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Letting Go – chapter nine
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‘Whoa, snap out of it, what are you thinking?’ Bette’s eyes widened and she felt the shame creep through her cheeks as they turned pink filled with embarrassment.
That smirk didn’t go unnoticed by Jamie, “You freak, you’re thinking dirty thoughts aren’t you?” Jamie shouted.
Bette’s eyes were still on the mirror, but she had focused them out and started rolling her eyes in several directions while all she said was “No…”
Jamie took Bette’s expression as a “yes,” and said “Alright, that means you’re going!! I’ll call you Friday night, and you better not fake on me!”
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After Bette’s hair appointment with Jamie, she definitely felt more relaxed. The inches that Jamie trimmed off Bette’s hair were like inches of stress being chopped off. Bette felt lighter as the tranquility seeped into her body and into her mind. Talking to Jamie would make anyone feel better, and she did just that for Bette.
Of course the feeling wouldn’t last, as soon as Bette walked into the door of her apartment, guilt struck her, and the burden on her shoulders wore her down. There he was, Eric, sitting right there on her couch talking to her sister.
‘***** great,’ Bette let out a sigh as she noticed her inner thoughts, but she had to force a smile and say “Hi Eric, it’s nice to see you again.”
Eric quickly stood up from the couch and walked towards the door to greet Bette, “Hi Bette, it’s nice to see you too.”
“Hey sis,” Kelly waved from the couch.
For the last year, Kelly had done administrative work at her father’s law firm during breaks. While working, she and Eric had become friends, and the more Kelly got to know him, the harder she fell for him. He truly was a great guy, the whole package. However, Kelly didn’t stand a chance, because he was in love with Tina, and only Tina.
Who the ***** is his mystery girlfriend, no one in the office had ever seen her, and she never seemed to call him. What the ***** kind of relationship did they have? Tina, that ungrateful *****, she had such a great man right in front of her, and she didn’t ever seem like she cared. If Eric were Kelly’s boyfriend, she would never treat him that way.
“Well,” Eric continued, “I was just getting ready to leave, See you tomorrow Kelly, and it was nice seeing you again, Bette. You two have a great night.”
Just like that, Eric walked out the door. As he closed the door and was no longer in sight, Bette had wished that he had taken her guilt with him, but he didn’t. This was only Bette’s second encounter with Eric, yet, she felt his sincerity and kindness. Of course Tina was in love with him.
How on earth could she come face to face tomorrow with Tina, and then face Eric? She couldn’t do it, but she couldn’t resist either. There was that game of tug-of-war pulling and pushing at the same time, neither side willing to suffer defeat, therefore, meaning everything was in Tina’s control.
“What was he doing here?” Bette asked as she put her keys down on the counter by the door and tossed her coat on the couch while walking towards her room.
“We were just chatting,” Kelly’s voice was filled with hopelessness.
“About what?” Bette asked from her bedroom while she was changing.
“He’s going to propose to Tina.” Kelly’s voice now filled with admiration for Tina as she spoke.
“WHAT?!?!” Bette shouted.
‘Propose? Did I hear that right?‘
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Hey, I was about to ask you how’re u doing with your chap9. But surprise surprise, I log on and found your Chappy 9… Yippee… :D
Oh girl, your story is not going downhill, it’s still approaching it’s peak :) You’re doing so great, stop worrying about that anymore, focus more on your next chapter :P
Haha, again, you’ll still be doing great or much more better without my ‘help’ :P Hahaha, how can I not laugh at those dialogues, just picture the drawing that Tina was working on that made Alice quoted that way really cracks me up, and still do :D Hahahaha, hey, I really do find it romantic… super romantic of what Tina thought to Bette :) C’mon, appreciate your own writing a bit.
What what? Hahaha… you’re not trying to make Bette let go won’t u? Noooooo…
Hahaha, bad bad Bette, thinking of those… thoughts… but who can help themselves with a goddess in front of them?
Ok, now bring on the lunch and the clubbing night. :D
Oh fuck this is drama and what is Bette gonna do about this news, is she still go out with Tina for luch for tomorrow. Oh is Tina is Jamie’s sister, if its right that is a good twist. Ok post soon please, thanks!
hey smile! iam completely hooked to ur story.. please continue!
I think the story is great you should keep it going!!!!!
Tina must say no. Eric can cry back to Kelly. Please post soon because we need more. ; )
oh no!!
Hi Smile I want you to continue the story… I like it very much… Just have Tina to say no….Great chapter post soon
continuing to enjoy your story… you’re doing great!
Hey this is Amazing Please continue I Love it post soon Thanks.
I’m thinking Tina is Jamie’s sister.
umm… sure… right… you don’t know what you were writing. So, Tina and Eric are doing the enggagement thingy huh. Hmm… the tug and war game is sure getting more intriguing.
K,
loved this chapter. oh the possibilities!!! I can’t wait to see if Tina breaks up with Eric and goes out to the club with the girls. so is Kelly and Eric going to end up together? hmmmm. oh yeah I love Jamie, she seems fun. with her and Alice talking some sense into Bette, she should be able to deal. but who does Tina have to talk to?
please post soon. love this beginning.
Whoa,is Jamie, Tina’s sister? That would be so funny, how they are connected in different ways. Wow, proposal?! Poor Eric, is going to be so disappointed. But, then Kelly would be happy to make him feel better, I’m sure. Hope Bette doesn’t just give up and let Tina slip away.
OK….somehow Bette has to get to T’s apartment tonight and tell her how she feels…and then the ball is in T’s court..
Thanks for the update smile…and you do have to continue this amazing story here….we want more girl…..and regarding my own story..well the next chapter is comming along nicely and will be up in the beginning of next week……do post soon
Smile, please keep posting; you’re doing great.
nzgrl, you just may be on to something; I didnt put the 2 together until your comment.
sile why wouldnt you continue this story. its great the storyline is great. if you know where your going lead and well follow. someone needs to take charge here. will it be bette, tina , alice. clubbing sounds great for them just to chill.
nzgrl interesting idea.
HEY SMILE’S PLEASE CONTINUE THIS STORY..YOUR DOING AN EXCELLENT JOB..I like Jamie she seems cool..OH and Sag’s aren’t that Bad I happen to be one..and traditionally,Sagitarrians are the hunters of the zodiac.In love,as the other areas of their lives,the challenge of the chase is all-engrossing,and may even be more exciting than the capture.PLEASE POST SOON…THANK YOU
Oh Dear Heart, I sincerely do think you need to continue with this story. Besides, the locket, I suspect, is going to play an important role in the B&T relationship. Do not give up….this story is definately going somewhere. Five Twinklers!
Great story….please continue with your excellent writing as long it´s a happy B&T story :o))