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Lucky – Chapter 24
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Tina laughs, “I love being your footrest, but my knees are a bit sore”.
“Awww we’ll have to see to that” Bette says as she begins to move back down the blonde’s body, stopping for a moment looking back up. “You know that you have me totally wrapped around your little finger too right T?”
“Yeah babe, you’re whipped. Now stop talking and get that tongue where it’s needed” Tina said knowing that this was a sure way to get the reaction she wanted.
“Excuse me madam?” Bette says in disbelief.
Tina places her hand on Bette’s head trying to push it towards where she wanted her. Tina suddenly feels a strong hand around her wrist.
“I think someone needs to be put in her place” Bette says as she moves to her feet, grabbing both of Tina’s wrists.
‘She has bitten’ Tina inwardly smiles. “Noooo” Tina moans as her socks slide across the floor, she’s leaning back, but Bette is always far too strong for her. “Beeette” They are both screaming and laughing as Bette struggles to drag Tina to the bedroom.
“My room now” Bette says with authority, as she struggles with a wriggling Tina.
“Noo, please not ‘the room’” Tina moans, knowing that as soon as she crosses that threshold she is Bette’s possession completely – which she obviously loves, but hell they both loved the struggle.
Bette finally makes it to the room, dragging Tina in by her ankle, just when she thinks she has her she loses her footing with all the wriggling, and falls back. Tina takes the opportunity to make a dash for it crawling down the hallway, but Bette is far too quick for her. The brunette is already on her feet, one hand is all it takes to lift Tina up by the back of her jeans, walk back a few steps and drop her triumphantly over the threshold, kicking the door closed. She leans back against the door grinning, arms folded, looking down at the defenseless blonde at her feet.
After a moment of silence Tina whispers, “Bette, please can I ask something of you?” she looks up, while playing with the hem on one of the legs of Bette’s jeans.
“There’s no harm in asking T” Bette smiles.
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Hey, I ran… After running(jogging), I came and read ur story. Cant help it. May be I am not in for BDSM, but ur story is keeping me glued.Read ur PM.
Please come back soon.Great story.
Fab updates, loving it! More soon x
Wondering what’s going to happen next as well. Great story. thank you.
More soon, please!!
So excited to see another post from you so soon, but sad to see the word “hiatus.” I think you’re a unique and intense writer and I have truly enjoyed every chapter. Although the hiatus is well deserved, how long is “little”? I hope it is only as long as Bette’s trip to NYC! You are opening the eyes of many by portraying these two characters as a dedicated and loving couple who understand each other’s basic needs and thrive on them together. Hope you can post again very soon so the hiatus can get started and finished sooner. ;) Thanks for giving us this story. I’ll miss it.
great update. thanks for your note as well. while I have never been into BDSM I can say that after reading this story I understand it more. You couldn’t really depict real love at the beginning because it was too soon. Now that they have established that they have mutual love, desire, respect (ie. the contract)the possibilities are endless. So I hope you come back soon from your hiatus with some more juiciness!
Wow “Hurt … I love it when you hurt me.” “whip me, bite me, bruise me, mark me … show me who’s boss” – and then leave me for 4 days by myself… very interesting.
Hey Bayley, Thank you for two fabulous chapters. Firstly Bette needed some reprimanding to understand Tina’s limits. This was very difficult for our Alpha but necessary.Tina was correct in using this cause to get Bette to fully appreciate her errors.Then having Bette make love to Tina showed hown much their relationship had grown.They are truly a couple.The next chapter had Bette re-establish her dominance over Tina. The use of Tina as a stool was elemental in getting her to accept that she had to do what her Domme wants her to do. Bette kissing Tina’s sore spots was equal reward.Given that they will be apart for several days, I can appreciate Tina’s need to feel her mistress’s presence.There can be a delight in feeling the pain of a previous day’s spanking whenever you sit down. It takes you right back to that instance and all of the emotions it contains. Perhaps Tina needs this type of reminder.I can’t wait to find out what Bette has in store for her sub.Please don’t stay away too long. I miss your wonderful words.Many thanks from Your Loyal Fan and Friend.
A hiatus! What! What will we do with out your regular updates lol… awaiting the next chapter but not the hiatus ;) thanks a bunch for sharing and for giving us something different…
That was good!