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Letting Go – chapter nine
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“Fine, I will, what’s her sign?”
“I don’t know, she has a birthday in December,” Bette was thinking back to the day when she and Kelly ran into Eric at the restaurant.
“When in December?” Jamie was trying to decide between Capricorn and Sagittarius.
“I don’t know, maybe like late teens or early twenty-something.” Bette was beginning to narrow down her choices when she zoomed into her memory.
“Damn it woman, which one is it, it makes a huge difference, you know?”
“Okay, I think it’s before or on the twentieth,” Bette was now just taking a shot in the dark.
Besides, how accurate could astrology possibly be? She could take any one of the twelve signs, read off their characteristics and say “Hey, this is so me,” to all of them. At this point though, Bette wanted help, anything would be fine, even if it meant searching for answers in something silly like astrology.
“Okay, I’m saying she’s a Sagittarius then.” Jamie said.
“What are Sagittarius’ like?” Bette asked, she wanted to learn more about Tina’s personality, even if it was through astrology.
“Oh damn, Bette, a Sagittarius? Hahaa, *****.”
“*****? What are you ‘shitting’ for?” Bette wondered.
“My sister is a Sagittarius too, and I have no idea what’s up with her.”
“Why, what do you mean?”
“My sister’s dating this guy right now, and he’s like super hot, he’s got a nice car, he’s rich, and his family has a ***** load of money. Besides that, he’s so good to her, like he’s actually thoughtful, he makes her laugh, and he doesn’t even look at other girls. You know what’s most bizarre? He’s so down to earth, not at all arrogant like other guys. Like, he’s the perfect man! What girl wouldn’t be in love, you know? He’s attractive alone just in the looks department!”
Bette could sense an “and,” coming up, so she asked, “and…?”
“Well, she’s not in love with the dude. Don’t ask me why either, if I had met him first, I’d be all up on him, and believe me, so would a truckload of other girls!”
“So…what’s your point?” Bette asked as she raised her eyebrows.
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Hey, I was about to ask you how’re u doing with your chap9. But surprise surprise, I log on and found your Chappy 9… Yippee… :D
Oh girl, your story is not going downhill, it’s still approaching it’s peak :) You’re doing so great, stop worrying about that anymore, focus more on your next chapter :P
Haha, again, you’ll still be doing great or much more better without my ‘help’ :P Hahaha, how can I not laugh at those dialogues, just picture the drawing that Tina was working on that made Alice quoted that way really cracks me up, and still do :D Hahahaha, hey, I really do find it romantic… super romantic of what Tina thought to Bette :) C’mon, appreciate your own writing a bit.
What what? Hahaha… you’re not trying to make Bette let go won’t u? Noooooo…
Hahaha, bad bad Bette, thinking of those… thoughts… but who can help themselves with a goddess in front of them?
Ok, now bring on the lunch and the clubbing night. :D
Oh fuck this is drama and what is Bette gonna do about this news, is she still go out with Tina for luch for tomorrow. Oh is Tina is Jamie’s sister, if its right that is a good twist. Ok post soon please, thanks!
hey smile! iam completely hooked to ur story.. please continue!
I think the story is great you should keep it going!!!!!
Tina must say no. Eric can cry back to Kelly. Please post soon because we need more. ; )
oh no!!
Hi Smile I want you to continue the story… I like it very much… Just have Tina to say no….Great chapter post soon
continuing to enjoy your story… you’re doing great!
Hey this is Amazing Please continue I Love it post soon Thanks.
I’m thinking Tina is Jamie’s sister.
umm… sure… right… you don’t know what you were writing. So, Tina and Eric are doing the enggagement thingy huh. Hmm… the tug and war game is sure getting more intriguing.
K,
loved this chapter. oh the possibilities!!! I can’t wait to see if Tina breaks up with Eric and goes out to the club with the girls. so is Kelly and Eric going to end up together? hmmmm. oh yeah I love Jamie, she seems fun. with her and Alice talking some sense into Bette, she should be able to deal. but who does Tina have to talk to?
please post soon. love this beginning.
Whoa,is Jamie, Tina’s sister? That would be so funny, how they are connected in different ways. Wow, proposal?! Poor Eric, is going to be so disappointed. But, then Kelly would be happy to make him feel better, I’m sure. Hope Bette doesn’t just give up and let Tina slip away.
OK….somehow Bette has to get to T’s apartment tonight and tell her how she feels…and then the ball is in T’s court..
Thanks for the update smile…and you do have to continue this amazing story here….we want more girl…..and regarding my own story..well the next chapter is comming along nicely and will be up in the beginning of next week……do post soon
Smile, please keep posting; you’re doing great.
nzgrl, you just may be on to something; I didnt put the 2 together until your comment.
sile why wouldnt you continue this story. its great the storyline is great. if you know where your going lead and well follow. someone needs to take charge here. will it be bette, tina , alice. clubbing sounds great for them just to chill.
nzgrl interesting idea.
HEY SMILE’S PLEASE CONTINUE THIS STORY..YOUR DOING AN EXCELLENT JOB..I like Jamie she seems cool..OH and Sag’s aren’t that Bad I happen to be one..and traditionally,Sagitarrians are the hunters of the zodiac.In love,as the other areas of their lives,the challenge of the chase is all-engrossing,and may even be more exciting than the capture.PLEASE POST SOON…THANK YOU
Oh Dear Heart, I sincerely do think you need to continue with this story. Besides, the locket, I suspect, is going to play an important role in the B&T relationship. Do not give up….this story is definately going somewhere. Five Twinklers!
Great story….please continue with your excellent writing as long it´s a happy B&T story :o))