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    Letting It Fall To Pieces 1 – Circles

    Story written on July 26, 2005 by volvic.
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    Alice

     

    Conflicted emotions…

    “What do you think about moving in with me?”

    “Wait. Are you serious?”

    “You’re having doubts about us?”

    “No! Oh, my g- no! If anything, it’s the opposite. I’m just, I’m- things are going so good right now.”

    “Do you want to see other people? ‘Cause-”

    “What? Alice, where did you get that from what I just said?”

     

    Out of control…

    “Um, when you said ‘too fast,’ what’d you mean like? ‘Cause you and Tonya moved in together after, like, two days.”

    “Yeah, I know, that was part of the problem, Al. I- I like this. I like- I like… I like you, I like us, I like the way that we-”

    “You like me?”

    “I’m crazy about you, you know that! I’m just, you know, the other day, you freaked me out.”

    “I can’t believe you just said you like me.”

    “It seemed like it made you a little crazy, that’s all.”

    “Crazy?”

     

    With no closure… 

    “Well, I’ve said I’m sorry. I- I was just telling you how I feel.”

    “I didn’t know I was turning into someone who was all smothery and needy and codependent. I mean, gross. I can’t think of anything worse.”

    “Look, I mean, things have gotten super intense between us super fast, and I… I’ve never felt this way. I don’t know. I- it’s making me act weird.”

    “I think it’s good.”

    “I don’t want to be like that.”

    “Well, then don’t. Don’t. Don’t be… Lenny. Don’t smother the mouse. Just let it breathe, Alice.”

    “And the worst thing is, I can’t even call my best friend and talk to her about it.”

    “I know.”

     

    And loose-ends…

    “Stop what?”

    “Touching me. Kissing me. I can’t do this, okay? I’m not ready for all this.”

    “I don’t believe you. I don’t think I’ve ever met anyone more ready in my entire life.”

    “I know… I’m *****. And when I hide that, I hide the best part of me. But you don’t understand what it means to be me. My clock is ticking, Lara, and- and you want to have ***** in the street.”

    “Is this about the ad campaign, or something? Did your manager scare the ***** out of you?”

    “It’s just, I can’t stand to be judged by you all the time. You’re a bigger, better person than me and every time I look at you… I’m reminded of that!”

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    2. Oh my, snif! I don’t know how I’m gonna watch this on the series, but this mean you’re gonna give us some little Helacious, lol tha’s a good thing :P

    3. WOW.SWT.Volvic ur on 2 sumthing here…this is sum deep shit…Great stri..’I’m Luvin it’..sum of the best wrk I have read in a Long time..thnx 4 writing..dun stop..PLEASE mst Post so0N..

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