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Love Revisited – Coming Home Part 68
“And that, Bette Porter, is when you come to me and tell me that you’re scared – just like you did tonight. I know this comes as a shock to you, but you’re just a human being like the rest of us.
“No! I want to be Wonder Woman and wear the cape, T.”
Tina smiled. “Yes, I know you do, but give it up, Porter.”
Tina placed her hands on either side of Bette’s face and bent down to kiss the lips on the worried face of her beautiful lover.
Bette could feel her furrowed brow relax.
“What did I do to deserve you?”
“Now, we’re not going to get into that discussion again, are we?”
“No. Ooh, you’re so butch sometimes, Kennard.”
“I’ve got to air out the flannel shirt sometimes, baby. Now, how about we finish our salads, then if you wouldn’t mind, get your daughter ready for sleep, get yourself into some comfy clothes, and I’ll get the salmon cooked and everything else ready out here.”
* * *
By the time they finished dinner evening had settled in. The flame reflected light from the candles danced across the surface of the pool.
The first notes of “After You, Who?” began playing. Bette got up, walked over to Tina, reached out her hand
“Dance with me, T.”
Their bodies close, fitting together as perfectly and naturally as one line of a poem flows to the next, slowly moved to the music
After you, who
Could supply my sky of blue?
After you, who
Could I love?
After you, why
Should I take the time to try,
For who else could qualify
After you, who?
Hold my hand and swear
You’ll never cease to care,
For without you there what could I do?
I could search years
But who else could change my tears
Into laughter after you?
The affective feeling of their cheeks touching and one another’s skin drawing in the sensation of arousal as their ***** pressed together, their thighs and hips swaying and rubbing through the light material of clothes was euphoric. They were two meant to be one. As Shane says, “It’s the way it’s supposed to be.”
Bette’s lips moved to Tina’s ear. “No one will or could ever love you more.” Her warm breath stimulated nerve endings, but the soft, passionate words caused Tina’s eyes to fill.
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“No. Ooh, you’re so butch sometimes, Kennard.”…..“I’ve got to air out the flannel shirt sometimes, baby.
“Je veux vous aimer, je veux vous lécher… Je veux que vous mettiez vos doigts à l’intérieur de moi… Je vous veux tellement.
I don’t know what Bette said, but I’m turned on – (pushing Tina out the way ~ Come Here!)
…and now Tina’s body began its trip into the stratosphere, stopping only long enough to take Bette along with her.
I don’t think Bette is the only one that went along….(QQ @ u horny FF readers)
RC….another fantastic chapter….so HOT I think I broke a tooth!
I am with FIREFLY7 on that.NOW I MUST TAKE AN EARLY LUNCH..THANKS FOR THE GREAT LOVING BETWEEN OUR FAVORITE GIRLS…
wow wow wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
wow wow wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
this sucks too
Simply sublime, rc. Thanks!
OMG! That was fabulous! I was so moved. I feltthe emotion. Thnak you, it was beautiful. Post again soon.
weaved together with the words, “do not speak of parting, your hearts are as one – your love will transcend time.
AHEM!!!!
That was so ******* good…….I think I’ll be reading that a few times…
oh yeah…. WOW… enough said…
I think is the first time I left a comment so first of all what a sweet chapter you sharing with us Thank you I love the hole story .
OH MY GOD!…That was truly BEAUTIFUL!! Damn RC…I’m breathless and speakless. Totally awesome.
snQQpy, dayum girl. i dont know wether to laugh, cry or take a shower.
i guess ill do all three. rc. shit. that was so good. my heart is sooo feeling it. it had everything.
how can I thank you for something so beautiful?
very very romantic and sexy.
That was beautiful and sexy at the same time. I have to admit that is the first time that I’ve read your story. I’m going to go to the beginning and catch up over the weekend.
that was absolutely incredible – I am tearing up as I write this – thankyou
To echo Van — Double WOW !!
That was beautiful :)
One word…..WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!
That was so beautiful :). You captured their love and happiness for each other beautifully.
Absolutely BEAUTIFUL!!!!. more please.
WOWZA…!!!!!!!!!!!
OH MY GOD!!!OMFG!!!!!!!! That Was the Best Love Story I’ve read in a long time and I’ve been reading quite a few of these fan fictions and message board stories lately!!! Were in heavens name did all that come from??? You are indeed a true romantic. You must be a beautiful lover. If you are not taken arc please let me know. I am in awe of you and your writing!!!I am Breathless right now!!!!!!!!!!!
Why Oh Why must I read this stuff at work. Hmmph. Beautiful.
Stunning and beautiful. You have a gift for romance, pleast contiue.
Arce,
What a chapter!
All of the love and lust languishing on the screen.
Bette’s acceptance that she had to open up and let Tina in shows just how much these characters have moved on together.
Then the hotness that was astounding. My screen is still steamed up after that sexy, sensuous and sizzling scene. Bette and Tina united in the most primal and powerful passion moved my world too.
Thank you for this wondrous diversion from all the devious developments.
Awaiting your next post with some moist areas of my own.
Thank you,
Your Loyal Fan.
Exquisite.
OMG…WOW. I can’t find the words…