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Love Is A Fragile Thing 12
Tina was rubbing her stomach.
Baby, your aunty Alice is driving me crazy
Helena walks out of the bedroom.
Sweetheart who are you talking to?
The baby
Oh how sweet She gives her a kiss.
Tina notices a suitcase beside her.
What is that for?
I thought I told you I have to go to Chicagoand my plane is leaving in about another hour
What?
Im sorry darling I thought I told you
You didnt tell me you were going to Chicagowhat about the babyyou know the baby is due anytime
I know and I feel really bad, but this trip is important and I cant possibly cancel now
*****! How many damn trips do you need to take anyway?It seems like you havent been here lately!
Tina Im sorry, I will make it up to you okay? Just remember that these trips that I make is making the money for your center, and without the money where would you be?
***** you Helena (She grabs the suitcase and starts walking towards the door)
Oh *****, what did I say now?
***** you!!! You can keep your damn money! (She opens the door and throws out the suitcase) Get the ***** outI dont want to see your ignorant ***** around here again
Helena walks over to Tina.
Tina calm down, Im sure the baby wouldnt even notice if I was there or not, cant
Tina was furious.
What the *****? She couldnt stand her anymore, she ***** slapped her face, pushed her out and closed the door on her sorry *****.
Helena just stood at the door holding the left side of her face. ***** thats going to leave a bruise She picked up her suitcase, walked to the cab, and got in.
After Tina kicked Helena out she began to feel some pain coming from her abdomen. She sat on the couch and took a deep breath. She was rubbing her stomach and talking to the baby.
Im sorry you had to hear that babyI was just so upset, dont worry mommy wont be yelling that anymore
She was trying to take deep breaths because her stomach was beginning to hurt.
***** I think its time
She dialed Alices cell.
Tina! Are you okay?I know youre getting tired of me saying that but there had to be reason why you called, I just got done talking to Shane and I told her to
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(51 votes, average: 3.94 out of 5)
Love that Tina got rid of Helena, That the baby is born and seems to be okay, How3 will Bette take the baby name. Alive is like a hot air balloon. Put a hole in it and its not worth a flip.. Love this
great story continue
Excellent chapter. I’m glad Tina kick Helena’s ass and not with that bitch anymore. Now I hope Bette will fly back LA and stay with Tina and the baby soon. Alice is so funny, I just laughing and love it. Oh I don’t complaining about long chapter and I like to read long chapter so post soon, thank you!
please raspberry are you trying to kill all of us?..please fix this NOW..send Bette back to her wife and her baby i know Dani is fine..but Bette and tina are soulmates forever..thanks for another great chapter, but please stop teasing us post soon ;-)
C’mon! Please we really like this Awesome story you can fix this to Bette and Tina together again Please post soon.
no, not too long at all. Excellent chapter and wonderful story. I am excited to see what happens next!
Wow! So much drama oin one chapter- I loved it! I have a feeling that Helena isn’t completely out of picture, yet. Can’t wait to see Bette back in LA with her baby.
I love this story. I hope You keep Bette with Dani though and just make her and Tina really good friends. PLEASE Dont break Dani and bette up.
i´m sorry Nicole..but are you crazy or something..did you hear what did you say? Bette and Tina meant to be together no matter what..the time will close those 2 again and YOU raspberry try to fix this NOW!!!!
I LOVE YOUR LONG CHAPTERS. Now it is time for Bette to go back to LA and bring Tina and the baby to Sydney…..POST SOON…
Nice going. I hope you have Dani go with Bette back to visit Tina. I still like Bette & Dani together. They seem really cute. After all, in real life, the trauma experienced by Tina & Bette would be pivotal to a broken relationship many times too difficult to repair. Why not forge a new relationship b/w the two? Yes, people can be JUST friends.
OMG, Bette has to fly back to LA and see Tina and the baby – SHE HAS TO!!!
I want to know what you have planned.
I like long chapters, so i’m not complaining.
Thanks for the post and i’m really looking forward to finding out Bette’s reaction to the baby’s name.
OMG this is going to be good!!!!
And suddenly, Bette breaks into a medly of songs including “Should I stay or should I go?”, “Fooled around and fell in love”, and that old standard “If you can’t be with the one you love, love the one you’re with.” So, Porter, on Helena’s rather hasty departure and Becky’s not as hasty entrance, what’s it going to be?
Hey Bettezilla! get your ass back to LA and be with your wife and daughter…now move! and better make it fast……………..
Can’t wait to see where you take this. And there is no such thing as “Too Long”. Loved this chapter and can’t wait for the next one.
Okay, now that I’ve stopped laughing from slackers comment, I think I agree. Is Bette gonna stay with dee or leave to be with tee.
ok, love long chapters, need Bette to get back there or Tina to go there
I loved it and there is not chapter that is “too long”. Please post soon. I am addicted now.
Ay young, I know this make sound fucked up but… Bette needs to leave Dani’s ass (I dont care how good she’s been), and fly her ass back to LA to fight for her family. And I loved how Tina dropped Helena’s ass (Its about time). LOL, i crack myself up. Great chapter as usual update soon please.
I AM NOT COMPLAINING!!! I love long chapters. This is going to get interesting now that Helena is out of the picture. Can’t wait to see what happens when Bette comes home to see her new daughter. Great chapter, please post soon!!!
The worry about the length of the story as long as it’s good. I can’t wait for Bette’ reaction. Good Job. Thanks for finally get rid of Helena.
I love this story but I do miss “This Should Be Intresting”
Ok, I’m not so happy Bette missed the birth but now all you can do to make up for it is to get her ass back to LA and to here wife!!!!!
Raspberry, your updates are never too long :) Ok, so nows the time for Bette to get her cute ass on the plane back to LA – the sooner the better.