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Lucky – Chapter 36 (Final one)
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“Yes that’s right Al, I have her naked and caged in the attic at this very moment.” Bette says dryly.
“You dirty dog, you don’t even have an attic-“
Bette disconnects and rolls her eyes, dropping the phone in her pocket. “Now where was I?” She retreats back upstairs balancing a tray and picking up the bag she had left on the landing. She loved her friend dearly, but sometimes she just did not want Alice on her mind.
She places the bag down reaching for the key to unlock the door in front of her. There was really no need to lock the door, but it just felt so much more evil and realistic to do so.
She stepped through and begun climbing the steps. She dropped the bag to the floor and walked across the room. All the while Tina had sat eyeing her, attempting to radiate distain.
Bette smiled widely at the blonde’s face. Tina knew Bette couldn’t resist her sulky face, but the brunette quickly reminded herself to stay in character. She walks towards the blonde kneeling down in front of her, gently placing down the tray.
The blonde had her knees pulled up to her chin and her arms wrapped around her legs, attempting to cover some of her modesty. Her eyes immediately drop to the tray, and her stomach almost groans as she realizes it’s midday and she’s not eaten anything yet.
Bette is pleased at Tina’s obvious hunger. She takes a celery stick, dips it in hummus and brings it to her own mouth, “Mmmm”.
Tina squints her eyes at Bette’s exaggerated enjoyment.
The cruel brunette then lifts some bruschetta with goat cheese and sun dried tomato to her lips, moaning again. Her eyes focus on the blonde as she sees Tina had lifted her head, swallowing as her eyes focused on the food in Bette’s hand. “Oh I’m sorry are you hungry?”
“Nooo” Tina responded defiantly, though her inner voice was strongly disputing that.
“Shame, this food is just gorgeous. You’re going to be here until Sunday whether you like it or not, so I would eat if I were you. You’re certainly going to need the energy.” Bette finishes, as she continues to pick away at the food, every now and then taking a sip of fruit juice.
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already the end and I just caught up…very close indeed.Thanks
Thank you for the entertainment Bayley. Loved this story with both it’s naughty and loving elements. Good luck with your next endeavor and we look forward to your next story, whenever that may be. :)
That story was just delicious, and very daring, I must say! I enjoyed it, and also the push and pull of Bette and Tina’s relationship in this story. What so many don’t understand is that the game is absolutely imperative for some. It doesn’t shock or scare when done correctly, and the consensual nature of your story makes that very clear. Tina wants and needs that struggle, and Bette needs to give it to her. It’s the perfect balance, and it has made for a lovely story, along with all of the priceless comedy that has made this journey truly unique. Thank you for posting, and good luck on your project. You’ve been brave to share, and I know I’m not alone when I say that I’m glad you did.
Thank You! Thank You! Thank yo! I’m so happy and so sad all at the same time. Happy you posted but sad you r done for now… Wish you luck on your project and hope to see you back here soon… I along with so many have really enjoyed your story and your out of the box take on B&T…Thanks for sharing and looke forward to reading more when you come back to the world of fanfic xox :)
Thank you for this story, it was really enjoyable and funny to read.
i love this story but why you have to finish? please make a sequel!!!!!!
I’ve thoroughly enjoyed every chapter of this story! You have done a tremendous job of maintaining the balance between Bette and Tina. In each chapter, you made it obvious how much they cared for one another. Although I’m sad to see the words final chapter, I wish you well in all your projects and hope one day you will find the time and desire to once again share your writing with us. Thank you so much!
Please continue writing.This story was so much fun.Thank you and good luck.
That was awesome and love it, thanks for sharing this story with us, hope to see you soon with a new happy B&T, Thanks!
Thank you for this story.
I have to admit, your story had me a little freaked out. After reading it through then going back to reread it, I was looking from the wrong angle. Awesome story Bayley! I hope you don’t wait too long to post another great story. You and GR are what’s been missing from the site :)
Hey Bayley, It has been a true pleasure and joy to read and comment on this brilliant adventure. I do hope that you get the time to felsh out a bachlorette celebration for Bette and Tina as well as their weddign and honeymoon delights. Thank you so much for making me smile everytime I saw a new post from you. Your Loyal Fan.
Great naughty story, one of my fav! Sad that it’s over but hope you’ll post something soon;)) Loved how you made them appear regular to the outside world;))