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Love Is A Fragile Thing 12
Aahh ***** Alice shut up! I think its time
Oh *****, okay just breath Tina, everything is going to be okay, damn I just called you not to long ago, what happened?
Helena is what happened, ah ***** Alice just come and get me, hurry!
Okay, okayUmm Im going to hang up now, I got to call the girls and Ill be there in no time at all, just hang in there okay?
Okay, just hurry *click*
Alice got a hold of the girls and she told them to meet Tina and her at the hospital and she arrived at Tinas apartment.
Tina?!
Over here!
She found her still sitting on the couch.
Oh Tina, come on, we got to get you to the hospital
She was pulling Tina up from the couch.
Aaahhh Alice that ***** hurts
Sorry, where is your bag?
By the door
Good
They were walking out the door.
Aahh *****, Alice I cant walk, it hurts too much
Tina you can do it, come on the car is just right over there, you see it?
They made it to the car and they finally made it to the hospital. When they pulled up Shane was already there at the emergency entrance standing with a nurse and a wheelchair. Shane opened the door for Tina.
How you doing Tina?
Just get me to the ***** delivery room and get this baby out of me!
Shane just stood there in shock.
Its okay Shane shes been talking like that since we left, she’s just really in a lot of pain so we better hurry up.
Yeah
Tina got into the wheelchair and she was pushed inside to a delivery room, with Alice in tow.
Its going to be okay Tina, just remember those breathing classes okay? Just breath in and out thats good She wasnt sure if she was talking to Tina or herself, but Tina had something to say in response.
***** the breathing Alice, you ***** breath, this ***** hurts!
The nurse got Tina changed with Alices help and got her on the bed.
The doctor is going to be in here to check on you
Thanks Alice was checking out the nurse and Tina seemed to notice what she was doing and she was quite annoyed with it. Alice finally snapped back into the situation at hand.
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(51 votes, average: 3.94 out of 5)
Love that Tina got rid of Helena, That the baby is born and seems to be okay, How3 will Bette take the baby name. Alive is like a hot air balloon. Put a hole in it and its not worth a flip.. Love this
great story continue
Excellent chapter. I’m glad Tina kick Helena’s ass and not with that bitch anymore. Now I hope Bette will fly back LA and stay with Tina and the baby soon. Alice is so funny, I just laughing and love it. Oh I don’t complaining about long chapter and I like to read long chapter so post soon, thank you!
please raspberry are you trying to kill all of us?..please fix this NOW..send Bette back to her wife and her baby i know Dani is fine..but Bette and tina are soulmates forever..thanks for another great chapter, but please stop teasing us post soon ;-)
C’mon! Please we really like this Awesome story you can fix this to Bette and Tina together again Please post soon.
no, not too long at all. Excellent chapter and wonderful story. I am excited to see what happens next!
Wow! So much drama oin one chapter- I loved it! I have a feeling that Helena isn’t completely out of picture, yet. Can’t wait to see Bette back in LA with her baby.
I love this story. I hope You keep Bette with Dani though and just make her and Tina really good friends. PLEASE Dont break Dani and bette up.
i´m sorry Nicole..but are you crazy or something..did you hear what did you say? Bette and Tina meant to be together no matter what..the time will close those 2 again and YOU raspberry try to fix this NOW!!!!
I LOVE YOUR LONG CHAPTERS. Now it is time for Bette to go back to LA and bring Tina and the baby to Sydney…..POST SOON…
Nice going. I hope you have Dani go with Bette back to visit Tina. I still like Bette & Dani together. They seem really cute. After all, in real life, the trauma experienced by Tina & Bette would be pivotal to a broken relationship many times too difficult to repair. Why not forge a new relationship b/w the two? Yes, people can be JUST friends.
OMG, Bette has to fly back to LA and see Tina and the baby – SHE HAS TO!!!
I want to know what you have planned.
I like long chapters, so i’m not complaining.
Thanks for the post and i’m really looking forward to finding out Bette’s reaction to the baby’s name.
OMG this is going to be good!!!!
And suddenly, Bette breaks into a medly of songs including “Should I stay or should I go?”, “Fooled around and fell in love”, and that old standard “If you can’t be with the one you love, love the one you’re with.” So, Porter, on Helena’s rather hasty departure and Becky’s not as hasty entrance, what’s it going to be?
Hey Bettezilla! get your ass back to LA and be with your wife and daughter…now move! and better make it fast……………..
Can’t wait to see where you take this. And there is no such thing as “Too Long”. Loved this chapter and can’t wait for the next one.
Okay, now that I’ve stopped laughing from slackers comment, I think I agree. Is Bette gonna stay with dee or leave to be with tee.
ok, love long chapters, need Bette to get back there or Tina to go there
I loved it and there is not chapter that is “too long”. Please post soon. I am addicted now.
Ay young, I know this make sound fucked up but… Bette needs to leave Dani’s ass (I dont care how good she’s been), and fly her ass back to LA to fight for her family. And I loved how Tina dropped Helena’s ass (Its about time). LOL, i crack myself up. Great chapter as usual update soon please.
I AM NOT COMPLAINING!!! I love long chapters. This is going to get interesting now that Helena is out of the picture. Can’t wait to see what happens when Bette comes home to see her new daughter. Great chapter, please post soon!!!
The worry about the length of the story as long as it’s good. I can’t wait for Bette’ reaction. Good Job. Thanks for finally get rid of Helena.
I love this story but I do miss “This Should Be Intresting”
Ok, I’m not so happy Bette missed the birth but now all you can do to make up for it is to get her ass back to LA and to here wife!!!!!
Raspberry, your updates are never too long :) Ok, so nows the time for Bette to get her cute ass on the plane back to LA – the sooner the better.