in. To Eric, it had been a fairytale; never did he think he could’ve been so lucky to meet Tina.
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Can’t. No. I think those are the words she’s looking for. Good stuff!
No Iam sorry I can’t I am in love with someone else. She leaves the restaurant and goes and see Bette
really appreciate the thought. but no thank you. it just wont work. then runs screaming out of the restaurant, no that wouldnt be nice. but funny. smiles, your getting on my bad, side. heehee. im still at a lose as to what bette thought tina meant, by your mine. that, in my head, usually means something. ;) so …. splain it to me girl. get another one up and let us see the answer. thanks.
please dont leave me like this i need to kno what her answer is !!
K
Well crap. Great chapter. I hope Tina say no. Love it.
No Smile it is not hate hate hate…. Because I trust you to make Tina do the right thing for herself. I still love your story post soon :-)
What do u mean by stopping there…..”Eric I” AAAARRRRGGGGGHHHHHHH!!!! I loathe cliffhangers!!!!! UGH I’ll hate it even more if Tina says yes!!!! YUCK, YUCK!!!! On the bathroom note… where I’m from our public bathrooms r really clean especially the ones in restaurants. However I agree with u the ones in NY r horrible, so NO WAY WOULD I EVEN ATTEMPT 2 HAVE HOTT MONKEY SEX IN ONE!!!!! LOL!!!!! POST SOON with Tina sayin I love someone else or Eric I can’t ’cause I’m a lesbian!!!!
Eric I love a woman named Bette! So simple :)
I didnt get a chance to comment on the previous chapter, so I’ll do so here.
OH SHIZNIT! ….. This was funny….no, believe me….it was realllllllly funny!
Whatever had happened, it had to wait until school was out…..Waiting is the thing that usually kills Alice.
Ok, now on to this chapter…
“Eric, I…” Smile, you are getting way too fucking good with the cliffies. I could reach out and strangle you right about now. -_- Please dont let Tina muck this up by accepting his proposal.
As far as Cecelia is concerned, I see right now that she hears what she wants to her. Bette didnt commit to anything. All she said was “let me think about this,” and Cecelia has taken those words as a sign that she and Bette are going to work again on “us.” Do me and everyone else a facor Smile….get rid of her. Matter of fact, have her meet Eric. How’s that for your storybook Eric?
dammit, does Bette know where the hell this dinner is? she needs to show and finish Tina’s sentence for her.
“Eric I am sorry but Tina is in love with me, and this will not end well for you. It’s just not in the cards buddy.” LOL!! anyway I hope Tina does the right thing here.
great chapter!!!
Hopefully she fainted so she doesn’t have to answer yet.Give her sometime or just say NO and RUN LIKE THE WIND herheheheh…THANKS FABULOUS CHAPTER..PLEASE POST SOON..
Hey smile I’m still Love your Story OMG! I can’t wait to see if Tina accept Eric married proposal OMG! this is getting intense Thanks smile Please continue post soon.
HELL NO…I can’t marry you. That is the answer. God..these cliffhangers kill me. please post soon
Oh man you can’t leave us like this, I can’t wait to see what Tina say hope she said she can’t. Post soon please, thanks!
(_l_) <-------- V
Tina is going to say yes! Why you ask? Because I just know. I’m psychic.
If she doesn’t say yes she will faint and try to avoid the answer to eric’s question after she recovers.
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It’s funny I thought I had scared you off with my response to your pm. Sorry about that….so now you see why I didn’t come out and just say it my comment…
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I think it’s cool you use shiznit a lot. I myself use “Oh snaps” or “oh snaps crackle pop” and my personal favorite “the shizzle” a lot.
V
I almost forgot to answer your question……….
I didn’t go anywhere I was just really busy with some work I had to get done before school started. So no I didn’t have any fun. lol
I…I…like girls. IS that wrong??? Hee hee hee. Love this story really! If she says yes like many of us did once. It will end…sadly for one. New beginning for the other. Just as nature intended:) Please keep the story going!
“I SURE AS HELL WON’T CAUSE I’M MADLY IN LOVE WITH A WOMAN!!!” I think that’s what she’ll say. . .hahaha. Okay, maybe not quite as loud and bold. . .pleeeaaase post soon!
I’ve been so behind on all the stories. Just caught up with yours. No way you left us hanging, you guys all love to torment us. Tina, the answer is Eric your a nice guy, I care about you, but NO I don’t think so, and then she needs to go find Bette. Cecilia, adios baby. Poor Alice she’s dying I know it,hasn’t had enough time with the two to work her tricks. Love this story, looking forward to the next update.
Eric, I can´t…I´m in love with someone else!!!!!!!!!!!…Tina just say it and leave the restaurant and go see Bette.
Wonderful update smile…so do keep going and yes I´m working on mine. Do post soon
Aw,c’mon on!!You end it there?? By the way, liked your anecdote about the BO cause I had similar experiences(who knew there was so much BO in the world??) and my friends and I literally were on the floor laughing.
I should have known that you would leave it at this. Well, although Tina and Bette are both distracted I trust that you will lead them together. You do know that they are destined to be together, don’t you? Great chapter, I just wish that you will post another one soon. Kiitos!
yea i do like the word shiznit my friend says it all the time thinking shes cool but really its just funny. Ughh stupid cliffhangers! this chapter was very good and tina needs to tell eric the truth and then go find bette!!! POST SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Arrr… why why? Why 2 ppl in love cannot be together? :P
OMG… I would have this serious urge to say yes if I’m Tina :P … hahaha… it’s just soooooo… touching… a book of their lives and meetings… wow… great idea… :D
Yes, I’m reading at home :D
No worries, I’ll wait patiently for you to take your time to build the house :)
Hahahahha… B&T are driving you crazy but you’re driving me crazy with this story :P
Just two letters NO
Fainting will not help just say no!!!!!!!!!!!