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Lost & Found, Ch 11
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BETTE- (Softly…) “I don’t want to hurt you…but I want you so much.” (Bette’s is still motioning forward and Tina is slowly moving backward…)
TINA- “You will hurt me, and I will hurt you…whether we like it or not…your touch reaches into a place so very deep that hurt is inevitable…even if ever so small…the question is whether the substance that brings us together keep us together. All I know is that the way you touch me you will change me forever…for better or for worse.” (Tina’s back comes, ever so gently to meeting the wall…)
BETTE- (She strokes Tina’s face with her own as their eyes meet again…) “I never want to hurt you…but I fear doing it again…I’ve done it before. I was worried you weren’t sure…”
TINA- (Gazing into the eyes that destabilized her earlier…) “I’m not sure of anything…nothing’s for sure, nothing but this feeling for you…and no matter what, I know I’m falling in love with you…” (Bette stares and captivates the eyes to a daring yet now exposed soul. She gently brings her lips to Tina’s face again and strokes it with short pats and touches. As she slows the pace, her lips come closer to Tina’s mouth and almost without warning they graze it gently and pass to the other side of Tina’s face, not far from those lips and they caress, yet again, the soft and pale terrain. Tina can still feel the tingling on her lips as she feels the surface of Bette’s body introduce itself to her own. As the cascade of sensations and mild sighs and breaths mark the occasion, Bette’s lips come closer again to Tina’s, grazing their surface …but this time they go no further, as Bette moves her face back and reviews the yearning look of the eyes that behold her. She slowly looks back down and moistens her lips just before they grasp and suckle the mouth that awaited them. With the softest of kisses, and the gentlest of touches, their oral coupling sends radiating pulses of their inner selves throughout each other.
BETTE- (Ending the kiss as gently as she commenced it, she joins the sides of their faces to a playful interaction and then hugs Tina wholeheartedly as Tina falls into her…) “Lost lady, I’m so glad you found me.” (And with this, she feels the loving embrace of the lost lady, holding her ever so assuredly and as though just found.)
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T, that was a great chapter! I wasn’t sure just what your Author’s Notes meant (a little lengthy BTW)LOL, but once I read the chapter, I realized just what you were referencing. It’s good to know that I am not the ONLY Chicki in the world! ROFLMAOOOOOOO!!!! You sure had me grinning! Thanks and Post Soon!
I’m glad they finally made it past all the past girlfriends (and the other party guests) to get together (at last). I think given the late hour that Tina should stay there until the morning (at least).
You out did yourself..my heart was palpatating. It was beautiful. Is this the end or the beginning?
Beautiful. I loved the dialogue between Bette and Tina – funny, yet touching.
Hello…thanks to the small crew that’s still hanging in there with this story! Seems you brave few are diminishing! Should I have put an “R” rating on it? :) I just don’t do R/NC17 stuff too well, so I tend not to travel that road too often. Anyway, I just wanted to thank you all for reading and commenting. I hope you have enjoyed this story. I think that this chapter could work as a fitting end to this story, so since the cycle of “lost and found” was closed in this installment, I think this will conclude the Merlin tales…at least for now. I don’t know what, if anything, is next, but I hope that if I continue, whether through this story or another, and whenever that may happen, that you will join me again. Cheers everyone. Thanks so much for all your support.
**sigh** (long peaceful pause) just wow, really, really wonderful, felt every word, just think I’m gonna sit here and wallow in it for awhile, don’t mind me…
So sweet. That was lovely, Merlin… but don’t end it there!! Of course I’ll be reading, regardless of rating. Thanks for the post.
So sweeeeeet! :) Thank you a lot, darling! So mature and and also so adolescent ;)
I was just saying in the last chaptert that I wished Tina would stop running. Glad to see it happen so soon. Great post T.
Man I am so far behind. I am on vacation and not near a internet connection most of the time. I finally was able to catch up with the last two chapters. It seems that both women have been terribly hurt but yet can not seem to stay away from each other. That is what love and companionship can do to someone. The yearning that is able to jump start one into going after the the one that he/she wants. They say that it is better to have loved then it is to never have loved. Whatever is true both are very painful.
That was awesome and love it. Please post more, thanks!
amazing fiction!
i talk crazy sometimes when i feel nervous and i just say first things that come to my mind until i find the right words, this chapter felt that way to me…
That was such a great chapter, I can´t wait, please update soon!
oh wow, intense they are…pps
OMG, go tina, my mouth is still open and i have happy tears in my eyes and i love forrest gump, merlin you amaze me every single time. This one has left me speechless, like it did with meam et tuam and again i’m not first!!!! thank you
beautiful! ah, what else can i say?
VERY, VERY, NICE T. I have been a silent (because I have been VERY bussy) reader, but please KNOW that I have been enjoying this story and hope that you choose to continue it. I would love to see all of the family and friends reaction the what has happen to these two. as well as how their relationship continues to grow. I have always loved your writing. Please return or continue at your own pace :o).