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Little Black Dress
Tina listened hard. There was definitely no movement coming from the bathroom. Maybe she should get up to check whether Bette was alright. Then she thought about how warm she was, and how she wanted that feeling to last a little longer, after all, what could be so wrong. Bette was only a few metres away from her. Tina let herself smile again, how glad she was that she had let Bette convince her to go away for the weekend. She had to be persuaded, but Bette knew just the buttons to press to make sure that she got her own way.
“T, are you home?” shouted Bette as she came through the door.
“I’m in the bedroom.” shouted Tina, in reply, knowing that Bette must have seen her car parked at the front of their house.
“I’ve had an idea, I know you’re not keen to leave Angie, but I really think that it would be a good thing for us to get away this weekend, what with everything that’s happened.” said Bette, knowing that she would have to work hard to get Tina to come around to her way of thinking.
“I don’t know Bette. Don’t you think that people need us to be here, and who would look after Angie if we just disappeared for the night?”
“I asked Kit if she would look after Angie, she would be happy to. It would be good for them to have some Auntie and niece bonding time, and besides, who really needs us? Shane? Alice? I don’t think that there is anything that we can do for them. I want some alone time with you T. Is that too much to ask?” said Bette, realising that she was close to pleading with Tina.
“Don’t you think that when we had a child together that we gave up on the concept of having any alone time?” said Tina, laughing at the imploring look on Bette’s face.
“Don’t make me beg Tina.” replied Bette, flopping down on the bed.
“I’m not making you beg, even though that would be fun.” laughed Tina some more, as she made herself comfortable next to Bette on the bed.
“What can I say that would make you want to spend the night with me, away from everything?” asked Bette, moving closer to Tina so that she could whisper in her ear.
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excellent writing but gaaa why did you stop there??
I felt the breath catch in my throat when I saw your name there! I love it when your name pops up and you never dissapoint. I miss reading your stories!
Where’s the rest great story, hurry please I want the next.
such a wonderful surprise to find another story from you :)
Great story, citygirl. I love when you post. Thanks
So happy to see another story from you citygirl!!! Love it!!! Thank you PPS
I was just thinking about you and recommending of your stories to a friend. Great to see a post from you. I hope all is well.
Welcome back and thank you for the Little Black Dress.
How lucky to get this great gift from you! Hopefully, it evidences that you’re in a fanfic groove again. Fingers crossed!!!!
damn for a minute there I thought someone was gonna die. the title of the story, Bette being in the bathroom for so long, then reading about Tina asking her why her breathing was so fast. Hopefully this is a fun story that continues to a NC 17 after this one.
Oh Yea citygirl is back and with such a lovely hot start. Thank you, Md aka Oma
Welcome back–you have been missed. I did a double take when I saw that you had written for us again. Thanks so much, Citygirl.
Is it wonderful to have you back!!!!! You are a gem to this site. Hope you can continue posting regularly, for you are a talent and a half. Thanks a bunch for this..but…did you forget a page 5 and 6 and 7? LOL!
Oh Man! I have no words :)This is one great story and you write so really well citygirl. Thank you for this..I hope there’s a continuation to this… :D
Citygirl YOU ROCK!
You were always good, and you still are.
This is good and like it. Please post more, thanks!
HOT HOT HOT!!!! PLEAAAAASE continue soon! I can’t get the image of Bette in a sexy black dress out of my mind now!!
and…????????????????????????
Please let there be MORE!!!!!!!!! PPS
Surely there is more somewhere, I just can’t seem to find it! PPS:)
Yippee!!! Citygirl posted!!!
Loved the chapter. But is this a one-off or will we get more. Please, pretty please. Too lazy to go back and look but did you write a story where Bette was in New York and was buying a little black dress and modeled it for Tina looking on from her computer in LA and the sales clerk, straight woman, was going gaa, gaa over Bette in the dress and Tina bought it for her. My memory isn’t what it used to be and I don’t remember the name of the story nor the author. Great chapter. PPS
Loved the chapter. But is this a one-off or will we get more. Please, pretty please. Too lazy to go back and look but did you write a story where Bette was in New York and was buying a little black dress and modeled it for Tina looking on from her computer in LA and the sales clerk, straight woman, was going gaa, gaa over Bette in the dress and Tina bought it for her. My memory isn’t what it used to be and I don’t remember the name of the story nor the author. Great chapter. PPS
If all else fails pull out that little black dress.Theres nothing more tempting
You gotta be fucking kidding me! Really soon as I get excited it ends there arghh!!!!