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Letting Go – chapter 15
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Bette smiled, and said “Goodnight, Cecilia, call me when you get home so I know you’re safe.”
“I will, goodnight Bette, sweet dreams.”
Bette didn’t close her door until Cecilia made her way out the hall and out of her sight.
Cecilia was adorable sometimes, but she just wasn’t Tina.
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The last few pages read ‘Eric knew he wanted to spend the rest of his life with her. One day, he finally asked for Tina’s hand in marriage so they could live happily ever after.’
The second to last page read ‘Will you…’
The last page read ‘Marry me, Tina Kennard?’
Tina read through the whole book with tears in her eyes as she took a walk down memory lane. With every picture and every detail in the storybook, Tina was reminded of all the times she spent with Eric and everything they had been through. Some of the events she had totally forgotten about and was touched as she relived the moments through the book in front of her.
Mixed tears of joy and pain filled Tina’s eyes. A part of her wanted the stability and the love he gave her, but another part of her couldn’t say yes because she was in love with Bette.
With the tears dripping down Tina’s cheeks, she looked up at Eric and began, “Eric…I…”
Eric, still standing up, reached his two hands to meet Tina’s, and as he met her hands, he held on to them bringing her up from her seat as he said “Tina, from our first date, I knew you were the one. I didn’t ever think anyone could be in love with someone this much, and I love you more than words can describe. This chapter in our journey doesn’t have an ending, and I was hoping you would provide us with one.”
Eric got down on one knee with Tina’s hands still wrapped in his, and he continued, “Will you marry me Tina?”
Tina didn’t feel like she could stand much longer, her body was giving up on her and so was her mind. Everything in front of her went blank and all she could see were spots of white floating around in the air.
“Eric, I…”
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Can’t. No. I think those are the words she’s looking for. Good stuff!
No Iam sorry I can’t I am in love with someone else. She leaves the restaurant and goes and see Bette
really appreciate the thought. but no thank you. it just wont work. then runs screaming out of the restaurant, no that wouldnt be nice. but funny. smiles, your getting on my bad, side. heehee. im still at a lose as to what bette thought tina meant, by your mine. that, in my head, usually means something. ;) so …. splain it to me girl. get another one up and let us see the answer. thanks.
please dont leave me like this i need to kno what her answer is !!
K
Well crap. Great chapter. I hope Tina say no. Love it.
No Smile it is not hate hate hate…. Because I trust you to make Tina do the right thing for herself. I still love your story post soon :-)
What do u mean by stopping there…..”Eric I” AAAARRRRGGGGGHHHHHHH!!!! I loathe cliffhangers!!!!! UGH I’ll hate it even more if Tina says yes!!!! YUCK, YUCK!!!! On the bathroom note… where I’m from our public bathrooms r really clean especially the ones in restaurants. However I agree with u the ones in NY r horrible, so NO WAY WOULD I EVEN ATTEMPT 2 HAVE HOTT MONKEY SEX IN ONE!!!!! LOL!!!!! POST SOON with Tina sayin I love someone else or Eric I can’t ’cause I’m a lesbian!!!!
Eric I love a woman named Bette! So simple :)
I didnt get a chance to comment on the previous chapter, so I’ll do so here.
OH SHIZNIT! ….. This was funny….no, believe me….it was realllllllly funny!
Whatever had happened, it had to wait until school was out…..Waiting is the thing that usually kills Alice.
Ok, now on to this chapter…
“Eric, I…” Smile, you are getting way too fucking good with the cliffies. I could reach out and strangle you right about now. -_- Please dont let Tina muck this up by accepting his proposal.
As far as Cecelia is concerned, I see right now that she hears what she wants to her. Bette didnt commit to anything. All she said was “let me think about this,” and Cecelia has taken those words as a sign that she and Bette are going to work again on “us.” Do me and everyone else a facor Smile….get rid of her. Matter of fact, have her meet Eric. How’s that for your storybook Eric?
dammit, does Bette know where the hell this dinner is? she needs to show and finish Tina’s sentence for her.
“Eric I am sorry but Tina is in love with me, and this will not end well for you. It’s just not in the cards buddy.” LOL!! anyway I hope Tina does the right thing here.
great chapter!!!
Hopefully she fainted so she doesn’t have to answer yet.Give her sometime or just say NO and RUN LIKE THE WIND herheheheh…THANKS FABULOUS CHAPTER..PLEASE POST SOON..
Hey smile I’m still Love your Story OMG! I can’t wait to see if Tina accept Eric married proposal OMG! this is getting intense Thanks smile Please continue post soon.
HELL NO…I can’t marry you. That is the answer. God..these cliffhangers kill me. please post soon
Oh man you can’t leave us like this, I can’t wait to see what Tina say hope she said she can’t. Post soon please, thanks!
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Tina is going to say yes! Why you ask? Because I just know. I’m psychic.
If she doesn’t say yes she will faint and try to avoid the answer to eric’s question after she recovers.
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It’s funny I thought I had scared you off with my response to your pm. Sorry about that….so now you see why I didn’t come out and just say it my comment…
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I think it’s cool you use shiznit a lot. I myself use “Oh snaps” or “oh snaps crackle pop” and my personal favorite “the shizzle” a lot.
V
I almost forgot to answer your question……….
I didn’t go anywhere I was just really busy with some work I had to get done before school started. So no I didn’t have any fun. lol
I…I…like girls. IS that wrong??? Hee hee hee. Love this story really! If she says yes like many of us did once. It will end…sadly for one. New beginning for the other. Just as nature intended:) Please keep the story going!
“I SURE AS HELL WON’T CAUSE I’M MADLY IN LOVE WITH A WOMAN!!!” I think that’s what she’ll say. . .hahaha. Okay, maybe not quite as loud and bold. . .pleeeaaase post soon!
I’ve been so behind on all the stories. Just caught up with yours. No way you left us hanging, you guys all love to torment us. Tina, the answer is Eric your a nice guy, I care about you, but NO I don’t think so, and then she needs to go find Bette. Cecilia, adios baby. Poor Alice she’s dying I know it,hasn’t had enough time with the two to work her tricks. Love this story, looking forward to the next update.
Eric, I can´t…I´m in love with someone else!!!!!!!!!!!…Tina just say it and leave the restaurant and go see Bette.
Wonderful update smile…so do keep going and yes I´m working on mine. Do post soon
Aw,c’mon on!!You end it there?? By the way, liked your anecdote about the BO cause I had similar experiences(who knew there was so much BO in the world??) and my friends and I literally were on the floor laughing.
I should have known that you would leave it at this. Well, although Tina and Bette are both distracted I trust that you will lead them together. You do know that they are destined to be together, don’t you? Great chapter, I just wish that you will post another one soon. Kiitos!
yea i do like the word shiznit my friend says it all the time thinking shes cool but really its just funny. Ughh stupid cliffhangers! this chapter was very good and tina needs to tell eric the truth and then go find bette!!! POST SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Arrr… why why? Why 2 ppl in love cannot be together? :P
OMG… I would have this serious urge to say yes if I’m Tina :P … hahaha… it’s just soooooo… touching… a book of their lives and meetings… wow… great idea… :D
Yes, I’m reading at home :D
No worries, I’ll wait patiently for you to take your time to build the house :)
Hahahahha… B&T are driving you crazy but you’re driving me crazy with this story :P
Just two letters NO
Fainting will not help just say no!!!!!!!!!!!