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Looking Back
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She smiled as she walked over to my table. “Hi.”
“Hey Dana. Thanks for meeting me.”
“No problem.”
“Do you want something? Coffee?”
“No, I need to get to training in a few minutes. I just wanted to get the dry cleaning bill. I really am sorry about that. But I can’t be late, my trainer would kill me.”
“Wow, you still don’t breathe between sentences, do you?”
“What? Oh, yeah. Sorry, I babble sometimes when I’m nervous.”
“I make you nervous?” I smile as big as I can, trying to make her feel a little bit more comfortable, though the idea that I make her nervous does feel pretty good.
“Oh, no. I’m just not uh, good around new people. Sorry.”
“Are you sure you don’t want some coffee or something?”
She didn’t want any coffee and ran out the place within three minutes of being there. I tried to get her to stay, but it didn’t work. There was just something about her I couldn’t let go. So I called again, and then again and finally she agreed to lunch.
Lunch was pretty uneventful. She was definitely a closet case. As much as she tried to hide it, it was just there for anyone who bothered to pay attention. To be honest, I think that was issue, she wasn’t used to someone paying attention. We left lunch with a promise to do it again soon. Soon is apparently a relative term. It was two months later that we met again. This time it was Dana who had called. I had called once or twice, but it was obvious she wasn’t comfortable with my bisexuality or the idea of hanging out with my gay friends. I was more than a little surprised when she did call.
We ended up having dinner at a small little place in West Hollywood. Maybe it was the wine or the atmosphere, but she opened up. And that was it. I was hers from that day on. I remember talking to her for hours, about anything and everything. We spoke of things we hadn’t told others. We laughed over embarrassing childhood stories. Dinner ended when we looked around the place and saw the wait staff staring at us, then their watches, then at us. We were inseparable after that. Fric and Frac. We bickered like an old married couple. We held each other when we cried. We laughed at things no one else could ever understand.
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Awww this was great, seeme like Alice had brought them all together in some way, I like how it was from her POV. This was awsome, keep up the great work!
Oh, that was good. I like reading things from Alice’s POV. Plus we need a little background on how all of our ladies met. Nice work.
This was wonderful to read. Thank you.
Admirable. I’ve never liked Alice (or Dana) better, you gave her more depth than she usually has. And Shane’s crack about Cher made me laugh out loud. I just did a major move a few months ago. God I hate moving, good luck with it. Please, next time you post give us old fucks with the tired eyes and special glasses some larger print.
Nice story! I loved reading your take on how Alice met the gang. Thanks for sharing.
Again…beautiful.
Thanks for your writing, very good we can’t expect less from you.
This was great :D I’m so glad you decided to go for my challenge :D
I always love your stories. It’s nice to read a story that gives our girls some background as to how they all met. I also like reading things from Alice’s POV. Please continue!
What a robust post. Very nice. Good luck on your move. Thanks.
This was a really sweet story, i loved Alice’s POV and the fact she brought the gang together. I wish you all the best with your move.
I still hope there will be a next chapter of Drowning though.I hope you’ll get inspired again.
That was great. Thank you.
Wow that was such a great look back and story. So Alice and so spot on. thanks