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Little Black Dress
Bette slipped the dress on over her head. She pulled the dress down and looked at herself in the mirror. She hoped that Tina would be happy with what she was about to see. Bette stepped into the high heeled shoes that she had brought to finish off the look. She felt powerful with the extra couple of inches that the shoes gave her. She thought about Tina, the way that she gave of herself when they were making love. A tiny shiver went down her spine.
“I can’t believe it.” gasped Tina, bounding out in front of hers and Bette’s house.
“You like?” asked Bette, smiling at Tina’s reaction.
“I love it. How long have we got in for?”said Tina, looking at the sleek convertible.
“Just for the weekend. I didn’t think that you would want to go for our romantic night away in the mom mobile.”
“I don’t mind the mom mobile, and besides, it’s practical.”
“But not very sexy.” replied Bette, taking Tina’s hand and leading her to the car, opening the door so that Tina could slide in.
“Thank you, for making this special.” replied Tina, leaning over to kiss Bette as she got in behind the steering wheel.
“It’s my pleasure.” said Bette, holding onto Tina so that she could make the kiss last longer, and deeper.
“You’re breathing heavy.” said Tina, as she pulled away slightly.
“It must be the effect that you have on me.” smiled Bette, as she turned the key in the ignition.
Tina listened more intently. There was definitely something going on in that bathroom, and she wanted to find out what it was. She gently eased herself off the bed and walk quietly to the bathroom. She listened at the door, and almost opened it but something stopped her. If there was one thing she knew about Bette, generally she was worth waiting for.
“Not yet, just hold on a little more. I promise it will be worth the wait.” replied Bette, holding Tina close to her.
“But I’m so close.” said Tina, grinding her hips against Bette, pleading for her release.
“Just a few moments more.” uttered Bette, moving her hand faster, feeling Tina’s urgency, her vulnerability.
“I can’t hold on any longer.” said Tina, feeling the warmth rise within her, a feeling way too powerful to resist.
“Come for me.” replied Bette, pushing her fingers deep within Tina, feeling a warmth of her own.
Bette sat down on the side of the bath. She reflected once more on the evening that she and Tina had been having. There was dinner, the gentle conversation, about Angie, Kit, and the rest of their friends. How could she have thought about giving that up. Bette shook her head. She had to stop thinking those thoughts. Tina was back, and Bette had every intention of keeping it that way.
Tina crept back into bed. She pulled the covers up over her and turned on her side. Whatever Bette was doing, she must have her reasons for doing it. It was then that Tina heard the door opening. Bette appeared from around the corner. Tina could feel the breath catch in her throat. Bette had put on the dress. Tina could barely believe the sight before her eyes. Bette was so beautiful, so sexy. She sprung out of the bed and grasped Bette’s face, their lips meeting in a passionate kiss.
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excellent writing but gaaa why did you stop there??
I felt the breath catch in my throat when I saw your name there! I love it when your name pops up and you never dissapoint. I miss reading your stories!
Where’s the rest great story, hurry please I want the next.
such a wonderful surprise to find another story from you :)
Great story, citygirl. I love when you post. Thanks
So happy to see another story from you citygirl!!! Love it!!! Thank you PPS
I was just thinking about you and recommending of your stories to a friend. Great to see a post from you. I hope all is well.
Welcome back and thank you for the Little Black Dress.
How lucky to get this great gift from you! Hopefully, it evidences that you’re in a fanfic groove again. Fingers crossed!!!!
damn for a minute there I thought someone was gonna die. the title of the story, Bette being in the bathroom for so long, then reading about Tina asking her why her breathing was so fast. Hopefully this is a fun story that continues to a NC 17 after this one.
Oh Yea citygirl is back and with such a lovely hot start. Thank you, Md aka Oma
Welcome back–you have been missed. I did a double take when I saw that you had written for us again. Thanks so much, Citygirl.
Is it wonderful to have you back!!!!! You are a gem to this site. Hope you can continue posting regularly, for you are a talent and a half. Thanks a bunch for this..but…did you forget a page 5 and 6 and 7? LOL!
Oh Man! I have no words :)This is one great story and you write so really well citygirl. Thank you for this..I hope there’s a continuation to this… :D
Citygirl YOU ROCK!
You were always good, and you still are.
This is good and like it. Please post more, thanks!
HOT HOT HOT!!!! PLEAAAAASE continue soon! I can’t get the image of Bette in a sexy black dress out of my mind now!!
and…????????????????????????
Please let there be MORE!!!!!!!!! PPS
Surely there is more somewhere, I just can’t seem to find it! PPS:)
Yippee!!! Citygirl posted!!!
Loved the chapter. But is this a one-off or will we get more. Please, pretty please. Too lazy to go back and look but did you write a story where Bette was in New York and was buying a little black dress and modeled it for Tina looking on from her computer in LA and the sales clerk, straight woman, was going gaa, gaa over Bette in the dress and Tina bought it for her. My memory isn’t what it used to be and I don’t remember the name of the story nor the author. Great chapter. PPS
Loved the chapter. But is this a one-off or will we get more. Please, pretty please. Too lazy to go back and look but did you write a story where Bette was in New York and was buying a little black dress and modeled it for Tina looking on from her computer in LA and the sales clerk, straight woman, was going gaa, gaa over Bette in the dress and Tina bought it for her. My memory isn’t what it used to be and I don’t remember the name of the story nor the author. Great chapter. PPS
If all else fails pull out that little black dress.Theres nothing more tempting
You gotta be fucking kidding me! Really soon as I get excited it ends there arghh!!!!