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Letting Go – chapter nine
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“You see, normally, most girls would jump at the chance to be with him, and believe me, they are, but she thinks he’s so annoying, and she can’t stand to look at him. She’s just so weird.” Jamie said in a sound of disbelief herself.
“Wow, thanks Jamie, that was a whole lotta help!” Bette said in a sarcastic voice.
“You’re welcome!” Jamie smiled.
“Why is she still going out with him then?” Bette asked quizzically.
“I don’t know, I guess it’s hard letting go. It’s not even like she can’t get other guys. She gets hit on ALL the time too!” Now Jamie was beginning to sound surprised by her last statement. THAT was weird.
Bette just responded by nodding her head.
“Overall,” Jamie continued, “Sagittarius’ are a good sign, just get to know your little hottie intern better. Then seduce her and she’ll be putty in your hands!”
Bette sighed a “Yeah,” out to Jamie. How was she going to have lunch with Tina tomorrow? Goodness, what if she couldn’t control herself? What if Tina couldn’t control herself? Yeah right, but nothing wrong with hoping, Bette could hope couldn’t she?
“Look Bette, just take it easy. Listen, you should come clubbing with me on Friday night, bring that hottie intern, and your friends, it’ll be tight. My sister bartends at this hot new club, and we’ll get comped the whole night, free entrance and free drinks!”
A night out clubbing? Goodness, Bette hadn’t done that for months, but she knew Alice and Kelly would definitely want to, but Tina? Did Tina even go to clubs? She sure didn’t seem like the type.
Jamie saw the hesitation in Bette’s eyes, but she wasn’t going to take “no” for an answer, she was going to persuade Bette to go if it was the last thing she did tonight.
“Come on Bette, you know you want to, plenty of other hot chicks will be there too!” Jamie said while wiggling her eyebrows up and down again.
What if Tina went? Thoughts of Tina all liquored up had Bette’s mind spinning in circles.
‘The things I can do to her…’ an evil smirk escaped Bette’s lips when only she only stretched out the right edge of her lips. Her eyes were now full of lust and her mind with evil thoughts.
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Hey, I was about to ask you how’re u doing with your chap9. But surprise surprise, I log on and found your Chappy 9… Yippee… :D
Oh girl, your story is not going downhill, it’s still approaching it’s peak :) You’re doing so great, stop worrying about that anymore, focus more on your next chapter :P
Haha, again, you’ll still be doing great or much more better without my ‘help’ :P Hahaha, how can I not laugh at those dialogues, just picture the drawing that Tina was working on that made Alice quoted that way really cracks me up, and still do :D Hahahaha, hey, I really do find it romantic… super romantic of what Tina thought to Bette :) C’mon, appreciate your own writing a bit.
What what? Hahaha… you’re not trying to make Bette let go won’t u? Noooooo…
Hahaha, bad bad Bette, thinking of those… thoughts… but who can help themselves with a goddess in front of them?
Ok, now bring on the lunch and the clubbing night. :D
Oh fuck this is drama and what is Bette gonna do about this news, is she still go out with Tina for luch for tomorrow. Oh is Tina is Jamie’s sister, if its right that is a good twist. Ok post soon please, thanks!
hey smile! iam completely hooked to ur story.. please continue!
I think the story is great you should keep it going!!!!!
Tina must say no. Eric can cry back to Kelly. Please post soon because we need more. ; )
oh no!!
Hi Smile I want you to continue the story… I like it very much… Just have Tina to say no….Great chapter post soon
continuing to enjoy your story… you’re doing great!
Hey this is Amazing Please continue I Love it post soon Thanks.
I’m thinking Tina is Jamie’s sister.
umm… sure… right… you don’t know what you were writing. So, Tina and Eric are doing the enggagement thingy huh. Hmm… the tug and war game is sure getting more intriguing.
K,
loved this chapter. oh the possibilities!!! I can’t wait to see if Tina breaks up with Eric and goes out to the club with the girls. so is Kelly and Eric going to end up together? hmmmm. oh yeah I love Jamie, she seems fun. with her and Alice talking some sense into Bette, she should be able to deal. but who does Tina have to talk to?
please post soon. love this beginning.
Whoa,is Jamie, Tina’s sister? That would be so funny, how they are connected in different ways. Wow, proposal?! Poor Eric, is going to be so disappointed. But, then Kelly would be happy to make him feel better, I’m sure. Hope Bette doesn’t just give up and let Tina slip away.
OK….somehow Bette has to get to T’s apartment tonight and tell her how she feels…and then the ball is in T’s court..
Thanks for the update smile…and you do have to continue this amazing story here….we want more girl…..and regarding my own story..well the next chapter is comming along nicely and will be up in the beginning of next week……do post soon
Smile, please keep posting; you’re doing great.
nzgrl, you just may be on to something; I didnt put the 2 together until your comment.
sile why wouldnt you continue this story. its great the storyline is great. if you know where your going lead and well follow. someone needs to take charge here. will it be bette, tina , alice. clubbing sounds great for them just to chill.
nzgrl interesting idea.
HEY SMILE’S PLEASE CONTINUE THIS STORY..YOUR DOING AN EXCELLENT JOB..I like Jamie she seems cool..OH and Sag’s aren’t that Bad I happen to be one..and traditionally,Sagitarrians are the hunters of the zodiac.In love,as the other areas of their lives,the challenge of the chase is all-engrossing,and may even be more exciting than the capture.PLEASE POST SOON…THANK YOU
Oh Dear Heart, I sincerely do think you need to continue with this story. Besides, the locket, I suspect, is going to play an important role in the B&T relationship. Do not give up….this story is definately going somewhere. Five Twinklers!
Great story….please continue with your excellent writing as long it´s a happy B&T story :o))