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Letting Go – chapter 19
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Previously in chapter 18:
“Why are you knocking? Don’t you have the keys right there?”
“Uh-huh” Joanna just nodded as she prayed Tina heard the door, and would come answering it before her mom pushed it open.
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“Someone’s at the door!” Bette and Tina quickly pushed themselves off one another as they had continued their make-out session.
Chapter 19:
“What’s wrong with you tonight, Joanna?” Ms. Kennard asked as she observed her daughter’s peculiar behavior. Without further questioning, she reached her hand in front of Joanna and opened the door.
‘Please stop making out, please stop making out, please stop making out…’ Joanna wished in her mind as she crossed her fingers.
“So this is how you make it.” Tina said with a nervous cracked voice.
“Oh…” Bette replied, having no idea what she was staring at as her head was leaning over Tina’s shoulder from behind; pretending Tina was giving her culinary lessons.
Tina glanced over at Joanna and silently mouthed a “thank you” and Joanna replied back a “you’re welcome” with a smirk and wink.
“Tina, you never cook! I’m guessing you have some good news for us tonight.” Ms. Kennard said. She was full of content realizing that Tina was going to say yes to Eric’s proposal.
“I…uhh…” Tina didn’t know how to reply to her mother.
Her parents never liked Tina’s previous boyfriends, and for Ms. Kennard to be so fond of Eric was rare. Tina and her sisters often joked about how their mother had a little crush on Eric; always introducing him to the family, friends, and neighbors.
What was Tina to do? On one hand, she didn’t want to disappoint her parents, especially her mother. Ms. Kennard always put her children first, always making sure they had what they needed, wanted. In many ways, she sacrificed herself to provide her children with a better life. She never asked much out of her daughters, her main concern was that they finish college, find a job, and eventually settle down in marriage. Step by step, her daughters had followed that path their mothers paved for them. It wasn’t a difficult one, but a rather simple path. For Tina, if she married Eric, and completed her path, her mother would feel that she succeeded with one daughter. How was Tina ever to break her mother’s heart by saying she wasn’t in love with Eric, never was, never will be, and the only person who could ever take her heart was that woman standing behind her?
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Great chapter as always!!
OMG, I need a drink and I’m not even there. Tina girl you just gotta go for it, with everyone there otherwise this is going to get messy. Poor T. Great update, love Joanna maybe her and Alice should get together.
I smell some very good drama coming there way and I love every minute of it!!! Love Joanna!!!
ha ha ha thats awesome..it’s going to be one very interesting dinnerlol…keep posting lovin the story
whoa!!! i have a feeling tina isnt going to be happy about not knowing this o and btw i loooove jona lol shes soooo greaat hahah looooove her heeh ok well AMAZING chapter and please post soon thanx Byeness<339837259823759876389
ooooohh I love it. Perfect way to keep me hanging.
By the way. I’m a little scared to post it that’s why you haven’t seen it. I promise it’ll appear soon enough.
I love your narration in the story :
Yeah, Joanna was a biatch, so what, she was a fun biatch!
and yeah you were right this is better….
“You two know each other?”
and he works for Melvin?… oh boy…
great chapter and there is some drama on the horizon..I feel it.
albeez to tina. you cant even imagine what marrying for the wrong reasons is like. being with someone who obviously doesnt get you. just saying. it might be painful for a minute but dayum its so worth being honest. so be strong. you have bette and sis there for ya and will protect you.
Great chapter smile sounds like things are getting interesting post soon!!!!!
AHAHAHAHAHA! I LOVE this story! Please post again soon! Joanna reminds me of my younger sister.. . she is a biatch all right, but her comments never cease to crack me up. Well, unless they’re about me of course, then i just smack her. Haha, just kidding, I’m not abusive. . .well not really :) ANYWAY, keep em coming! Oh, and good luck on your test!
can’t wait to see how this dinner turns out-post soon
Wow and the drama begin…. Great Chapter:-) Tina be strong you can do it.. Bette help her… ok I love this story.. Keep the chapters comming… Please
ah small world indeed. can’t wait for your next post.
Great story! You really have a gift for writing. I totally know what you mean when it comes to the Praxis II. I just took my Curr. Inst. Asses. test last weekend! Agh!! Talk about a total stress relief for getting it over with. Best of luck to you on whatever Praxis II you are taking!!! =)
Hey this is getting so funny and intense LOL! I Love it Please continue post soon Thanks!
this was so funny dinner shjould be really intresting
wow! lol..I just caught up on the last 2 chapters and I must say you really know how to tease your readers!! lol I love that they are stuck now with Mom and Eric!! I love Joanna too, she’s a cool biach!!
The situation that is going on is real funny and interesting at the same time. Good Job.
Excellent. The dinner will be very interesting. Why are men so clueless sometimes…or most of the time? Hopefully Eric will see that there is something between T&B. And that he will not propose in front of them all. Then again, it would be interesting to see Tina refuse to proposal and give the exact reason for the refusal. Kiitos for another great chapter!
Damn drama is coming and its excited to see it, what Bette and Tina gonna do it. Damn Joanne is so fucking funny and love her. Ok let see whats next!
WOW Dramatic..that was Great!..So0o0o…wrth the wait..I luv Joanne..the typical evil sister..Tina needs sum wine – alcohol is liquid courage&confidence..& She needs 2 dump Eric’s ass Quick cuz that dude is annoyin..PLEASE mst Post so0N..
:D Goody… goody… goody…
Wow… all at one table, that’s gonna be really interesting especially with Joanna in it… :)
And wow… I really like the aggresive side of Tina :) she seems like the one making the first move all the time :)
Nooo… haven’t gotten my milkshake yet :( you still have leftover? Maybe you can post me some? hahaha
footsie under the table for bette & tina
Maybe Joanna can tell Eric to get the hell out of dodge and Bette can then tell him that her sister likes him. Too much. love it.
Oh Yeah, it’s going to be a great dinner..Does Joanne know Bette from somewhere?Maybe Joannne’s is a lesbian and hit on Bette???FABULOUS JOB SMILES.PLEASE POST SOON..THANKS
“…I tell myself not to give up on this story.”
Please, oh PLEASE do not give up! This is a great story…perfect mixture of drama and humour.
And now I’m left wondering how Tina’s going to handle this dinner…she’s already used her Fainting card…I suppose she could feign choking on the entree to keep avoiding the inevitable… nah, c’mon Tina, be strong!
Sorry I have been gone so long Smile…..love the updates you have postet for us…how is Tina going to get out of this one and will she tell the truth to everyone….as for my story..well it´s not doing great at all. I´m stuck…sorry, but do post soon