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Lucky – Chapter 24
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Tina looks down, focusing on the material between her fingers, momentarily amused at Bette’s choice of words. “I want you… to…”
A few moments of silence pass.
“You want me… to…?” Bette asks gently.
“I’m not going to see you for 4 days… I need to see you on me, I need to feel you when I dress, when I sit” Tina almost begins to sob, not able to look her lover in the eye.
Both her and Bette knew that the following week for Tina wasn’t going to be easy. A project that she had been working on was going to take centre stage, which meant a lot of justifying her decisions to senior management, and working rather long hours. It no doubt meant she would have to come into contact with Helena too. Without Bette there to bounce off of in the evenings Tina knew it would be a challenge.
Bette slides down the door, taking Tina onto her lap. She wished she could be there for her girl this week. The brunette knew that one day her partner would be a force to be reckoned with in the work place, but for now Bette was happy to pass on her strength to Tina when she needed it.
“Aww, babe, it’s only for 4 days. We’ll chat on the phone all the time.” Bette caresses Tina’s face, trying to look her in the eye.
“Please? Make me…” Tina whispers.
“Make you…?” Bette repeats as a question.
“Hurt… I love it when you hurt me.” the blonde now sinks her face into Bette’s neck, finding it easier to communicate these thoughts without the brunette seeing her face. She begins to whisper, while clinging on to Bette “whip me, bite me, bruise me, mark me…show me who’s boss”
Tina feels a hand gently taking her hair, pulling her head back. She finds herself starring straight into the deep brown eyes of Bette, losing her composure she looks down, now slightly self-conscious at her admission.
“Look at me” Bette demands. Losing the gentleness she possessed a few moments before.
Tina looks up, the both of them looking into each other’s eyes.
Bette could see such a longing, a deep routed need. She knows that she has such a responsibility to this woman. She knew Tina wanted something intense, and Bette would be lying if she hadn’t fantasized about moments like this many times before. She embraced Tina, gently rocking her for a few moments thinking about the next 36 hours they had before Bette flew to New York. In that moment she decided she would give Tina what she wants, and then tomorrow Tina would just have to accept that Bette was going to spoil her rotten.
“Up” Bette begins to shift.
Tina stands up, seeing Bette’s hand she reaches out and is lead to the bed.
“Lay down, and keep your eyes closed” Bette quietly requests.
Tina obeys, laying back, her world falling into darkness, wondering what would come next.
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Hey, I ran… After running(jogging), I came and read ur story. Cant help it. May be I am not in for BDSM, but ur story is keeping me glued.Read ur PM.
Please come back soon.Great story.
Fab updates, loving it! More soon x
Wondering what’s going to happen next as well. Great story. thank you.
More soon, please!!
So excited to see another post from you so soon, but sad to see the word “hiatus.” I think you’re a unique and intense writer and I have truly enjoyed every chapter. Although the hiatus is well deserved, how long is “little”? I hope it is only as long as Bette’s trip to NYC! You are opening the eyes of many by portraying these two characters as a dedicated and loving couple who understand each other’s basic needs and thrive on them together. Hope you can post again very soon so the hiatus can get started and finished sooner. ;) Thanks for giving us this story. I’ll miss it.
great update. thanks for your note as well. while I have never been into BDSM I can say that after reading this story I understand it more. You couldn’t really depict real love at the beginning because it was too soon. Now that they have established that they have mutual love, desire, respect (ie. the contract)the possibilities are endless. So I hope you come back soon from your hiatus with some more juiciness!
Wow “Hurt … I love it when you hurt me.” “whip me, bite me, bruise me, mark me … show me who’s boss” – and then leave me for 4 days by myself… very interesting.
Hey Bayley, Thank you for two fabulous chapters. Firstly Bette needed some reprimanding to understand Tina’s limits. This was very difficult for our Alpha but necessary.Tina was correct in using this cause to get Bette to fully appreciate her errors.Then having Bette make love to Tina showed hown much their relationship had grown.They are truly a couple.The next chapter had Bette re-establish her dominance over Tina. The use of Tina as a stool was elemental in getting her to accept that she had to do what her Domme wants her to do. Bette kissing Tina’s sore spots was equal reward.Given that they will be apart for several days, I can appreciate Tina’s need to feel her mistress’s presence.There can be a delight in feeling the pain of a previous day’s spanking whenever you sit down. It takes you right back to that instance and all of the emotions it contains. Perhaps Tina needs this type of reminder.I can’t wait to find out what Bette has in store for her sub.Please don’t stay away too long. I miss your wonderful words.Many thanks from Your Loyal Fan and Friend.
A hiatus! What! What will we do with out your regular updates lol… awaiting the next chapter but not the hiatus ;) thanks a bunch for sharing and for giving us something different…
That was good!