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Looking Back
“See, you really can’t dance. Now are you going to tell me about the quality of Cher that moved you to dance?”
I started laughing and pulled her to start dancing with me. She fought back though, and sadly won. As she walked from the dance floor, I toppled over, a bit from her quick exit from my hands, but more so from the tequila. As I tried to stand up, Dana came running up to me to help me up.
“Al, are you ok?”
“Where did she go?”
“Who?”
“The cute tomboy that was here a second ago?”
“I don’t know who you’re talking about.”
“Never mind” I stated while walking off of the dance floor, trying to find her. I went to the bar when I saw her being escorted from the bar, rather forcibly.
I walked over to the bouncer to ask what was going on. He explained that she was being asked to leave for starting a fight with me. I explained that we weren’t fighting, just old friends joking around. After a few minutes, he let her go and told her to keep her nose clean. To this day, I still don’t understand that quote, but whatever.
“Thanks a lot. I didn’t even realize you fell down.”
“No problem. Hey, I’m Alice.”
“Shane. Nice to meet you.”
“My friends are over there, want to join us for a drink?”
And that was that. She started off as the little sister of the group. We all had our moments of trying to play big sister to her. She always had such a hard exterior, but such a soft heart. It made you understand why her exterior was hard. Her heart was fragile and needed protecting. I think Tina did the most at trying to protect her. To this day, Tina has a different way about her when she’s around Shane. Shane has been through the ringer. She is the youngest of our little group, but has lived the most. And most people who have lived a lot in a short time were forced to due to circumstance. Rarely were those good circumstances.
I think what I have always been in awe of with Shane was her ability to care. She had been messed with so many times, by so many people who supposedly loved her, but she never lost that heart or that compassion. There aren’t a lot of people lucky enough to see that side of her. But for those of us who get to, it’s amazing in it’s purity. I think of all of us, she has the most compassion. She is the one who innately knows what you’re feeling and what you need. The nickname Yoda didn’t come from nowhere. She has earned it, over and over through years of friendship and love.
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(72 votes, average: 4.06 out of 5)
Awww this was great, seeme like Alice had brought them all together in some way, I like how it was from her POV. This was awsome, keep up the great work!
Oh, that was good. I like reading things from Alice’s POV. Plus we need a little background on how all of our ladies met. Nice work.
This was wonderful to read. Thank you.
Admirable. I’ve never liked Alice (or Dana) better, you gave her more depth than she usually has. And Shane’s crack about Cher made me laugh out loud. I just did a major move a few months ago. God I hate moving, good luck with it. Please, next time you post give us old fucks with the tired eyes and special glasses some larger print.
Nice story! I loved reading your take on how Alice met the gang. Thanks for sharing.
Again…beautiful.
Thanks for your writing, very good we can’t expect less from you.
This was great :D I’m so glad you decided to go for my challenge :D
I always love your stories. It’s nice to read a story that gives our girls some background as to how they all met. I also like reading things from Alice’s POV. Please continue!
What a robust post. Very nice. Good luck on your move. Thanks.
This was a really sweet story, i loved Alice’s POV and the fact she brought the gang together. I wish you all the best with your move.
I still hope there will be a next chapter of Drowning though.I hope you’ll get inspired again.
That was great. Thank you.
Wow that was such a great look back and story. So Alice and so spot on. thanks