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Lost & Found, Ch 11
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TINA- “Do you even remember what is was you were about to tell me before you mentioned…what’s her name? Chicki Valentine?”
BETTE- (Her mouth slightly ajar again, she raises her hands to her head and grasps her face in angst as she stands directly in front of the blonde…) “Oh God I need to go back to the shore again…”
TINA- (Almost deadpan…as she stares into the deep darkened gaze…) “Not sure what good that’ll do…as I said, clearly it didn’t work the first time…”
BETTE- “Tina, I am trying very hard to…” (Tina interrupts the mounting tone as she lands her hand on Bette’s shoulder…which causes Bette to forget what she was ‘trying very hard to’ do or say…all she could do was look and listen…her breathing almost stops…)
TINA- (She struggles to form words…she inhales and breathes deeply…) “I don’t understand why I feel the way I do, I don’t know why I feel this way, I don’t even know what I feel exactly, but I do know that I’ve never felt this way before.” (Bette’s eyes somehow deepen and soften all at once…) “I do know that my entire body feels what I do when I’m in the same room, or when I’m not in the same room and only my thoughts bring me here. I feel the way I do in every part of me and it runs so deep. I feel this way and something a bit more every time. Just when I think the feeling is familiar it changes…it becomes something bigger…it’s not just an infatuation, it’s not just a crush, it’s not a lost woman’s last resort to finding what she never thought she could ever have…and maybe it won’t last, maybe it won’t be reciprocated…maybe I’m really just a nutty lost New York blonde in the wild of West Hollywood and my heart will get broken and I’ll run back…run like Forrest Gump…back to the sanity of my favourite city…” (She smiles and Bette grins…) “…but I don’t care about that right now, I don’t want to think about that right now, I don’t know anything else right now other than the feeling itself…not why, not what, not what if…just the feeling you stir inside of me, like the waves and the wind on that shore that move right through me…I can’t ignore it or wait to see what happens to it without more…Bette Porter, I don’t know whether I’m straight, bi, gay, crooked or perpendicular…but I do know that I have feelings for you and I know that I seem to want you like no one and nothing else…all the time.” (Tina searches Bette’s eyes as she feels her skin flush over and her chest almost aching…) “And if all that isn’t in any way relevant to why you brought up Chicki Valentine, please forget everything I just said!” (Bette smiles and drops her head, shaking it a little, as Tina’s hand remains gripping Bette’s shoulder.) “I mean you could just pretend you didn’t hear all that and tell me what it was Chicki Valentine said…and I could tell you about Gumby Malone, and Auntie Maria “Steeltoes” Para, not to mention Swami Sue and …” (Bette’s head rises, her eyes resuming that intense gaze that had frightened Tina hours ago as they stood in the kitchen…she slowly moves forward toward Tina, which, with Tina’s hand still grasping Bette’s shoulder, causes Tina to move backward a bit. Bette stops, as her heart’s beating becomes pronounced. Tina’s hightened senses match a rising temperature within as she looks at Bette’s face and can think of nothing but the raging feeling that Bette provokes in her…and those eyes. Bette doesn’t move her body further forward, but she slowly and delicately moves her face a bit further almost touching Tina’s. And as the opposite breathes reverberate, Bette gently moves her face side to side as she playfully touches Tina’s nose with her own and then joins her forehead to Tina’s, sensing a touch of such gentleness and yet awesome impact enveloping her head and then her entire body. Tina’s arm collapses just a bit to allow Bette to bridge the small space between them as she place her other hand on Bette’s remaining shoulder, and Bette slowly takes hold of Tina’s waste. Her face navigates so that she finally feels the soft surface of Tina’s face with her own, causing their temperatures to rise and their collective physical sensations to fall …southward…)
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T, that was a great chapter! I wasn’t sure just what your Author’s Notes meant (a little lengthy BTW)LOL, but once I read the chapter, I realized just what you were referencing. It’s good to know that I am not the ONLY Chicki in the world! ROFLMAOOOOOOO!!!! You sure had me grinning! Thanks and Post Soon!
I’m glad they finally made it past all the past girlfriends (and the other party guests) to get together (at last). I think given the late hour that Tina should stay there until the morning (at least).
You out did yourself..my heart was palpatating. It was beautiful. Is this the end or the beginning?
Beautiful. I loved the dialogue between Bette and Tina – funny, yet touching.
Hello…thanks to the small crew that’s still hanging in there with this story! Seems you brave few are diminishing! Should I have put an “R” rating on it? :) I just don’t do R/NC17 stuff too well, so I tend not to travel that road too often. Anyway, I just wanted to thank you all for reading and commenting. I hope you have enjoyed this story. I think that this chapter could work as a fitting end to this story, so since the cycle of “lost and found” was closed in this installment, I think this will conclude the Merlin tales…at least for now. I don’t know what, if anything, is next, but I hope that if I continue, whether through this story or another, and whenever that may happen, that you will join me again. Cheers everyone. Thanks so much for all your support.
**sigh** (long peaceful pause) just wow, really, really wonderful, felt every word, just think I’m gonna sit here and wallow in it for awhile, don’t mind me…
So sweet. That was lovely, Merlin… but don’t end it there!! Of course I’ll be reading, regardless of rating. Thanks for the post.
So sweeeeeet! :) Thank you a lot, darling! So mature and and also so adolescent ;)
I was just saying in the last chaptert that I wished Tina would stop running. Glad to see it happen so soon. Great post T.
Man I am so far behind. I am on vacation and not near a internet connection most of the time. I finally was able to catch up with the last two chapters. It seems that both women have been terribly hurt but yet can not seem to stay away from each other. That is what love and companionship can do to someone. The yearning that is able to jump start one into going after the the one that he/she wants. They say that it is better to have loved then it is to never have loved. Whatever is true both are very painful.
That was awesome and love it. Please post more, thanks!
amazing fiction!
i talk crazy sometimes when i feel nervous and i just say first things that come to my mind until i find the right words, this chapter felt that way to me…
That was such a great chapter, I can´t wait, please update soon!
oh wow, intense they are…pps
OMG, go tina, my mouth is still open and i have happy tears in my eyes and i love forrest gump, merlin you amaze me every single time. This one has left me speechless, like it did with meam et tuam and again i’m not first!!!! thank you
beautiful! ah, what else can i say?
VERY, VERY, NICE T. I have been a silent (because I have been VERY bussy) reader, but please KNOW that I have been enjoying this story and hope that you choose to continue it. I would love to see all of the family and friends reaction the what has happen to these two. as well as how their relationship continues to grow. I have always loved your writing. Please return or continue at your own pace :o).