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Lucky – Chapter 24
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“Hey, how are you feeling?” Bette asks softly.
“Like a piece of furniture” Tina says sulkily.
Bette begins to chuckle.
“Oh I’m glad you find this funny”, Tina says looking sideways at Bette, pretending to be upset with this situation.
“Well I did warn you T” Bette says raising her eyebrows.
“So can I move now please?”
“You may” Bette grants.
“Thank god” Tina says rolling on to her bum and beginning to massage her red knees. “Look. You are so mean”
“Aww baby” Bette says still finding this all very amusing. “Come here”.
Tina edges forward, feeling very sorry for her self. Bette gently takes Tina’s hands, kissing her red palms. She then slips from the sofa, kneeling down and slowly kisses both of Tina’s knees.
“Bette?” Tina asks after a while of basking in Bette’s more tender side.
“Yes baby?” Bette says looking into Tina’s eyes.
“What do you think people would think of our relationship?” Tina says suddenly slipping into her serious mode. It always made Bette smile that this girl could be so playful in one breath, but so serious and vulnerable in the next.
“I don’t know. And I don’t really care what others think T.” Bette says as she slowly crawls up Tina’s body. Her hands finish either side of Tina’s head as she hovers above her looking down. “What’s brought this on honey?”
“Well I guess, ummmm, you know, you using me as a footrest, and just other things”
Bette laughs. “Well what do you think of it?” Trying her best to be serious with her.
Tina looks up at Bette, unsure of how to voice how she felt. This strong woman above her had in less than a month become the center of her life. She’d never felt so connected with another human being, and she just loved everything she did to her, with her. “It feels right. It’s like you know me better than I know myself. I love everything you do to me.” After some more consideration, “I’m totally yours you know”.
Bette looks down with so much love. ‘She is so adorable at times like these’ Bette thinks. ‘Sometimes she is so strong and independent’, which Bette loves too, but at times like these she just feels like she wants to hold her tightly, and protect her from the world. “So you like being my footrest?” Bette says cheekily.
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Hey, I ran… After running(jogging), I came and read ur story. Cant help it. May be I am not in for BDSM, but ur story is keeping me glued.Read ur PM.
Please come back soon.Great story.
Fab updates, loving it! More soon x
Wondering what’s going to happen next as well. Great story. thank you.
More soon, please!!
So excited to see another post from you so soon, but sad to see the word “hiatus.” I think you’re a unique and intense writer and I have truly enjoyed every chapter. Although the hiatus is well deserved, how long is “little”? I hope it is only as long as Bette’s trip to NYC! You are opening the eyes of many by portraying these two characters as a dedicated and loving couple who understand each other’s basic needs and thrive on them together. Hope you can post again very soon so the hiatus can get started and finished sooner. ;) Thanks for giving us this story. I’ll miss it.
great update. thanks for your note as well. while I have never been into BDSM I can say that after reading this story I understand it more. You couldn’t really depict real love at the beginning because it was too soon. Now that they have established that they have mutual love, desire, respect (ie. the contract)the possibilities are endless. So I hope you come back soon from your hiatus with some more juiciness!
Wow “Hurt … I love it when you hurt me.” “whip me, bite me, bruise me, mark me … show me who’s boss” – and then leave me for 4 days by myself… very interesting.
Hey Bayley, Thank you for two fabulous chapters. Firstly Bette needed some reprimanding to understand Tina’s limits. This was very difficult for our Alpha but necessary.Tina was correct in using this cause to get Bette to fully appreciate her errors.Then having Bette make love to Tina showed hown much their relationship had grown.They are truly a couple.The next chapter had Bette re-establish her dominance over Tina. The use of Tina as a stool was elemental in getting her to accept that she had to do what her Domme wants her to do. Bette kissing Tina’s sore spots was equal reward.Given that they will be apart for several days, I can appreciate Tina’s need to feel her mistress’s presence.There can be a delight in feeling the pain of a previous day’s spanking whenever you sit down. It takes you right back to that instance and all of the emotions it contains. Perhaps Tina needs this type of reminder.I can’t wait to find out what Bette has in store for her sub.Please don’t stay away too long. I miss your wonderful words.Many thanks from Your Loyal Fan and Friend.
A hiatus! What! What will we do with out your regular updates lol… awaiting the next chapter but not the hiatus ;) thanks a bunch for sharing and for giving us something different…
That was good!