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Lucky – Chapter 36 (Final one)
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Without realizing it Tina had edged closer, now holding on to the bars that separated her from Bette and from making any kind of an escape. Before Bette had left the room 30 minutes beforehand she had enjoyed unlocking the compartment on one side of the birdcage and pushing Tina through it. It was a struggle but the finished result was an erotic site. As Bette had left the room the blonde had stood holding onto the bars shouting obscenities, demanding the brunette let her out instantly. Bette simply walked down the stairs chuckling, telling her the room was sound proofed, so shout away.
Bette finally decided enough was enough. She very kindly lifted a stick of celery and rested it against one of the bars.
Tina starred at it for a moment wondering whether or not to crumble. A rumble of her stomach caused her to give in, she snatched the item instantly taking a bite.
“Anyone would think you haven’t eaten in weeks”, Bette teases.
Tina decides to ignore her. Rather put out that from all of the delicious food on the tray, she was eating a piece of celery, and not even with any hummus on it.
The brunette stands, stretching, satisfied that she had fed her hunger. She looks up to the window, noticing for the first time that day how gorgeous and blue the sky was. Suddenly she catches a bit of movement from the corner of her eye. Looking down she sees an arm stretching through the bars, the celery stick reached out as far as possible, merely inches away from the pot of hummus. She silently laughs, her head dropping forward, as she very cruelly nudges the pot a few inches further away. “What! …do you think you’re doing”
“Fuck” Tina jumps. Retreating back into the cage.
Bette sits back down, dipping her finger into the pot, and reaching it through the bars.
She watches as Tina leans forward, and then quickly raises the celery stick to scoop some.
“Uh uh uhhh” Bette tuts, pulling away her hand. “If you’d like some, you’ll suck it from my finger”.
Tina puffs out. ‘Suck on this’ she thinks as she leans in and seductively places her warm wet lips around Bette’s finger. She begins to suck, locking eyes with the brunette as she moves her head back and forth.
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already the end and I just caught up…very close indeed.Thanks
Thank you for the entertainment Bayley. Loved this story with both it’s naughty and loving elements. Good luck with your next endeavor and we look forward to your next story, whenever that may be. :)
That story was just delicious, and very daring, I must say! I enjoyed it, and also the push and pull of Bette and Tina’s relationship in this story. What so many don’t understand is that the game is absolutely imperative for some. It doesn’t shock or scare when done correctly, and the consensual nature of your story makes that very clear. Tina wants and needs that struggle, and Bette needs to give it to her. It’s the perfect balance, and it has made for a lovely story, along with all of the priceless comedy that has made this journey truly unique. Thank you for posting, and good luck on your project. You’ve been brave to share, and I know I’m not alone when I say that I’m glad you did.
Thank You! Thank You! Thank yo! I’m so happy and so sad all at the same time. Happy you posted but sad you r done for now… Wish you luck on your project and hope to see you back here soon… I along with so many have really enjoyed your story and your out of the box take on B&T…Thanks for sharing and looke forward to reading more when you come back to the world of fanfic xox :)
Thank you for this story, it was really enjoyable and funny to read.
i love this story but why you have to finish? please make a sequel!!!!!!
I’ve thoroughly enjoyed every chapter of this story! You have done a tremendous job of maintaining the balance between Bette and Tina. In each chapter, you made it obvious how much they cared for one another. Although I’m sad to see the words final chapter, I wish you well in all your projects and hope one day you will find the time and desire to once again share your writing with us. Thank you so much!
Please continue writing.This story was so much fun.Thank you and good luck.
That was awesome and love it, thanks for sharing this story with us, hope to see you soon with a new happy B&T, Thanks!
Thank you for this story.
I have to admit, your story had me a little freaked out. After reading it through then going back to reread it, I was looking from the wrong angle. Awesome story Bayley! I hope you don’t wait too long to post another great story. You and GR are what’s been missing from the site :)
Hey Bayley, It has been a true pleasure and joy to read and comment on this brilliant adventure. I do hope that you get the time to felsh out a bachlorette celebration for Bette and Tina as well as their weddign and honeymoon delights. Thank you so much for making me smile everytime I saw a new post from you. Your Loyal Fan.
Great naughty story, one of my fav! Sad that it’s over but hope you’ll post something soon;)) Loved how you made them appear regular to the outside world;))