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Lifeless Chptr. 10
The truthful confession made Tina smile and immediately washed away her instant panic that something was wrong with the baby, it slowed the jumping patter in her chest as she allowed her shoulders to fall. She had guessed that this was the first time that Bette had admitted to the possibility of failure on her part. “I haven’t really had anybody look at me like that with worry on their face in a long while.” Tina said and saw Bette turn her head with blushing cheeks. “No it’s sweet, really it is. I can’t say that I’m not disappointed, but I completely understand. You really don’t need to show me any type of preferential treatment really, and I really do appreciate you coming here to tell me.”
Bette exhaled and sat back relieved that Tina was so understanding. Tina gave a small smirk at Bette instantly unwinding and relaxing into her seat, “You remind me so much of our neighbor back at the apartments. This little Greek woman with a wonderfully thick accent was really sweet and very concerned about my safety. Right when Rick went out of town we had a bunch of burglaries, and she was so concerned about me being home by myself so, she convinced me to stay with her.”
“Smart woman.”
“I guess so because my first night in her home, my apartment was robbed. She was always so worried about me coming home late after that. It was sweet.” Tina’s eyes were locked onto the edge of the table. It held no significance, but she couldn’t look away from it. “I’m sorry,” she said breaking herself out of her own head. “I did not mean to blab on like that it’s just that you kind of remind me of her, your concern and worriment is very endearing.” Tina really meant what she’d said, in her business people were rarely if ever concerned about your well being unless it benefited them somehow. But here was Bette a woman she’d known for less than a year and she was so very much concerned about her health and safety that she’d doubt her own abilities.
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Bette had just slipped into her pajamas and already pulled back the covers to slide into bed when her doorbell rang and it was followed by incessant knocking. Without bothering with her slippers she raced to the door. She opened it to see Alice and Tasha on her doorstep.
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Are we going to get an epilog? Hope so. Wonderful story.
Just caught up with both your updates. Wonderful story and so very well written. Thank you for posting and giving us this story.
I loved this story…so touching…I really hope you grace us with an epilogue. Great writing…looking forward to more stories from you. Thanks!
The End WTF?
I cant believe that this is the end, i loved this story,thank ypu.
Just caught up with this great loving story. I feel Tina’s pain from the beginning. I hope they become an item. They truly belong together.Fantastic story.
I was really happy to see updates on this story but sad to see that you chose to end it. I hope you find time to do an epilogue or continue the story so that we know if their relationship ever moves beyond a friendship.Thanks for writing this.
Yup! You’ve been missing for so long! But…. This story made it worth waiting for! :-) thanks for remember to come back and posting netta
Yup! You’ve been missing for so long! But…. This story made it worth waiting for! :-) thanks for remember to come back and posting nettababy03! :-) … Though I can’t believe that this is the ending :-( …. It’s your call of course but may I add …. This is too good to be ended :-/ thanks for sharing this beautifully written bitter sweet story! I enjoy reading this from the beginning! :-)
Please continue writing,this can`t be the end.
Wonderful story! Are you going to give us a sequel?
Thanks so much for coming back to your magnificent story….. but “The End”??? Awww, would love for you to continue as your writing is a treat to read. Fingers crossed for a looooong epilogue!
i loved this story… just caught up… lets hope you give us a sequel… we need to know that bette stayed with tina and together they raised the baby and had a few more together… ok i no i’m getting ahead here… lol… please continue
Oh my, this can’t be the end, not now. Tina has to have the baby and let us know that she and Bette are together. Pretty please. Oh I see there is another post, hope it is a sequel. Thanks.
No, no, NO, No, I DO NOT believe it’s over.
Can’t believe it the end but hope the will be sequel, thanks for sharing this wonderful story with us!