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Lost & Found, Ch 11
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BETTE- “Presume? You don’t even know what I’m going to say…”
TINA- “Sure I do. And you know what, you’re being very presumptuous…you don’t know a thing about me…you don’t even know why I’m here…you don’t…”
BETTE- “Well excuse ME…Miss Phantom on my doorstep in the middle of the night who scared me half to death…” (Tina looks at her in some surprise…) “Why ARE you here Tina? Tell me…before I make an ass of myself trying to express my feelings…go ahead…explain, since you’re the one mysteriously appearing at like 2 in the morning on my front porch…”
TINA- “Apparently the ocean and fierce wind did nothing to exorcise those demons of yours…”
BETTE- (She glares at her as Tina stares with some intensity…Bette breathes in…) “You know… I once had a friend, her name was Chicki Valentine.”
TINA- (Her eyes squint…still in some annoyance and minor confusion…) “Chicki Valentine?”
BETTE- (She nods…) “Chicki Valentine.” (She comes around in front of Tina.)
TINA- “Ok.”
BETTE- “Right.”
TINA- “And this Chicki Valentine, she was what? Another old flame who was straight? Another confused woman in your life you managed to make a member of the Lesbian Patrol?”
BETTE- (Her mouth hangs open slightly as her head tilts a bit, and her eyes dart side to side as she explores the eyes of the lost blonde who somehow found her way into her life…) “Excuse me…?!”
TINA- “Well…Chicki Valentine?????????!”
BETTE- “Yes, Chicki Valentine…she was the best friend I had in school when I came out…for your information…”
TINA- (Matter of factly…) “Sounds like Gumby Malone…”
BETTE- (She looks confused and shakes her head…) “What?!”
TINA- “Yeah…and Swami Sue…and my neighbour, Auntie Maria “Steel toes” Parapapadopoulos…we used to call her Aunt Para for short…she was in construction…”
BETTE- (Rubbing her forehead…) “Tina…what the fuck are you talking about?!”
TINA- “What am I talking about? What are YOU talking about? Chicki Valentine you said…best friend when you came out…so it reminded me of some really decent and supportive people in my life…so what!”
BETTE- (Her eyebrows rise again…she gulps down the rest of her drink…and turns to Tina again…the blonde is smiling…) “What’s so funny?”
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T, that was a great chapter! I wasn’t sure just what your Author’s Notes meant (a little lengthy BTW)LOL, but once I read the chapter, I realized just what you were referencing. It’s good to know that I am not the ONLY Chicki in the world! ROFLMAOOOOOOO!!!! You sure had me grinning! Thanks and Post Soon!
I’m glad they finally made it past all the past girlfriends (and the other party guests) to get together (at last). I think given the late hour that Tina should stay there until the morning (at least).
You out did yourself..my heart was palpatating. It was beautiful. Is this the end or the beginning?
Beautiful. I loved the dialogue between Bette and Tina – funny, yet touching.
Hello…thanks to the small crew that’s still hanging in there with this story! Seems you brave few are diminishing! Should I have put an “R” rating on it? :) I just don’t do R/NC17 stuff too well, so I tend not to travel that road too often. Anyway, I just wanted to thank you all for reading and commenting. I hope you have enjoyed this story. I think that this chapter could work as a fitting end to this story, so since the cycle of “lost and found” was closed in this installment, I think this will conclude the Merlin tales…at least for now. I don’t know what, if anything, is next, but I hope that if I continue, whether through this story or another, and whenever that may happen, that you will join me again. Cheers everyone. Thanks so much for all your support.
**sigh** (long peaceful pause) just wow, really, really wonderful, felt every word, just think I’m gonna sit here and wallow in it for awhile, don’t mind me…
So sweet. That was lovely, Merlin… but don’t end it there!! Of course I’ll be reading, regardless of rating. Thanks for the post.
So sweeeeeet! :) Thank you a lot, darling! So mature and and also so adolescent ;)
I was just saying in the last chaptert that I wished Tina would stop running. Glad to see it happen so soon. Great post T.
Man I am so far behind. I am on vacation and not near a internet connection most of the time. I finally was able to catch up with the last two chapters. It seems that both women have been terribly hurt but yet can not seem to stay away from each other. That is what love and companionship can do to someone. The yearning that is able to jump start one into going after the the one that he/she wants. They say that it is better to have loved then it is to never have loved. Whatever is true both are very painful.
That was awesome and love it. Please post more, thanks!
amazing fiction!
i talk crazy sometimes when i feel nervous and i just say first things that come to my mind until i find the right words, this chapter felt that way to me…
That was such a great chapter, I can´t wait, please update soon!
oh wow, intense they are…pps
OMG, go tina, my mouth is still open and i have happy tears in my eyes and i love forrest gump, merlin you amaze me every single time. This one has left me speechless, like it did with meam et tuam and again i’m not first!!!! thank you
beautiful! ah, what else can i say?
VERY, VERY, NICE T. I have been a silent (because I have been VERY bussy) reader, but please KNOW that I have been enjoying this story and hope that you choose to continue it. I would love to see all of the family and friends reaction the what has happen to these two. as well as how their relationship continues to grow. I have always loved your writing. Please return or continue at your own pace :o).