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Lifeless Chptr. 10
Bette rose up a little and squeezed Tina as tight as she could, it felt like Tina cried harder the more she embraced her. “Are you ok, do you need me to call the hospital?”
“No…, no. I couldn’t stay in that house.” her soft tear filled voice registered with Bette. She knew Tina was still very much in her grieving phase and maybe today was the day that everything accumulated into this need to break down and away from her home. She was just so relieved that Tina was alright and here with her. She could feel Tina’s hold weakening on her and she released her to pull back and give her a final once over before she went into the house. She texted Alice that Tina was at her home and that she would call her to let her know why, in the mean time she used her disappearance as an excuse to go get Tina a quilt. She could feel the goose bumps on her exposed skin when she pulled away from her with her hands running down her arms.
She came back and could see the little shivers that Tina was experiencing. She draped it over her shoulders rubbed her hands up and down her arms, trying to warm her up and also trying to break this self imposed trance Tina would slip into. But the more she rocked Tina with her movements the more she felt powerless. Bette felt as though she wanted to shake her loose from these thoughts that drove her here, but she knew better than that. Tina lifelessly turned her attention back to Bette and she’d never seemed more empty than she did at that moment. Her eyes were so void and heartbreaking that they brought Bette’s movements to a stark standstill. She was determined to take Tina out of this pain tonight, she didn’t know why but she had to be the one to help her through this night. Tina’s tears just rolled down her emotionless face and it broke her heart. Still on the balls of her feet she opened up the blanket, took Tina’s hand squeezing it tight and hoped that Tina knew that she wasn’t going anywhere.
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Are we going to get an epilog? Hope so. Wonderful story.
Just caught up with both your updates. Wonderful story and so very well written. Thank you for posting and giving us this story.
I loved this story…so touching…I really hope you grace us with an epilogue. Great writing…looking forward to more stories from you. Thanks!
The End WTF?
I cant believe that this is the end, i loved this story,thank ypu.
Just caught up with this great loving story. I feel Tina’s pain from the beginning. I hope they become an item. They truly belong together.Fantastic story.
I was really happy to see updates on this story but sad to see that you chose to end it. I hope you find time to do an epilogue or continue the story so that we know if their relationship ever moves beyond a friendship.Thanks for writing this.
Yup! You’ve been missing for so long! But…. This story made it worth waiting for! :-) thanks for remember to come back and posting netta
Yup! You’ve been missing for so long! But…. This story made it worth waiting for! :-) thanks for remember to come back and posting nettababy03! :-) … Though I can’t believe that this is the ending :-( …. It’s your call of course but may I add …. This is too good to be ended :-/ thanks for sharing this beautifully written bitter sweet story! I enjoy reading this from the beginning! :-)
Please continue writing,this can`t be the end.
Wonderful story! Are you going to give us a sequel?
Thanks so much for coming back to your magnificent story….. but “The End”??? Awww, would love for you to continue as your writing is a treat to read. Fingers crossed for a looooong epilogue!
i loved this story… just caught up… lets hope you give us a sequel… we need to know that bette stayed with tina and together they raised the baby and had a few more together… ok i no i’m getting ahead here… lol… please continue
Oh my, this can’t be the end, not now. Tina has to have the baby and let us know that she and Bette are together. Pretty please. Oh I see there is another post, hope it is a sequel. Thanks.
No, no, NO, No, I DO NOT believe it’s over.
Can’t believe it the end but hope the will be sequel, thanks for sharing this wonderful story with us!