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    Letting Go – chapter 20

    Story written on October 9, 2005 by smile12345.
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    It’s been a long night!

     

    “So, Bette, what brings you here today?”  Eric finally broke the silence at dinner.

     

    “Oh, I uh…uhh…”  Bette searched for an answer, but none of them seemed appropriate.  She couldn’t say ‘Well Eric, I was here making out with your girlfriend,’ no, that’s wrong, scratch that.  ‘I was hoping to convince her to break-up with you,’ no…that wasn’t right either.  Ooh, how about…  ‘I’m head over heels for Tina.  I’m scared out of my mind that I might lose her, but at the same time, I’ve never been so willing to take a risk either,’ it was the truth, but…inappropriate too.  Bette finally settled on, “I heard she wasn’t doing well, so I just came to see how she was doing.”

     

    Tina was starting to make groaning noises as she moved her head from Joanna’s shoulder to Bette’s shoulder.  “Baby, I don’t feel too well…I think I want to throw up…” she said with her eyes closed.

     

    ‘Baby,’ Tina must’ve been referring to her boyfriend Eric.  He stood up from his seat and walked behind Tina and Bette, “Come on Tina, let’s get you to the bathroom before you throw-up all over my boss’s daughter,” he said jokingly.

     

    When Eric pulled Tina up, Bette stood up with her, “Let me help you Eric.”

     

    “It’s okay, Bette, I think I’ve got it.”

     

    Joanna stood up from her seat, and took her sister from Eric’s arms, “Mom, dad’s going to miss you soon, why don’t you and Eric go now since we’re just about done with dinner anyways?  Bette and I can take care of Tina, Eric, would you mind taking my mom home now?  Thanks!”  Joanna led Tina and Bette towards the restroom.

     

    Before Eric could respond by saying that he wanted to stay and take care of his girlfriend, his words were swallowed when Tina threw-up, and most of it landing on Eric’s woven shirt and tie, and dripping down to his pants.

     

    Bette and Joanna both were wide-eyed with their jaws dropped as they looked at Eric.

     

    “I guess you really better get going now, Eric, you can take my mom home and change into one of my dad’s shirts.”

     

    Eric rolled his eyes as he had no choice now, “Yeah, let me just get out of this real quick since Tina no longer needs the bathroom.”

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    1. I have enjoyed your story. If you will write another story, if we say save the hardcore drama for another story, then save it. But please continue with this story, lightheartedly(is that a word)? Thanks

    2. Not so into the “hard core” drama with this particular story. I believe an alternate venue would do nicely… B&T are gonna get it together in this story any time now… I just know it:-) Please post soon!

    6. oops. sorry i enjoyed this chappy. glad hse threw up on eric. that should tell him volumes. love her sister. her mom reminds me of mine. so keep her away from me. heehee. please again soon. thanks. i think al needs to help with this also. maybe hook up with tinas sister.

    9. Good chapter. Tina so cute when she’s drunk, glad Bette there with her and they so cute together, Joanne is so cool. Ok well now I think its time for drama and let see what’s next, thanks!

    13. *waving at the screen*. Smile where have you been my mind has missed you terribly. I love reading this story and I can’t wait for more. As far as the hardcore drama, I leave that up to you, I trust your judgment. This is a great story and I don’t want it to end anytime soon, so do what you must.

      Listen, I’m going into the hospital on the 18th for surgery and will be in for at least 5 or 6 days. Please tell me that when I get home, there will be more of this story for me to read. I will be off work for probably 6 weeks so I’m counting on you and some of the other fan fic writers to keep me entertained during my recovery.

    14. This is after all your story and it has not had the heavy stuff. Do as you must for the sake of the story. Enjoying it. Seems tht the girls will get together before too long, so let’s try not to have any rough stuff. Thanks

    17. This chapter was HILARIOUS! I couldn’t stop laughing at Tina kicking “the body” out of her bed. Great stuff.
      If your new idea involving more drama would fit into this story, have at it. If not, you should start another. It’s your story, do what you will. I’m sure it will be great either way!

    19. Okay first, I mean this in the sincerest way BUT where the F**k have you been??? I was seriously missing your story…lol!! Don’t go away for an extended amount of time,this site is the dealer and the stories are the drugs. I need my fix before I die of withdrawals. Okay I have gotten that off my chest, now for the comments. I am loving this chapter, when is Bette going to meet the other sister who by the way (what a small world) is her hair stylist??? I love drama so what ever drama you have cooking please bring it into the fold. It will make the story that much interesting!!! Please post soon!!!

    21. Hi Smile… Great chapter… Well I think you should put the hard core drama in a other story. I like the lightness in this story… Because then I would have two storys to read from you… And that would be fantastic… But in the end it is you who deside what you want to do… Please post soon ;-)

    24. Nice to see you´re back smile…wonderful update as always….love the fact Tina kicked Bette out of bed…that made me laugh.
      If you want to put drama into this story it would be ok with me, you know I love drama. But it is your call if you want to write a second story just as long as you continue this one as well. Do post soon and yes I have already finished chapter 30 in my story today…just profreading it and hopefully it will be up and running tomorrow and yes I´m writing on chap. 31 so writersblock is gone this time.

    26. Hmmm. . .tough question. . .drama. . no drama. . .well, not-so-hard-core-drama is cool. . .AS LONG AS there’s some love, happiness and passion thrown in the mix. . .but hey, you’re the writer. . .keep us on our toes! Ewww the puke part was SOO GROSS. . .but the freakin meatball thing totally cracked me up! Lovin this story as always, please post again soon.

    28. Hey Smile What this is really Good Awesome Story and I’m just really happy to read it I’m really enjoy reading of this come on it’s really good chemistry with Tina and Bette I Love it and it’s getting funny too so Please continue Please Thanks!!!

    33. …..his words were swallowed when Tina threw-up, …..Bette gave Tina a quick peck on the lips, and pushed herself up from the bed using her arms.
      Ewwwwwww…..now that’s love cause my gilrs’ 1st stop would have been straight to the bathroom w/ some Colgate & Scope!

      “Sweet. Well, if you want, just grab some clothes from Tina’s dresser and change into them, and you can just scoot her ass over to one side of the bed so you don’t have to sleep on that chair. Or, if you want to, just take any of the two other rooms. K?”
      I like Joanna……a lot.

      Sorry guys, quick question. I have an idea of a story brewing up which involves more drama (Not super hardcore, but more…) would you guys want it in this story OR should I just save it for another?
      (running around in circles) ** singing ** DRAMA DRAMA DRAMA DRAMA DRAMA DRAMA ….. (insert wicked grin here)

      BRING IT!

    36. Drama heh… bring it on :)
      Wow… it has been 2 week? I had to re-read Chap19 to recall where you’d stopped :P
      Tina is sooooooooo cute when she’s drunk :) Yeah, she shouldn’t be drinking after her 21st birthday ‘incident’ ^-^ Kick off ‘the body’ on the bed? Gosh… that’s dangerous. :D haha
      Yeah, I’m getting lazier too… today my ‘cute’ roommate was like “You’ve changeeeddd… why are you getting lazier…” when she saw my messy bed with my clothes all over. Well, there’s no harm to get lazy sometimes right? Hehe ;)

    39. Glad your back with this update. Hah, how picture perfect was it for Tina to lose it on Eric. Don’t know if I want hard core drama in this one, cos they’ve already got so much going on. But it you do, can you make sure it come back around for the girls.

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